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Post by Deleted on Jun 11, 2014 20:16:47 GMT -5
i.imgur.com/CJsB6sA.gif (Please Note I Did Not Create Any Of The Used Resources Except The Ring Apron Logo) My First Post On Here!
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Jun 16, 2014 16:14:05 GMT -5
Welcome to SBFL pecwrestling, thanks for stopping in. I will be the one moderating this pub we have here so feel free to relax, grab a drink and have fun if you wish. With that said, I would like to briefly introduce myself, my name is "Metal Sorenges" some in fact like to refer to me as 'Mac' so feel comfortable using either name for reference. If you have any questions, feel free to drop me a pm or slide a post in the chat thread, whichever you prefer. Take care and I hope to see more animations from you in the near future.
The animation itself was decent. At the beginning, the should be an equilibrium of easing and spacing, looking into the initial squat, you didn't quite use enough frames to portray the movements fluently, next time be sure to slowly progress forward into the ani by a consistent level of transition, think of it like a picture book, if one picture does follow-up with the next sequences of pages, the book wouldn't have a clear central direction.
The springboard onto the middle rope also had the same issue, it could've used more frames throughout, it was also a bit stiff so be sure to keep that in mind and avoid this as much as possible. How the stick reached the rope was a little strange, it was somewhat fidgety as some frames didn't quite match in par with the others, it was stiff which essentially can be improved on and it need alot more frames as well.The moonsault wasn't half bad, but again, the spacing in mid air was a little faulty and it could have used a few more frames during the transition.
The impact was alright, but the reaction seemed a little early. This was ok, but be sure to utilize your joints and frames as best as you can and you'll see drastic improvement over time.
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