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Alright first off, welcome back to text fedding! I will begin to review Hell Zone...

Ah not to fond of the grammar so far. Puncation is bad, spelling is good. A RVD/Sabu feud has been done before but let's see how you use their feud. Interesting that JR, Cole, and Taz are commentators. I would have like to seen Taz wrestle instead of doing color commentary but I am all for Taz doing commentary. 2 out of 3 falls sounds great. By the way did you mean "Barbed wire Rope match?" JR: "That will be one hell of a slopper knocker!" What is a slopper Knocker lol. Lot of spelling mistakes such as when Heyman says "Broad of Dicretors." I think you meant "Board of Directors." Hey commentary is pretty bad. I mean you didn't make a lot of words plural that should have been. First match was short. It was a sentence long. But I am glad Benoit won. So the Million Dollar challenge was just basically a squash match. Interesting angle between Lesnar/Batista/Vader. Grammar is bad I must say. Seems rushed. Eh I knew The Impact Players would win. Another Squash match. Regins dominated Super Crazy and Piscosis aswell as Tatanka. Hogan/Hassan match was okay with an interesting ending. New Cursier Weight Champion in Daniels. Can't go wrong with that. Glad RVD retained the title.

Overall I thought it was average. Grammar was bad, match length wasn't the greatest. However, I think you got some of the characters down good. Work on spelling and puncation. Storylines were okay. I also recomend taking your time. I think this was rushed threw though.