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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2015 12:41:13 GMT -5
Enjoy guys and remember the backround's or the set will be improved by Episode 6. And this just was test with the not so special effects.
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Post by attitudesback on Feb 28, 2015 21:43:03 GMT -5
Not bad. You use Sony Vegas to put these together judging by the font and text placement? You can YouTube search things like "Fire renders" and you could download and then chroma key those renders to look more impressive. Bit technological there but it would definitely look awesome! The WWE figures do make use for great henchmen, it did feel at times like one of those WWE crossover pieces (Scooby/Flinstones) although I haven't seen those so that might be waay off lol. I did enjoy the story of Casey Jones, however. The sets you've addressed, but the story was good. The posing could have been done a little better. Especially when he begun to tell the flashback. A WWE Chair instead of sitting on the floor for example. Looking forward to see where you go from this one, but I think the use of alleyways worked best for what you have. The English was real bad in some places but I understood the most part of it, might be worth a proof read. Look forward to the next show my man! Do you have a WWE fed? I can't seem to remember seeing a show for a while. You got some real cool figs and cages that would make for a nice little fed.  Searching "Fire Green Screen" pulls up some decent results. Also, download that Intro video. Filming it with the camera doesn't look right. |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 28, 2015 22:23:12 GMT -5
Not bad. You use Sony Vegas to put these together judging by the font and text placement? You can YouTube search things like "Fire renders" and you could download and then chroma key those renders to look more impressive. Bit technological there but it would definitely look awesome! The WWE figures do make use for great henchmen, it did feel at times like one of those WWE crossover pieces (Scooby/Flinstones) although I haven't seen those so that might be waay off lol. I did enjoy the story of Casey Jones, however. The sets you've addressed, but the story was good. The posing could have been done a little better. Especially when he begun to tell the flashback. A WWE Chair instead of sitting on the floor for example. Looking forward to see where you go from this one, but I think the use of alleyways worked best for what you have. The English was real bad in some places but I understood the most part of it, might be worth a proof read. Look forward to the next show my man! Do you have a WWE fed? I can't seem to remember seeing a show for a while. You got some real cool figs and cages that would make for a nice little fed. Searching "Fire Green Screen" pulls up some decent results. Also, download that Intro video. Filming it with the camera doesn't look right. Thanks brother,yes my fed is EWE. My last show was vengeance. I believe you commented on it,not sure. I use Windows Movie Maker was very similar to Son Vegas. The English I'll work on, trust me living in the west part of the United States were all trashy spellers. Lol,The chair I agree on. But I was trying to capture something like he was talking to them on rooftop. Thanks for your kind feedback as always. Any wants for future back round's? I already have Shredder's Thrown Room,the outer shot of it,his sky scraper,Few rooftop shots,ally way or two,Some street shots,Sewer shot or two, and Foot Clan Dojo. Any other suggestions will be helpful. The TMNT figures I can't help much with the poses. Although,the WWE figure's I'll make sure to pose better.The only tricky part is mastering them in more ninja like poses rather then WWE stance of things. |
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Post by deskjet on Mar 1, 2015 6:54:49 GMT -5
Not bad. You use Sony Vegas to put these together judging by the font and text placement? You can YouTube search things like "Fire renders" and you could download and then chroma key those renders to look more impressive. Bit technological there but it would definitely look awesome! The WWE figures do make use for great henchmen, it did feel at times like one of those WWE crossover pieces (Scooby/Flinstones) although I haven't seen those so that might be waay off lol. I did enjoy the story of Casey Jones, however. The sets you've addressed, but the story was good. The posing could have been done a little better. Especially when he begun to tell the flashback. A WWE Chair instead of sitting on the floor for example. Looking forward to see where you go from this one, but I think the use of alleyways worked best for what you have. The English was real bad in some places but I understood the most part of it, might be worth a proof read. Look forward to the next show my man! Do you have a WWE fed? I can't seem to remember seeing a show for a while. You got some real cool figs and cages that would make for a nice little fed. Searching "Fire Green Screen" pulls up some decent results. Also, download that Intro video. Filming it with the camera doesn't look right. I guess this is the cheap way out but I'm just in agreement here with eveything attitudesback said  . I liked this storyline and the fact that it was kind of a flashback made it like an actual tv show. Good storyline development with this to give purpose to why Jones is joining. The ending was well done. Good use of Baxter throughout. Really wish you'd just put the text on a black screen then show the pictures. AN episode that made me looking forward to the next one. NIce work:) |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2015 13:04:54 GMT -5
I really liked this one, lots of great fighting action throughout!!! Still would love to see some kind of diorama background here to really draw you into the TMNT universe but your doing ok telling your story. I didn't think the fire use came off too well not exactly sure if that was the effect you were going for and maybe put some kind of printed out background on those videotapes like concrete or something so they look like barriers or wall. Still love the idea and it IS very original with is something lacking in certain pic feds as of late, love seeing originality and creative wings being spread! |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2015 13:27:49 GMT -5
Thanks for all the kind words as always man. The set up I promise will be greatly improved once I get hold of some print outs which whenever Episode 6 is released will see the newer set.
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Post by T on Mar 2, 2015 12:55:42 GMT -5
I think that this will pick up once you get the backgrounds sorted. You've shown that you've got the ability to tell good stories and have good action sequences. The dioramas seem to be the missing piece, as visually it's not at its peak yet. Might it be an idea to hold off on episodes 4 and 5 until you have the backgrounds ready, rather than doing them anyway?
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2015 16:06:22 GMT -5
Good show the fighting was great, and like the use of wwe figures in TMNT. you have a great story going on, and i look forward to seeing more. greak work keep it up. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2015 23:26:24 GMT -5
I think that this will pick up once you get the backgrounds sorted. You've shown that you've got the ability to tell good stories and have good action sequences. The dioramas seem to be the missing piece, as visually it's not at its peak yet. Might it be an idea to hold off on episodes 4 and 5 until you have the backgrounds ready, rather than doing them anyway? They already were filmed way in advance so I couldn't hold back on it. Episode 6 may not be aired till late April depending on how I even get the prints. And thanks to all who replied with the kind words. |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 2, 2015 23:31:05 GMT -5
I think that this will pick up once you get the backgrounds sorted. You've shown that you've got the ability to tell good stories and have good action sequences. The dioramas seem to be the missing piece, as visually it's not at its peak yet. Might it be an idea to hold off on episodes 4 and 5 until you have the backgrounds ready, rather than doing them anyway? They already were filmed way in advance so I couldn't hold back on it. Episode 6 may not be aired till late April depending on how I even get the prints. And thanks to all who replied with the kind words. |
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Mar 4, 2015 10:08:40 GMT -5
Really enjoyed this, fun backstory to Casey,
Great action, the only issues are the ones mentioned already, the fire looked a little wonky and there were some spelling issues
Good stuff though
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