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Post by Deleted on Mar 8, 2014 19:30:11 GMT -5
Okay. I give up. Webs closed on me so many times leaving my changes unsaved, so without further ado, I present the half-@$$ed version of BDW Episode 2 BDW
Please don't mention the length of the show if you choose to give me some constructive criticism. Since episode 1 was giving people title matches, this one is building feuds. Guess what Webs did? They left in the unfinished matches even though I deleted them and published it. Just ignore the tag tournament matches Enjoy....Webs sucks |
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BDW 3/8/14
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Post by Deleted on Mar 10, 2014 11:22:35 GMT -5
This is literally the worst fed I've ever seen.
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Mar 10, 2014 13:20:33 GMT -5
what the hell? I am soooo confused
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Post by T on Mar 10, 2014 15:29:53 GMT -5
I find your fed strange, Brick, in that I'm totally confused throughout the show, yet it still entertains me. Your commentary is some of the best I've read from a comedy point of view, I just wish that maybe it was all toned a touch, with slightly more focus on delivering good matches and storylines. That said, your fed may lose some of its identity if you did that, so fair enough. As long as it's entertaining, I'll keep on watching! Loved the end segment with Punk!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 10, 2014 18:58:10 GMT -5
Okay first off why oh for the love of god why do you guys no0t hide your tied up part of the ring ropes behind the turnbuckles?  It looks really bad. This show suffered from a few things, like I said before a comedic approach will only get you so far but your posing really lacks a lot and it seems like it didn't get better in this show. I am also massively confused..are you quitting?? Is this your last show??? Hard to get into the action when I don't know if its supposed to be taken seriously or not seriously??? But at least you said you were gonna put out a show and you did just that so you get mad props for that alone. Try to do at least one more show and tighten up your posing a little lets see what you can do when you put your mind to it. And yes Webs sucks I use it for my stuff and its extremely frustrating to use. |
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Post by Wicked on Mar 10, 2014 21:16:18 GMT -5
I appreciate the comedy and laughed at a couple of the jokes. This was an alright show for what it is. I am not going to be to harsh under the circumstance of what your fed is. The posing is really stiff and it seems like you have a lot of pictures missing here. Anyways just try to work on posing. I am excited to see the next one.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 10, 2014 21:27:56 GMT -5
I'm not quitting, I'm just done with Webs.
Worst fed ever? That's pretty harsh.
Here is my take on the problems in this show:
Christian vs Regal was a feud starting joke that would have been perfectly fine if I would have put the show out with the 3 extra matches. I wasn't counting it as a match until the very end.
I honestly did not think Ziggler vs Sheamus was bad, and if Webs didn't erase the promo I typed before it, it would've made more sense. I don't write anything beforehand except matches. I don't do well when I'm thinking of jokes instead of typing them on the spot.
Sandman vs Stevie vs Mick was an okay match in my opinion, I just didn't think the end was that good in hindsight.
I can understand people disliking how the show ended. I'll be sure to put up a complete and a much better show next month. Heck, I'll probably upload the main event in a week or two.
TL;DR
Was the Ziggler vs Sheamus match that awful?
Will be uploading the main event
Next month will be A LOT better
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Post by Wicked on Mar 10, 2014 21:31:08 GMT -5
I didn't think it was that bad. Just work on posing. As for Andy Conda calling it the worst fed, I think that is really harsh. Come on @static at least give him room to grow or some sort of constructive criticism instead of totally putting it down. Just work on Posing @brickandyozen .
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Post by Deleted on Mar 10, 2014 21:36:43 GMT -5
I also think that was a bit harsh to say worst fed ever Andy Conda. I have seen far worse on here before. That being said maybe you should of worked out all the kinks before posting what you say is an incomplete show at the very least. Besides working on the basics to improve you need to have all the technical aspects together before launching a show it makes it more enjoyable to watch for the viewer. But this being what your second show??? lets see if you can improve and build upon this, try to move forward not backwards with your next show.
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Post by deskjet on Mar 10, 2014 22:21:01 GMT -5
I liked the first series of matches, then it seemed you went to a new arena? Didnt care too much for the garbage can/trash bag background or Tommy dreamer sitting on the tomatoes in the beginning, although it did make me lol. I like the weird group that came after punk. The commentary was all over the place though. Yea, I'm not sure how to reply to this. Is it supposed to be funny or is it that you just had so many issue that it came across so disjointed? Ah Well, always room for improvement:)
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Post by Deleted on Mar 24, 2014 13:21:09 GMT -5
That was absolutely insane! Looking forward to your next one!
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