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Post by Paige_Turner1996 on Jan 23, 2015 17:20:12 GMT -5
Hope you guys enjoy my second episode of T.D.W. Subscribe comment and thumbs up. INSTAGRAM: TotalDivasWrestling
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Post by attitudesback on Jan 24, 2015 10:52:06 GMT -5
The flashback was ok. The text moved along too quickly to really read what was going on, so it would be worth extending those frames so we can read it. The use of entrance music is a good touch. The announcer reading her name was really nice as well. Some of these poses are quite stiff The ref counting is a nice touch as well. Why is there so many pin attempts? Backstage elements are good, but the text is too fast to read what is going on Show felt a little short. Only 2 matches. It was an improvement from the first one, but if you worked on the speed of the text and some of the poses, along with the length of the show you are definitely on to something. At times it feels like it's not enough shots for a stop motion and too many for a pic fed. This is interesting, but I think if you really stick at it it's going to be a brilliant show.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 26, 2015 14:18:52 GMT -5
I really like this fed, something different and unique with just Diva's. I love the almost stop motion pic taking and I really like how you use a crowd noise and entrance music intro's instead of just the usual horrendous choice of music most Youtube fedders use. Nifty entranceway and nice arena setup. I did feel it was a good length and I felt some of the posing was a little stiff but it didn't take away from my enjoyment of this fed. Please keep this going its a great addition to the board and something I think compliments the board with its originality and unique vibe.
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