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Post by Deleted on Jan 17, 2015 22:03:50 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jan 18, 2015 4:40:49 GMT -5
Plus PointsReally good articulate move sets and animations. Nice variety of characters.  95% of the shots are good/clear Suggestions
Idk, but i thought sound might be needed? either some music to set atmosphere or Get crowd effects and fighting/punching effects download them for free from youtube effects. use captions to set a story or to narrate and present the show, split your matches into 4 parts of around 6 mins, so that if you have 25+ minutes show it equates to about 25 minutes just split it up so it's not as drawn out. Some of the action shots are either too close or too out of focus. Take a little more time and check the shots. Your camera seems well capable because 95% of the shots are great, just a little more care on the shots would end in a better Polished product. Overall I like what you're doing here, but with little narration or plotline as to why they are fighting or without any intros to the guys it is let down a little by lack of atmosphere?
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Post by T on Jan 18, 2015 5:34:54 GMT -5
-The action in the first match was hard to see sometimes due to the black ring mat and all three fighters wearing black. Better lighting would have helped
-That said, I liked the use of the chain, and that RSC ladder is so cool. Loved the spot that ended the match with the Curb Stomp
-Little bits like Punk taking off his jacket after getting tagged in really add to a fed
-The tag match was good, but it was a strange mix of competitors. Not sure if I'm fully up to date on how they all came together
-Cena/Lesnar had some great hardcore brawling
-HBK/Benoit was steady. Again, I liked the finish
-Angle/SCSA had some good back and forth action and it surprised me that Angle won
-Main event was chaotic as well, and I'm fine with Orton winning
Pretty good show overall. The lack of sound was strange, although it's probably better than some terrible screaming music that doesn't rock everyone's boat. I'd like to see some shots done more at ring level, rather than looking down all the time. I understand that's tricky if you're filming on the floor. Maybe a tripod would help. The lighting could be consistent too, and it would have been helpful for you to include a match card for the PPV with a bit of background on how and why they're fighting. All things that you could easily develop to improve your fed though. Nice work!
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Post by attitudesback on Jan 18, 2015 8:34:36 GMT -5
I mainly agree with T here. The show was good and it did have some nice spots in there, great opening match. Some of the poses were a little bit off and coupled with some blurry shots it didn't really help. No sound was a positive and a negative really, some crowd, maybe commentary would've completed the package here. The action was great, plenty of cool moves in there. Some storylines behind why they fight would help, but the tag entrance was shot well, it allowed for multiple guys to make an entrance without too many shots being used. The booking seemed really solid. Lots of great superstars used, but without plot-lines it's hard to understand why they are being used. Easy fixes and this is going to be a really, really good fed.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 18, 2015 11:44:46 GMT -5
Thanks guys for your feedback. To respond to all your feedback, since I don't want to triple post.
The lighting will improve it's just a lot people didn't want me to use flash again. But I feel it is getting in the way of the quality. So the lighting will be improved.
I'll try to what I could do about the angles where the match is being shot.
Music wise,I stop for little because Youtube was becoming '"Copyright Nazi''. I am pretty rare among Youtube feds I don't like screamo music. Typically what you would hear in my fed would be Metallica,Iron Maiden,Megadeth.Nirvana,Pearl Jam,Guns N Roses,etc. I quite possibly will add back in music next show.
The plot I agree with all of you. If your not watching EWE weekly programing you don't understand what's behind all of this. So I may add in Promo's or on match cards I'd fill you in with backstory. Or post results of EWE weekly programming in quick little text summary.
I am really glad you all enjoyed it. And thanks for the feedback it always means a lot.
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Jan 21, 2015 18:07:26 GMT -5
Poses were pretty good, the lack of music didnt bother me as i usually mute it when it has music.
I agree that some promos or something would help
Keep ot up!
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