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Post by batistabomb06 on May 7, 2006 9:36:32 GMT -5
Hey im new to this forum but i did a fed the other day WWE RAW+SMACKDOWN hope you like it and tell me how i can improve, the first show i have done is raw many thanks wwe06fed.piczo.com |
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Post by batistabomb06 on May 7, 2006 10:49:13 GMT -5
Thanks  i love WWE thats why i did a fed.I hope you enjoy it and please tell me how i can improve for the future thanks |
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Post by therealdealbookr on May 7, 2006 11:42:07 GMT -5
Entertaining show, but who won the world title in the end. You should write this on Microsoft Word and then post it because the spelling wasn't great and the grammer was bad. The show was decent though, you have a unique way of writing. The ending was good and I like how Triple H VS Tajiri wasn't a squash. Decent show for a first.
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Post by goatlord on May 7, 2006 13:01:47 GMT -5
Good show for a beginner.
Like RD said, do it on Word.
All in all, great show.
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Post by batistabomb06 on May 8, 2006 1:39:24 GMT -5
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