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Post by Sleazyness on May 6, 2014 14:03:19 GMT -5
I feel that you all have much more lengthy RPs than I do. That is what I think kills me.
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Post by bad guy™ on May 6, 2014 14:09:06 GMT -5
I feel that you all have much more lengthy RPs than I do. That is what I think kills me. You are also just starting out. Give it time. You will get better. |
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Post by Dex on May 6, 2014 14:43:54 GMT -5
I feel that you all have much more lengthy RPs than I do. That is what I think kills me. Quality not quantity. |
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Post by Deep Figure Value on May 6, 2014 14:48:48 GMT -5
Kyle, take a look at my latest snoozefest. Quantity does not always beget quality.
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Post by Deep Figure Value on May 6, 2014 14:52:30 GMT -5
However, all the same, I really thought I backed myself into a corner with this one, but I just came up with a kinda cool way to work off it. It still won't make sense to do what I'd wanted to originally, but you take the lumps I guess. I wrote a real garbage piece during my first run that I was able to pull out of. Why not this one?
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Post by Sleazyness on May 6, 2014 14:58:06 GMT -5
I just finished mine. Anyone willing to look over it and give me some suggestions?
I'm not that much of a reader, SYE. One thing that this board has helped me with is reading more. I will definitely check it out.
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Post by Revvie® on May 6, 2014 16:04:51 GMT -5
I, sadly, have been more busy than I like this week...so will probably just spruce up my rough draft and go with it...I would usually prefer to do one full rewrite, as it is part of my process/ritual....but given all the variables...should be good enough for a intro...if nothing else
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Post by Deep Figure Value on May 7, 2014 8:30:56 GMT -5
Kyle, I'm gonna lay a harsh truth on you - I was never much of a writer until I became a heavy reader. Read everything. Read books, magazines, the newspaper (if your town still has one), short stories, poetry. Read fiction. Read non-fiction. It will help you in all walks of life. It'll help your spelling. It'll help your grammar. It'll improve your vocabulary. It will make you a better writer. I don't even care what level you read at. By the end of second grade, is managed to read Michael Crichton's "Jurassic Park" over the course of something like three days, but my favorite book of all time is a young adult novel that's an easy read that can be done in less than a day.
You ever want some recommendations, give me an idea of what you're into and I'll see what I can come up with.
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Post by Sleazyness on May 7, 2014 14:16:42 GMT -5
Anyone wanna see my RP?
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Post by Dex on May 7, 2014 14:32:23 GMT -5
Or, you know, you could post it.  |
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Post by Sleazyness on May 7, 2014 14:33:12 GMT -5
Or, you know, you could post it. Then I wouldn't be able to edit it. |
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Post by Mr. PerpetuaLynch Motion on May 7, 2014 15:27:21 GMT -5
This week has been stupid with work. I've been working on my RP bit by bit and hope to be finished with it tomorrow or Friday but with a job interview tomorrow it's looking like a completion date of Friday is more likely.
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Post by Ace Bennett on May 7, 2014 16:07:16 GMT -5
Send it my way, I haven't read a ton of your stuff, but I like to think I'm good at helping the newer guys out. |
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Post by Deep Figure Value on May 7, 2014 16:18:59 GMT -5
Send it over Kyle. I'll take a gander tonight.
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Post by Markw on May 7, 2014 17:30:38 GMT -5
First year of University is over for the Summer, I am basically free and can now finally focus on the WFWF properly again.  Edit: Also, based on the similar pose that Squirrel is making, I think it may be a Bolshevik. |
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Post by Prophet of Ash on May 8, 2014 17:31:58 GMT -5
The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo, The Girl who Played with Fire, The Girl Who Kicked The Hornet's Nest
Mad Max, The Road Warrior, Beyond Thunderdome
Night of the Living Dead, Dawn of the Dead, Day of the Dead
The Phillip Schneider interview series joins these as illustrious trilogies. There are some loose ends to tie up, some stories untold, and some things that have happened since my last interview that need addressing. For this one, I'm open to ANY questions submitted to Proggy. We're looking for late Saturday or sometime Sunday to do the interview, so get your questions to him by then.
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Post by Deleted on May 8, 2014 20:17:03 GMT -5
Yeah, send me your questions, and please title them 'Question for Schneider'. It'll help me find them quicker, which will decrease the wait time of the posting of the interview.  |
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Post by Sleazyness on May 9, 2014 14:30:57 GMT -5
Reborn RP posted.
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Post by Dex on May 9, 2014 14:46:46 GMT -5
Just noticed how much longer this RP has been in comparison to my other RP's. Regardless i'm having a tough time writing Montel, really trying to mold an identity for him, but everything I think of just screams generic. Scratch that, just got a brilliant idea.
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Post by RollinsFan44 on May 9, 2014 18:03:16 GMT -5
I'm having real troubles thinking of ideas for my first RP  ! |
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I dont know good luck 
