WFW - Nitro! - Episode 3

Okay..time for your fed. Nice arena....probably my favorite on the board at this moment. Great entrance ramp, great crowd. Nice printouts. I like how you had the commentators recap the Rey/RVD feud. Some nice posing here, tho RVD's a little lacking, even for a basic. Under normal circumstances I'd be annoyed by RVD going for something big so early but at least the commentators sorta explained it. Didn't like the finish, but it was a good way to continue the feud. Nice backstage interview. I don't like how you're doing Big E/Khali so early, coulda benefitted by a slower buildup, or at least being saved until the ppv. Especially seeing how you were pushing Big E, makes Mankind absolutely jobbing to him seem really pointless now. Nice Rock promo. Hogan's promo bugged me due to its severe lack of "brother". Pretty out of character for Bryan to do that. Triple H vs Batista should be good, I think HHH looks pretty cool with that belt. Match could've definitely gone on longer before the interference.

Overall, pretty decent show. Only major issue I had with it was Big E losing....if any match needed a screwy finish, that was one. Or you could've avoided it entirely and given them a proper match at the PPV. Nice presentation, feuds continued, pretty solid effort.

Oh boy, been looking forward to this! Let's go...

-Loving the new setup man!
-Glad Naitch is back.
-Van Dam is lucky. Maria, man!
-Nice mixed tag action. Not something we see very often in a Fed!
-Looking forward to the triple threat at Slamboree!
-Loved the HHH interview! I like this new gimmick for him.
-I like how you're trying to build Khali up as a monster. It'll take a lot of work to undo the damage that WWE did to him, but I'm sure you can pull it off.
-Wow, Big E got destroyed. Not sure that was the right way to go with this one, but that's just my opinion. May have been better for a screwjob finish, but again that's just my opinion.
-I swear Brock's going to turn on Rock soon, I'm definitely getting that vibe here.
-Bryan vs Hogan at Slamboree? This should be a good one!
-Man! Bryan HATES Hogan!
-Batista, yeah! Love this guy!
-Every time I read Chosen One, I keep getting Jeff Jarrett's WCW theme playing in my head.
-I love matches that start of with a test of strength.
-This is awesome *clap clap clap clap clap*
-Holy s**t! What a counter!
-Eat! Sleep! Conquer! Repeat!
-Batista beats the champ? That's an interesting twist in the tale!
-HHH is going to hurt in the morning!
-Loving Heel Rock.

That was your best episode yet attitudesback! What did you use for the blood on Hogan? I'm always worried about ruining the figures.

WFW Nitro Ep3



Liked:

RVD + Maria Vs Rey + Kelly Kelly

I've been really putting my interest in this angle, particularly because RVD is coming over as a heel, i've not seen him play this role before. I'm a casual fan of RVD and his move set so this storyline and feud with Rey is great!
 
I LOL'd at King's reaction to Maria + Kelly Kelly getting in the ring to square off and fight!

I was surprised to see the win by Rey come at a cost through a bad timing moment by RVD and his wife. Still, i wonder if Rey + Kelly Kelly defeating them will mean the end of the feud?



Nice interview scene and scripting with JR + the Game.



The Great Khali vs Big E Langston

I felt this match could of lasted a little longer, still you put Big E's bravery and courageous effort across while still making Khali look a hated strong powerful Monster that he should be. Good showing 


Rock rebuttal to Trips

I don't know what it is? But for some reason i sense that BEAST is going to turn on the Rock and beat both him and Triple H?
Maybe it's my wrestling senses, maybe it won't happen but i am intrigued by this angle.



Hogan Promo, Bryan attacks

Interesting, another twist of characters where i didn't see D-Bry playing the role of Heel attacking a great icon like the Hulkster. In this segment Bryan comes across more like an extreme version of himself right before his Team Hell/No thing.



Main Event: Batista Vs Triple H

I'd like to see Trips do the Harley Race knee  again with this match i think it could of been a little longer considering who the two guys were and it is your Main Event of the match.



Disliked:

Wasn't much if anything to dislike! I really enjoyed the show, Just before the Rock's interview, there is a WFW poster showing Batista vs the Game? not sure why it was placed immediately before the Rock's interview but JR or King don't respond to it? - maybe have underneath JR say 'Still to come later tonight our Main Event but first a word from the Great One'



Summary + Notes

I really like the fact the promos and segments are spaced out in between the matches makes the show authentic. Definitely keep doing this.



One thing i think could be altered is the photos/ratio for intros, just some numbers crunched from the show to help:


Rey + Kelly vs RVD + Maria - 80 pics match total: (16 of them used for the intro alone)

Suggestion: Probably could of cut the intro in half, have both Rey + RVD enter with Kelly Kelly and Maria enter but walk behind both of them and use 4 phots this would of been 8 in total not 16.



Great Khali Vs Big E - 40 pics [5 used on Khali's entrance]

Suggestion: 3 pics is probably enough for each entrance. 4 Max.



Batista Vs Trips - 56 (counted from the test of strength to 3 count] I felt the intros were about right, but considering the action and whatnot it seems to me like the 1st match with 80 photos outshone your main event?



Also it's probably a good idea to try and not break down the moves of each wrestler too much?
For example when doing a Power bomb show the holding up, then the landing.

Same with Turnbuckle moves show the dude on the turnbuckle, then the connection.

If you're sticking to around 40 photos per match (which is probably your good average) then the breakdown would be around 2-3 moves per 10 photos.



With your Main Event both of your characters should get shots in, so if your intro is 8 pics (4 for both characters) you have 32 to do the match in? right now if you use 3-4 photos per move you only then have 8 moves in total before you are ringing the bell.



Suggestion: If Batista has at least 8 moves himself and the Game has 8 moves, at 3-4 pics per move that's double what you're shooting? So the solution is to have each move be 2 pics and 3 at the most, this way you can keep the action flowing and still get plenty of moves in for both characters to show a good account of themselves.


Here is an engineering breakdown of what i mean: 

• Batista Intro - 3 Pics
• HHH Intro - 3 Pics
• Staredown 
• Lock up
• Batista Move - 2 pics
• HHH Move - 2 Pics
• HHH Move - 2 Pics
• Batista Move - 2 Pics
• HHH Move - 2 Pics
• Batista Move - 2 Pics
• Batista Move - 3 Pics
• HHH Move - 3 Pics
• HHH Move - 2 Pics
  
• Batista Move - 2 Pics
  
• HHH Move - 2 Pics
  
• Batista Move - 2 Pics [by this point you have used 34 photos and both Batista and HHH have 6 moves in the match each. You could quite easily have 3-4 photos for a finishing move and take a Main Event to 50-60 photos. 

None of what i suggested will stop me from watching WFW Nitro and the end of the day you produce really good content, your arena is much improved and the roster is looking really great right now. What i suggested is merely what i would do, it is your show so it is completely your call! 

I'm geared for Slamboree and i actually enjoy both D-Bry + RVD as heels because many people ask on the forum ''it would be great to see a character used differently'' you are holding true to this so even though some might not like it, at least you are giving us something intriguing and different!

Rich

Alright. A good show overall. Good storyline development as you head to slamboree. First match, good mixed tag. Nice hirricanrana by Rey. Great bout with big e and khali. Big man match for the win. Lol at the rocks promo. You got him down. Very unique feud going on with Bryan and hogan. Should be a crazy match. Solid main event with some nice mat wrestling between the game and the animal. you're making positive strides in your fed. Keep up the good work:)

Thank you man! Glad you enjoyed it



Wow, thank you! Appreciate all the kind words bro.

Attitudesback, let me start by saying that I love your setup! Looks like you put a lot of effort into it. For me, presentation isn’t everything, but it is very important when creating a pic fed world. So, fantastic job there.

The mixed tag match had some really great spots. Always love to see high-flyers like RVD and Mysterio duke it out. Quick thinking on Kelly’s part to come away with the W. Really enjoyed this match because of the build. It felt like a real tag team bout.

I did a Rock versus Triple H match myself not too long ago. And they are incredibly fun to film. Their move sets play so well off one another. I’m looking forward to seeing that match.

Khali versus Big E had some great spots as well. That bear hug into a DDT was very well posed. I’m enjoying this show so far. I was hoping that Big E would come out with the win, but great match nonetheless.

The Rock and Lesnar make an interesting duo! Great promo from Rocky. Like I said, looking forward to seeing the match between him and The Game.

Ouch! Hogan just took a beating! I like when feds present out-of-the-box feuds. Looking forward to seeing how this unfolds.

Triple H versus Batista! I absolutely love that championship belt. Had a feeling Lesnar or Rocky would intervene. Although it was predictable, it was executed perfectly. Great show!

Thank you for putting forth so much effort. I really enjoyed this one.

This was a great show man!

I loved the mixed tag match, lots of great posing! I loved the springboard hurricanrana. Nice story progression with RVD storming out on the missus..
I'm not a fan of Khali, but you book him well to look strong. The mini-build up to this match from previous shows gave it a good sense of importance. I would have liked to have seen 'E with a bit more offence in the match.
Shocking attack on Hogan! I'm liking this feud alot already! Cant wait for Bryan and the Hulkster to clash!
I'm liking the pairing of Rock and Brock, Rock as a mouthpeice, Brock as the muscle..
Nice main event between Batista and HHH, nice idea with the Batista Bomb/Pedigree counter, it looked decent enough. Brock strikes! NIIICE I love the pose as Trips got tossed outside! Awesome..

AAAAbsolutely loved it buddy, storylines are going places, I'm looking forward to Slamboree!

This show was awesome buddy. A lot of good stuff in here. 
-Sweet arena, fits your fed perfectly. 
-That added stipulation is exciting for the mixed tag match. Maria and RVD vs. Rey and Kelly Kelly was a cool match, I am surprised this feud came to conclusion so early ... Some ok poses and some good spots in here. GOSH DARNIT A SCHOOL BOY! RVD looks p!ssed, I hope he doesn't turn abusive .. Cool match, I am excited for the X division triple threat next week. I hope RVD becomes increasingly abusive. 
-Nice trips interview. 
-Dang you are booking Khali strong. Big E got squashed.
- Cool BRock interview.
-Nice Hulk interview. Gosh Bryan killed him. 
-Batista vs. Trips was a cool match man. Nice too see Batista win, I wish he did it without Brock's interference. BROCK MURDERED HIM ON THAT F5 TOO THE FLOOR! I hope the Rock can keep Brock on his leash.


This was a cool show man, I am excited for the next one. You are really doing some cool stuff in your fed. Work on posing though buddy. Good stuff and good work. 

I have feeling this will be amazing

Time for the review

First off I love your set up,looks amazing. Nice offer from Flair to Rey to see those two go back and forth there. Rey and Rob opened very well. Quick fast paced Wrestling,and you can see comppetive nature with these two. The wife's I wish had more wrestle time. And thankfully on Rey's behalf they won. Interesting to see RVD storm off like child about it. Rey must feel little guilty right? That he caused this in way. I loved Triple H and JR's interview. Triple H really feels strong about this,and this promo really helped define it. Khalie and Big E nice little filler there. Khalie did good taking Big E down that fast. Let see where Khale goes. Bryan and Hogan is such interesting feud,I can't wait to see those two collide in classic! Triple H and Batista was good. Two big men colliding and hitting some stiff hits was cool to see. That ending made me mark out. Really awesome! Or what was going to be the end until Brock put his nose where it doesn't belong. Triple H was killed in the end for Brock,HHH's title days are limited with Rock and Brock.

Overall awesome show man. Huge step up,the match lengths are improving. The Story is great and your presentation. Huge step up 9/10 Maybe one more match in the show that's only small complaint in all honesty. Anyways great show,can't wait for the 4th episode to see where this continues.