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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2014 13:09:50 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2014 14:08:58 GMT -5
Oh man that's too bad isn't there anyway to get it up to view any other way? ?
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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2014 14:31:31 GMT -5
Oh man that's too bad isn't there anyway to get it up to view any other way? ? I've had a brain wave, give me a few hours and I'll let you all know. UPDATE: That idea was a bust I'm afraid. :/
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Post by Funk The Revival on Jun 8, 2014 14:47:43 GMT -5
Really good episode. Some of the close up shots were strange but funny, posing was nice and the matches were entertaining. Looking forward to seeing what happens with Hart and Flair. Like how you have 1 impartial commentator calling the matches. Reading heel commentary or duos commentating can get annoying. Bring on episode 2!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2014 15:03:43 GMT -5
Thanks very much Funk The Revival! I'm glad you enjoyed it The next time you'll see ASW will be Freedomania as Episode 2 would spoil the result of the Hardcore Invitational. Episode 2 won't be far behind though.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2014 16:00:51 GMT -5
Not bad.
Arena: The only thing I can tell you to do is get a bigger ring. There is an RSR on another site for like 60 dollars. Maybe invest in it if you have the money and room for it. Maybe work on your lighting a little bit too. When I get my table set back up ill try and take pictures of how everything is set up in my room.
Pics: Some poses were off, like the suplex. Maybe try and make the matches just a little big longer. Also, for handshakes and tags you can film them from a distance like everything else. Just make sure your action is in the middle of the picture. If that makes any sense at all. Has for your suplex, watch how they do it. Elites are great because you can pose them exactly how they do it.
I know you talked about how you upload your show. I would suggest either proboards or youtube. You can do voice commentary and text on the pictures of the wrestler promos. That is the only thing I can come up with. I am sure you are going to improve over time, because this was a fantastic first effort from a newbie fedder.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2014 17:45:22 GMT -5
I've started uploading the show to Proboards. I'm done for tonight though, so I'll finish it off it tomorrow and post it here. Thanks to everyone who's viewed it so far. @static - I'm sorry, but I won't be changing my ring again. The one I used before was the Mattel Basic Ring (12x12) and this one is a custom built one (15x15) Thanks for watching the show and taking the time to reply
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Post by Wicked on Jun 8, 2014 22:30:43 GMT -5
Unfortunately I can't view it due to my computer. I am sorry.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2014 4:53:26 GMT -5
Unfortunately I can't view it due to my computer. I am sorry. It'll be up on Proboards soon, so hopefully you'll be able to view it then Good luck for your exams by the way!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2014 9:06:38 GMT -5
Ok I'm not a fan of the rsr as it's to big. The rsr should be 16x16 or 18x18. I think your ring is a good size. Man I miss monsoon, nice job on him. Posing is pretty good. Nice way to start the show with Andre
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2014 9:45:04 GMT -5
Thanks @heartbreakman, I'm glad you liked it I agree with you about the RSR, it's far too big for Fedding.
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Jun 9, 2014 10:41:29 GMT -5
Love the new ring, so much better than the basic
Your poses are better than last time, still a few stiff ones here and there, but overall much improved
I like the classic fed feel, keep that up
You are doing a real good job of devolving stories, and I am excited to see where this leads
I would love to see a second member on commentary, I think two man booths give you a lot of possibilities, so it's something to consider
Can't wait for more! Keep it up!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2014 12:02:53 GMT -5
Hey hey hey nice show!!!!
Glad to see a new, classic fed up I like your arena and presentation. The posing needs to be worked on a little but you are new to this and I am sure you will progress as time goes by.
That being said I loved the matches, Demolition vs rockers, Deisel vs DDP really had a great classic fed feel and I love the action throughout the show. I liked that close up too of the tag in th eRockers match a lot of people should do that more.
Congratulations lets see what you can do for episode 2!!!!
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Post by deskjet on Jun 10, 2014 21:41:39 GMT -5
Very good opening match between Rockers and Demolition. Entertaining. Hardcore invitiational sounds interesting. Really enjoying the mix of different era's of legends integrated into this fed. Especially a fan of DDP and Diesel:). Overall, the show was well paced, moved by quickly and was entertaining. Maybe a few backstage segments to add to storylines. Other than that, a solid first show and looking forward to the next one. Keep up the good work:)
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Post by Deleted on Jun 10, 2014 23:57:51 GMT -5
I've been dying to see your show ever since, what was it? Whatever the last joint ppv was called. Let's get started! There's not too many old school feds out there. Aight, Mach is coming out. The speech was nice, although I was expecting a little more "OOH YEAH!". First segment was pretty cool. I'd suggest adding another member to commentary. Anywho, time for Rockers/Demolition.. God.. Janetty's getting squashed in there. I'd complain about it kinda being a squash but what can I expect with Demolition and the Rockers? That was a squash, however that's a given since a lot of matches back in the day were squashes. It was also pretty short, but once again that's a given. If I'm wrong and it wasn't supposed to be short, then let me know. Yay, Cactus! "I'm not usually one to come out here and put a microphone in my hand and do a lot of talking"... What are you talking about? Cactus talks all the time! Well, in ECW. If you're going by WWE standards then it's just Mick, Mankind, and Dude Love that talk alot. I feel he wasn't really talking like Mick. In my head I can hear Monsoon do the commentary, and I could hear Macho Man cutting his promo, but I simply cannot imagine Mick talking like this. You started off decently with the whole "A vision" thing but then it just turned to an announcer describing the rules of a match. I'll stop nitpicking now, as we head towards the next match, Papa Shango vs Daniel Bryan.. Or not, apparently this is Kit Richards. I'm not sure if he's a real person or made up but I won't judge. Oh.. I see what you were going for. Papa Shango came out and squashed a jobber. Okay. And Boss Man assaults Shango.. I don't remember a previous confrontation but they probably had one on your "Today" thing I haven't read yet. Nice to see DDP getting some use. Okay, even if this is supposed to be an old school fed, the matches should be a little longer. I also noticed that in no time, DDP had diamond cuttered someone. Same with Sid and the powerbomb. Usually you don't get a few minutes into a match and already do a finisher. Back in the day, at least what I thought, finishers were big and signaled the end of the match. Unless you were Hulkster, of course. Maybe work on having the matches be a little longer, but it's not bad to keep the squashes. Flair vs Hitman? Should be good. Wait... over already? I suggest if you're going to keep doing the squashes (which is perfectly fine) add more matches.
So pros? Good pics Good setup Good commentary Good poses
Cons? Lack of matches, if two out of the, how many were there? 4 matches? are gonna be squashes, have more matches. Match length: If you intended to have the matches be short, then have more of them. Match structure: The third move Sid did the whole match was his finisher. If you're doing the old school wrestling thing, then you should probably take longer for the wrestler to hit their finisher because usually back then, the finisher was the end of the match. Oh and Cactus didn't sound a thing like Cactus, and Mach didn't sound like he was really high and out there, but who knows, maybe I'm wrong about the way Cactus and Macho cut promos.
Overall? It was ok. It was great compared to the rest of us, but in all honesty, it was ok. And even if this was awful, which it wasn't... Nothing can be worse then BDW.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2014 5:12:59 GMT -5
@brickandyozen - I agree with you. My matches do need to be a bit longer, but that's something that I can work on and a few more matches wouldn't hurt, you're right about that. Demolition vs Rockers was meant to be a squash, and Kit Richards is just a jobber. Both of those matches were used as part of storylines that were started on my previous show. On a side note, I haven't had the chance to view Choking Hazard yet, but I will do so soon and leave you a reply. If I haven't done so by next week, just drop me a PM to remind me.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 15, 2014 12:13:57 GMT -5
That was Fantastic, already hooked! The Hardcore invitational match sounds like a really good idea, just a thought maybe you could suspend three different briefcases over the ring so the competitors can hesitate on which one to go for and would make for some really interesting spots! Keep up the good work
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Post by Wicked on Jun 16, 2014 16:56:36 GMT -5
Review time. I will edit this. EDIT: I liked this show. I thought you improved. The camera works seems to be a bit better, however I still advise you to maybe make a bigger camera angle instead of figures being cut off in pictures. Posing was ok, but can still use some improvements, maybe watch the move on youtube then replicate it, and try to bend the joints a bit more. I liked the commentary. Good show buddy. Just try to work on posing. -The opening was sweet. Loved the Macho Andre feud already. I love how he just pulled Savage down. Andre looks great. -Demolition vs. The Rockers was a nice little match. Posing could be improved some of it was really stiff. Demolition looked strong. -Jack's promo was cool. - Shango looked strong, and the feud with Bossman looks good. Maybe next time you use a jobber change the head on it. It just looks like Bryan, it's not that hard to put a random head on that figure. - DDP seems too be a cool face. This match was ok, just work on not having as stiff posing. Maybe work on your Sid Justice too, it seems to be chipping. -The end of the show was awesome. I dig the whole Flair feud. I dig Heenan as a manager. Good show buddy. Just work on what I have said. Good job.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 17, 2014 4:35:48 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply Wicked! Really appreciate it.
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Post by fallbrawl on Jun 18, 2014 17:34:56 GMT -5
I love the show man. This will be a fig fed that i watch all the time. I love seeing classic wrestlers.
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