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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2015 13:21:39 GMT -5
I really like you arena. You have a good set up. Like WFW you have a great foundation to have a great fed. You advanced your storylines nicely. However, you are lacking transitional pictures as well as bending the joints. Are you using string at all? That Rowan figure looks like its a pain in the ass to film with man. Your commentatry is on point. Just remember to bend the joints and start using string if you're not.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2015 13:35:54 GMT -5
I really like you arena. You have a good set up. Like WFW you have a great foundation to have a great fed. You advanced your storylines nicely. However, you are lacking transitional pictures as well as bending the joints. Are you using string at all? That Rowan figure looks like its a pain in the ass to film with man. Your commentatry is on point. Just remember to bend the joints and start using string if you're not. Unfortunately, I'm not using string. The reason being that I have to pack everything away after filming, so I haven't got a string rig set up at the moment. Rowan was quite difficult to film with, but I made the best of a bad situation, I think. |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2015 13:55:03 GMT -5
I really like you arena. You have a good set up. Like WFW you have a great foundation to have a great fed. You advanced your storylines nicely. However, you are lacking transitional pictures as well as bending the joints. Are you using string at all? That Rowan figure looks like its a pain in the ass to film with man. Your commentatry is on point. Just remember to bend the joints and start using string if you're not. Unfortunately, I'm not using string. The reason being that I have to pack everything away after filming, so I haven't got a string rig set up at the moment. Rowan was quite difficult to film with, but I made the best of a bad situation, I think. I think so too honestly. As for the string.. you dont need a "setup" persae. It helps though. |
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Post by Wicked on Feb 10, 2015 20:12:05 GMT -5
I really like you arena. You have a good set up. Like WFW you have a great foundation to have a great fed. You advanced your storylines nicely. However, you are lacking transitional pictures as well as bending the joints. Are you using string at all? That Rowan figure looks like its a pain in the ass to film with man. Your commentatry is on point. Just remember to bend the joints and start using string if you're not. Unfortunately, I'm not using string. The reason being that I have to pack everything away after filming, so I haven't got a string rig set up at the moment. Rowan was quite difficult to film with, but I made the best of a bad situation, I think. I just use one peice of big string tied together in a big circle... |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 11, 2015 8:12:20 GMT -5
Unfortunately, I'm not using string. The reason being that I have to pack everything away after filming, so I haven't got a string rig set up at the moment. Rowan was quite difficult to film with, but I made the best of a bad situation, I think. I just use one peice of big string tied together in a big circle... I need a rig because of my shoulders. They're pretty f'd up to be honest. |
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Post by Ramos on Feb 13, 2015 9:49:04 GMT -5
This is a decent start for a fed, there are some bright points for sure. Your arena is clean and works very well. Your commentary is decent, it could do with some work, but that will come as you put out more episodes and grow in to writing for different characters. Having the promos on the side of the ring is a little weird to me, but to each their own. If you can make it work effectively it could become something you're known for.
The poses are quite stiff and the match pacing is a little off. However, you've got some good stuff going for you and I'm looking forward to seeing you improve.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 13, 2015 17:20:50 GMT -5
This is a decent start for a fed, there are some bright points for sure. Your arena is clean and works very well. Your commentary is decent, it could do with some work, but that will come as you put out more episodes and grow in to writing for different characters. Having the promos on the side of the ring is a little weird to me, but to each their own. If you can make it work effectively it could become something you're known for. The poses are quite stiff and the match pacing is a little off. However, you've got some good stuff going for you and I'm looking forward to seeing you improve. Thanks for the feedback! Episode 2 will be much better, stay tuned! |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 16, 2015 11:43:27 GMT -5
A very enjoyable solid show all round buddy!
I liked the opener between Axel and Riley, best match of the show for me. I particularly liked the poses on Riley's rooe guillotine and the twisting vertical. 2 unconventional choices for your undercard but you did well here! Definately a match fitting of the nod of mutual respect at the end.
As for Goldust vs Rowan, you did the best you could man! That Rowan figure straight up sucks to pose with (as you'll soon see from myself), but you did good! Nice to see Goldust use the cross roads!
And a solid main event! Again, unconventional choice as a face champion but stick with Del Rio in this kinda role man, I dig it! I feel itll help your fed stand out and establish itself as long as you put in the work to put Alberto over as a credible face!
Overall I liked the show dude! Your set up is classy and professional looking, your arena could probably benefit from a bit more space but it's not essential. Great job kicking off a main event feud which I look forward to seeing develop! If I could give any pointers, perhaps work on your camera angles. Your posing/ring angles with figures are already quite good, so finding the right camera angle to really help your poses pop will only polish it further. Great effort man!!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 16, 2015 12:29:48 GMT -5
Thanks @pooky! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! Keep your eye on Riley, there's much more to come from him. Episode 2 should be up this weekend, so stay tuned!  |
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Post by Juicedmachine on Feb 19, 2015 9:16:30 GMT -5
Only complaint is that they are basics. I feel the elites give you so many more options. Either way, I will continue to follow.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 20, 2015 0:08:38 GMT -5
I just watched GWA Main Event episode 1 Here is what i thought: liked:
Using characters not commonly used before (A-Ry + Axel) as the show opener Nice variety of wrestling manoevures and holds (German Suplex + Submissions) Using crowd backgrounds Nice spacious ring to work in Good selection of ME Del Rio Vs HHH for title Disliked:
No backstage segments (easily worked on in future episodes) Some shots were blurry and seemed rushed No background or development to explain the Rowan vs Goldust match Summary
A solid first show, there are many feds right now not using a background (the main argument is that you can tell anyway it's a printed background so what's the point?) the point is it shows effort and adds color and i like that you've given some attempt to add color to your fed. So well done  Both the lack of backstage segment and shots being blurry can be worked on over future episodes, are you finding that you are limited in time per production of each match? I think a good idea would be write down each match for the next show and script it as you would a play or theater, number your move set and before the match begins write a small background on who they are and why they are fighting (this helps with commentary as well as developing feuds, are they fighting just for singles competition, are they fighting because they want to get into contention? the Triple H Match and the opening show was explained but there was no explanation as to why Rowan was going up against Goldust. As for the blurry shots take a short break in between filming shots for each match and if you have a digital camera flip to the viewer in between matches to see if you got a good shot on all of them. I usually get my shots close to great 97% of the time and need to go back and retake a couple. I'm looking forward to your next show to see if you listen to the feedback and address what for me a minor issues, you have the beginning of a nice fed and with a little more effort on production you'll be pulling in viewers time and time again, lots of potential here! RAW |
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