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Post by Deleted on Jan 29, 2015 15:01:51 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Jan 29, 2015 15:21:23 GMT -5
Pf is was excellent . I really enjoyed thre flow of the show. It wasnt too short or too long perfect length !
How did the length of the show work for you?
I enjoyed the commentary and the poses really well done. Great show great return
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Post by attitudesback on Jan 29, 2015 17:15:01 GMT -5
Really liked this. No real negatives apart from some real stiff posing. The rumble ending was a bit of a let down, otherwise a solid match there. Daniel Bryan just snaps out of the F-5? I had that problem with my show, but it's not going to be happening in a genuine match. I thought there was a solid card, the arena was sweet and commentary was pretty good. Nice!
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Post by T on Jan 29, 2015 17:52:34 GMT -5
Welcome back, Pooks!
-Like the simplicity of the arena and an interesting combo for the announcers -Mixture of good poses, e.g. Superman Punch and German Suplex, and then a couple of stiff ones in the opener -Nice match in the end with a bit of chaos. Wasn't a fan of some of the camera angles, however -Liking the pairing of JBL and Zeb -Steamboat/Savage was short, but for a good reason. Pretty funny ending to that one -The ring got very busy for the Battle Royal, but some fun spots in there -An Angle/Punk feud in the making it seems -Bryan getting up from the F5 seemed strange when you built up Lesnar to be so dominant
Enjoyable opening show. A solid length to it, and one that I prefer. From the participants in the BR, it looks like you've got a solid roster with a mix of old and new. Looking forward to future efforts.
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Post by Wicked on Jan 29, 2015 22:13:53 GMT -5
Welcome back Pookie. Great to see you back. This show was awesome. I really like the mix of the roster. The battle royal was awesome. Loved the handicap match. This whole show was great. My only advice is too work on your posing and try to make you shots a bit more clear and less shaky. As for posing I am sure it's you just getting used to mattels. Good show. Good job and Welcome back. Can't wait for the next one.
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Jan 29, 2015 22:25:09 GMT -5
So awesome to see you back
Good little start to your fed, i like the mix of stars
Really thought ceasaro would win the main event. Interested to see where you go with him and barrett
Zeb getting blown up was awesome
I do feel like the ring is kinda small
Cant wait for episode 2!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 29, 2015 22:50:04 GMT -5
New fed? K then. I highly suggest not using Webs...did not work out for me in the past. Liking the commentary. Not sure you can do too well with all basics in this first match but eh. Angle just got hit with a superman punch. How does he have Rollins in a belly-to-belly hold after getting hit with a superman punch? Angle slam? What's pacing? And a spear after he gets hit with an angle slam. Oh wait, reigns got out of it. It's clear that this isn't the finish of the match, so the abundance of finishers plus reversed finishers is really bugging me. And a curb stomp... And Punk kicks out of a powerbomb following a curb stomp. One positive thing I can say is some of the shots you're taking do a good job of hiding the limited poseability, like Punk's kick to Roman. You see, doing the superman punch late into the match makes sense. Doing it within the first minute or so in pic fed time, doesn't. And another curb stomp. You really need to work on pacing. Not sure about the tag team of Punk and Angle. Good segment with Colter and JBL. Barrett being in the match was a kind of good idea, though I feel it should've happened at the beginning. Just really interrupted the otherwise decent flow of the match. Shield segment was good. Battle royal is decent so far, seems to be going a little too fast though.Brogue kick? Meh. Think there should've been at least one elimination by now, considering the relatively fast pace the match is going, and how the ring's a bit small. You're making it work, though. Not a big fan of the shield coming in to assault Angle and Punk. Not a big fan of them coming in at all, seeing as they had a rather lengthy match and should be too tired to compete, much less attempt to win a battle royal. I mean, I get the story here, but if you were going for that, maybe it should happen on a different show. This battle royal, beyond that, has turned out to be pretty good. Good match.
I'm not sure what I think about your fed. You've got a good enough amount of story development, a decent enough arena...then on the flip side, posing leaves a lot to be desired. There's only so good you can get with mostly basics, but you're not taking full advantage of them. Pacing in certain matches is way off. And the last problem, which is completely personal preference, is your roster, all current wwe with 5 or 6 legends and CM Punk. There's no problem with that, I just don't care for mostly WWE rosters. I'll keep watching, so I can help you improve though.
Overall? Good first effort. Lots of room for improvement though.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 30, 2015 14:23:45 GMT -5
New fed? K then. I highly suggest not using Webs...did not work out for me in the past. Liking the commentary. Not sure you can do too well with all basics in this first match but eh. Angle just got hit with a superman punch. How does he have Rollins in a belly-to-belly hold after getting hit with a superman punch? Angle slam? What's pacing? And a spear after he gets hit with an angle slam. Oh wait, reigns got out of it. It's clear that this isn't the finish of the match, so the abundance of finishers plus reversed finishers is really bugging me. And a curb stomp... And Punk kicks out of a powerbomb following a curb stomp. One positive thing I can say is some of the shots you're taking do a good job of hiding the limited poseability, like Punk's kick to Roman. You see, doing the superman punch late into the match makes sense. Doing it within the first minute or so in pic fed time, doesn't. And another curb stomp. You really need to work on pacing. Not sure about the tag team of Punk and Angle. Good segment with Colter and JBL. Barrett being in the match was a kind of good idea, though I feel it should've happened at the beginning. Just really interrupted the otherwise decent flow of the match. Shield segment was good. Battle royal is decent so far, seems to be going a little too fast though.Brogue kick? Meh. Think there should've been at least one elimination by now, considering the relatively fast pace the match is going, and how the ring's a bit small. You're making it work, though. Not a big fan of the shield coming in to assault Angle and Punk. Not a big fan of them coming in at all, seeing as they had a rather lengthy match and should be too tired to compete, much less attempt to win a battle royal. I mean, I get the story here, but if you were going for that, maybe it should happen on a different show. This battle royal, beyond that, has turned out to be pretty good. Good match. I'm not sure what I think about your fed. You've got a good enough amount of story development, a decent enough arena...then on the flip side, posing leaves a lot to be desired. There's only so good you can get with mostly basics, but you're not taking full advantage of them. Pacing in certain matches is way off. And the last problem, which is completely personal preference, is your roster, all current wwe with 5 or 6 legends and CM Punk. There's no problem with that, I just don't care for mostly WWE rosters. I'll keep watching, so I can help you improve though. Overall? Good first effort. Lots of room for improvement though. Appreciate the feedback. You'll see some poses notibally improve in the coming episodes I assure you, as new figures are introduced, as well as an improvement in the flow of matches which aren't battle royals. The season premiere certianly isn't my favourite episode retrospectively but I feel the show still turned out solid enough to lay some foundations for the coming weeks, and I feel it's relevance will be more apparent to everybody as the series progresses. The same applies to the roster choice. I'm grateful for the support but I won't require any 'help' other than the feedback I've been receiving. So thank you all, keep it coming!
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Post by juaumguterres on Jan 30, 2015 21:13:11 GMT -5
I liked MEL event. It was a great show, with a chaotic tag team match and a surprising battle royal. But a small ring is so upset... why the ring are never in real scale?
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Post by Deleted on Jan 30, 2015 22:57:40 GMT -5
As it seems your original here,glad to see you back I guess. Starting off I like your stage and production.Angle and Lesnar confrontation was cool. The 3 on 2 match was good. But I felt it went to fast it little to chaotic? I still am not as use to tradational feds as their match's most of the time don't last as long as Youtube Pic Fed. Your Colter and JBL paring was nice. Steamboat and Randy wasn't happy with it ending like that. But as long as we see rematch down the road I am cool with it. Your battle royal was fun with lots of characters and spots. And Lesnar looks on top. Good show man.
My only negatives were just some of the match's not being that long but that's your choice. Few stiff poses here and there (That's just nit picking)
Overall good work.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 2, 2015 7:58:46 GMT -5
That was simply AMAZING! I love your setup, has a nice indy/underground feel to it. Nice to see a fed that mixes eras. The visual effects were great, especially Kane's entrance. The posing was a little stiff, but that will improve over time. All in all, a very nice show! Looking forward to more from you!
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Post by slowgraffiti on Feb 6, 2015 11:38:27 GMT -5
Didn't realise I hadn't replied to this yet bro. Great show, glad to see you back in the saddle. This worked great for a debut show, youve got a few feuds already brewing and the battle royal was a great way to introduce a bunch of characters. I dig the whole idea you seem to have going, pitting all the big dogs against one another. Only negative is that some of the pics were a bit blurry, mostly when it was moves like Reigns' Superman Punch. Could have been intentional though, as it did give the idea of movement. Didn't distract from the show though. Can't wait for #2. The boys are back in town
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Post by Deleted on Feb 9, 2015 0:19:08 GMT -5
I am unfamiliar with your old fed but I assume you were a pic fedder from back in the day, welcome back!
This fed is really nicely done, the ring is way way too small though especially for all the action you have going on in there. I liked all the matches but was particulary excited to see Savage vs Steamboat and felt totally cheated by what happened there!! Maybe a rematch down the road. Excellent posing, not too much rust and the blurry pic here or there but everything else here is really well done. You built storylines and feuds to continue on to show #2 and build upon your first episode.
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Post by AmbroseBeforeHoes on Feb 18, 2015 10:48:50 GMT -5
I don't want to be 'that guy', but a Battle Royale is when they all start in the ring at the same time.
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Post by Deleted on Feb 20, 2015 1:26:52 GMT -5
I just watched Episode #1 here are my thoughts
Liked:
Nice Arena and Ring
Great posing on Superman punch for Reigns
Well thought out ending to the Shield beating Angle + Punk
Shield in plans with Heyman back stage (good) :-)
Nice potential feud developing with CM Punk + Angle, first the risk move by Angle backfires and secondly Angle eliminates Punk from the rumble, Punk waits to then extract immediate revenge to eliminate Angle.
Disliked:
Some of the commentary for Heenan was off IMO (some of the selected words like GAH i think are too modern for a vintage commentator)
Macho Man vs Ricky Steamboat - why were they fighting again? i don't recall seeing a reason for them being in the match against each other?
Need some crowd in there, this is probably my biggest issue with pic fedding (it adds color to the federation matches having a background) especially as printed crowd backgrounds are so easy to obtain.
Summary
Great start to the fed. I'm going to be jumping straight into episode 2 + 3 tonight so hopefully i would of caught up to all your storylines. With a few minor tweaks you could really pull in viewership and your Main Event League could be a best show of this board, certainly one of the better thought out feds with plenty to look at and keep viewers interested.
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