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Post by ¡Twist Of Cinnamon! on Feb 28, 2015 4:24:31 GMT -5
I went for something a little different this time, a police evidence board theme. The back was fairly easy since I had a lot to work with but the front was very minimal. This was the second version I done and I'm still unsure about it.  I've started a Royal Rumble one as well but haven't completed the back yet. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2015 1:28:09 GMT -5
I like the playbook style, but something feels a little off about it to me. Good work though.
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Post by Mr. PerpetuaLynch Motion on Mar 1, 2015 3:17:02 GMT -5
While I don't think it works for a DVD cover I do think it's a really nifty idea for a graphic as a whole  |
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Post by TheLastDude on Mar 1, 2015 5:17:48 GMT -5
I like it a lot. It's very creative. I think it draws the eye better than the typical action shot/giant heads/row of superstars.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2015 8:57:50 GMT -5
To be honest, I'm not feeling this one all that much.
The front doesn't look like a DVD cover, it's very bare and looks unfinished. Not a big fan of the font choice either.
I get the concept you were going for with the back, I think the execution could have been a little better. Maybe use a bolder and different style line so it almost looks hand drawn, like a marker on a white board.
Overall this one isn't doing it for me but I'm looking forward to your RR cover.
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Post by screech on Apr 1, 2015 21:41:37 GMT -5
It's not a bad design idea by any means but I think your major flaw is having the images appear so flat. The photos need to look like they're physically hanging off of the board and not look like they're printed onto the board. If you them hanging on by pieces of scotch tape and had some shadowing underneath to show they're physically hanging in front of the board and aren't just printed onto it perfectly flat, it would add a whole lot of dimension while still keeping your simple design. The markers and eraser at the bottom of the front look a bit small in comparison to how large the photos are so it might even look cooler if the background was a bulletin board and all of the images and logo had a push pin in them attaching each one to the board. I'd love to see what it would look like if you tried one of these techniques!
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