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Post by Deleted on Jan 21, 2015 16:50:47 GMT -5
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Post by juaumguterres on Jan 21, 2015 18:46:38 GMT -5
Love your background pictures, very original! Love Peter Parker's couches too!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 21, 2015 18:51:59 GMT -5
This was really great!!!! Nice use of backgrounds and miniature furniture. Wonderful action sequences with some really great posing. I was drawn into the story a lot. I would like to see some other spiderman characters from the marvel universe as you progress your storyline. Congrats on your first episode!
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Jan 21, 2015 18:57:32 GMT -5
This was good, the poses were good, you started a good story, the backgrounds were a little rough.
i liked that you had spidey telling jokes, felt the comics
Looking forward to your next episode
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Post by attitudesback on Jan 21, 2015 18:59:09 GMT -5
Thought I commented! This was very very good. The poses and storyline looks great. The furniture is really cool. Those spidey figs actually look really good. I would say get bigger printouts so it looks more genuine in the way we cant see the edges of the paper. Apart from that congrats!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 21, 2015 19:13:57 GMT -5
This was awesome the fight scences and poses were insanely awesome
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2015 8:55:52 GMT -5
Thanks for all the great feedback guys, I'm really hyped that you liked it, I'm trying to look into either getting better printouts or playset parts to build a city. It'sd expensive as hell to do so though, it could take a good amount of time. Should be filming episode 2 soon, really glad everyone has liked it so far
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2015 11:11:55 GMT -5
OK, first off, I'm not a Spider Man fan. I decided, however, that I would watch your show and leave you a reply. I thought the story was quite good, and really does draw you in from the start. The posing was EXCELLENT. Absolutely fantastic, no improvements to be made on that whatsoever. Great job!
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Post by T on Jan 22, 2015 14:52:47 GMT -5
So, so innovative! Really enjoyed it. Your settings definitely worked, even if they were printouts. Love the lab at the start and the way you created all that. The poses in the fight scene were great too. Would definitely like to see more, and it can only get better as you expand the settings.
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Post by RWF on Jan 22, 2015 19:46:47 GMT -5
I can definitely tell you're a Spider-man fan. Everything was pretty solid, liked the web effects. Great posing.
Main issues for me, were out of focus pics.
Also, the background were innovative, but had the pics been trimmed just a bit on each side, we wouldn't have seen the fact that they were print outs. The black bordering area sort of revealed it. So maybe crop it next time?
Neat first effort, though!
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