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Post by deskjet on Apr 3, 2015 12:08:45 GMT -5
*****EXTENDED 4 MATCH SEASON PREMEIERE*****-A new era dawns on the British Wrestling Revolution
-Eight men compete for the chance at glory
-The pressure mounts as all involved try to remain... UNBREAKABLE!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 3, 2015 15:16:03 GMT -5
Wanna reserve this spot! I can't seem to watch this on my phone and I won't be having internet installed here till next week  so my reviews going right here, bro! Buzzing for this! (EDIT: Sorry its so late, I figured ill keep it breif. The production in this show is outstanding! Really stands out, key points I loved the most include how bat-sh*t crazy Xavier Woods seems to be! You're building Drew Mcyntire well, showcasing him as a big deal. Nice to see things heating up between two divas too, sucked to see Jinder get the win though.. I particularly liked Heymans "I've seen better" comment off Big E's F5! Made me chuckle, Overall a near perfect introductionary show! I'll be sure to drop Unbreakable 2 a reply dude!) |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 3, 2015 16:48:34 GMT -5
Wanna reserve this spot! I can't seem to watch this on my phone and I won't be having internet installed here till next week so my reviews going right here, bro! Buzzing for this! Yeah, you cant watch WIX on the phone for whatever reason. |
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Post by deskjet on Apr 3, 2015 17:05:22 GMT -5
Thanks guys. Yea, I need to look into that today. I think there is an option. If so I will link it here and let you know.
Edit: There's no way to transfer the flash data over to HTML code:( sorry.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 4, 2015 3:15:21 GMT -5
Hello deskjetI promised to check out this last week knowing it aired and even though i am departing from the forums i am a man of my word. I've just watched BWR:Unbreakable and here are my thoughts: - I really loved the intro, probably the best intro i've seen to a fed, it captures a modern day American Pro Wrestling Show Perfectly.
- I really liked the tournament bracket as well as the competitors, some people feel that the selection are jobbers but i wholeheartedly disagree, lets not forget that the aim here is to present wrestlers in another light is it not? So DJ you've done a fantastic job of presenting these guys in a light where maybe WWE misused them, especially making Big E Langston fierce and menacing.
- I love the commentary you have with Paulie Heyman, you've got his verbals down perfectly.
A-Ry segment with Kelly Kelly + Eva: I LOL'd when i read ''two bit hoe-bag" Haha.
- JTG vs Tommy Mercer
Remember the name Tommy Mercer! He looks like he could go on to win it all! Impressive squash against JTG, what now for JTG? Will he bounce back from this or be condemned to a lower card position; i've never seen Mercer before so this was refreshing and great to see.
He reminds me a bit of that big guy Matt Morgan.
- LOL at the Woods/Brawler segment, it was fun, i really liked the custom NY Knicks B'Ball jersey, especially me being a Knicks fan!
- Mahal Vs A-Ry
Great match up, with the two ladies at ringside they also played a part in distraction, which happens alot in modern wrestling. I really wanted A-Ry to win, but having said that as show creator you have freedom of choice to push whoever you want. A viable win by Mahal and he shown experience to take advantage of the distraction.
- Main Event
- Evan Bourne Vs Fandango
I'm hoping Bourne wins! :-p
Great start to the main event, Fandango showing his aggression early on but the high risk move backfired, then Bourne came back to win the match!
I'd love to of seen an Evan Bourne Vs A-Ry final. Having said this i can't wait to find out who wins the belt.
Summary
I really liked the debut show of BWR Unbreakable, from the effects to pictures and commentary, everything has the feel of the BWR Fed but done in a Modern American way with your own unique personal style. I'll say this, you've captured the BWR fed brilliantly, what i really liked about T's fed was that he was taking other wrestlers not commonly used and using them to make his fed unique and i feel you've carried this over into the US version. We all have our favorite wrestlers and shows and even though i wont be around on this forum, i'm now following you via Twitter so i should be able to keep up to date with T's BWR and your Unbreakable show. Most Excellent DJ. Good work. Rich |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 4, 2015 5:10:13 GMT -5
Yeah, it sucks that you can't view Wix on mobile because I was looking forward to this.
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Post by deskjet on Apr 4, 2015 5:18:07 GMT -5
Yeah, it sucks that you can't view Wix on mobile because I was looking forward to this. IF you have a regular home computer, you can still check it out. Hopefully you will  |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Apr 4, 2015 8:54:28 GMT -5
DJ, this is phenomenal. I love the design of your site. The presentation is magnificent. And your roster is awesome as well.
I'm in love with your arena setup. What parts did you use for the scaffolding?
I also enjoy the mix of figures. That is something that I have been doing a lot of lately: Mixing RA,TTL, and DA figures. It gives the federation a cool look. Reminds me of FTW wrestling and some of your early work like NWR.
Who is this Woods character? Haha! Hope we get to see him in the ring with a wacky moveset.
What I'm really impressed with is the posing and camera angles. You feel like you're in the ring following the action as it unfolds.I think some of the best posing came out of the Ryder/Big E match and the Main Event. That's an awesome Fandango figure. And the high-flying action in that contest was really fun to watch.
DJ, I love this fed so far and am really looking froward to what you and Titch put together. The Bash is shaping up to be a great event as well! Thanks for contributing such a fun, polished, and well thought out fed.
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Post by deskjet on Apr 8, 2015 21:12:48 GMT -5
Thanks for all the replies guys here and on the other thread. Greatly appreciated again. (=wwefan617=) as always, great to hear your thoughts and to have your support throughout the board. a quick answer to your questions...the scaffolding is pieced together from the mitb playset that i cannot find about 1/3 of the pieces to. And Mr woods? Well, you'll just have to wait and see  |
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Post by T on Apr 9, 2015 5:41:42 GMT -5
I've already watched it, but never gave you proper feedback, so I'll do a summary:
-Loved the arena, definitely a very BWR arena. Flags and logos are a nice touch
-Poses in all of the matches were good, as was the variety in camera angles used
-A few small storylines developing backstage, hopefully we'll see more in-ring ones as the shows go on
-Loved the Xavier Woods character! Excited for what he can bring
-Choice of wrestlers was spot on. A 'big name' or two would be cool, but obviously not too big and maybe not in the limelight. I know I had Jericho, Orton, Undertaker, Edge but they've gradually been phased out as the other guys come through
Very promising start, DJ, and I'm excited for where we can both go with this. ;D
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2015 15:30:29 GMT -5
deskjet, my apologies for not replying to this sooner! -LOVED that opening graphic! -OK, kicking things off with Heyman. -WWWYKI -No entrance for Big E? -Great mid-air pose there with Big E. -Some excellent posing in this match DJ! -Zack got launched! -Loved Heyman's line about the F-5! -It was refreshing to see Ryder have a proper match for a change, but Big E deserved that win. -Yeah! A-Ry! I'm a bit of a fan, if you didn't know... -Eva asking Kelly if she's a lady?! Oh the irony! -BROOKLYN, BROOKLYN! BRING THE HOOD TO Y--- I mean, erm, oh look it's JTG! -Oh, poor JTG... -I'm guessing Mercer's going to be your monster heel? -HA HA HA! The Brooklyn Brawler?! I love BWR! You never know who's going to show up! -Erm, Xavier? Are you...Are you OK? -I'm disappointed that Jinder went over, but hey, we can't have everything we want.  -Liking this role for Drew. -I'm loving the use of lower card wrestlers here. Rooting for Fandango! -That ref really looks like a Von Erich... -Great posing on that top rope leg drop! -Well deserved win by Bourne there. The tournament is shaping up very nicely! Excellent show DJ! The only thing I would change is the entrances, but that's avery minor niggle in what was a very good return show! You've still got it, that's for sure! I look forward to more Unbreakable.
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Post by deskjet on Apr 10, 2015 15:34:41 GMT -5
deskjet, my apologies for not replying to this sooner! -LOVED that opening graphic! -OK, kicking things off with Heyman. -WWWYKI -No entrance for Big E? -Great mid-air pose there with Big E. -Some excellent posing in this match DJ! -Zack got launched! -Loved Heyman's line about the F-5! -It was refreshing to see Ryder have a proper match for a change, but Big E deserved that win. -Yeah! A-Ry! I'm a bit of a fan, if you didn't know... -Eva asking Kelly if she's a lady?! Oh the irony! -BROOKLYN, BROOKLYN! BRING THE HOOD TO Y--- I mean, erm, oh look it's JTG! -Oh, poor JTG... -I'm guessing Mercer's going to be your monster heel? -HA HA HA! The Brooklyn Brawler?! I love BWR! You never know who's going to show up! -Erm, Xavier? Are you...Are you OK? -I'm disappointed that Jinder went over, but hey, we can't have everything we want. -Liking this role for Drew. -I'm loving the use of lower card wrestlers here. Rooting for Fandango! -That ref really looks like a Von Erich... -Great posing on that top rope leg drop! -Well deserved win by Bourne there. The tournament is shaping up very nicely! Excellent show DJ! The only thing I would change is the entrances, but that's avery minor niggle in what was a very good return show! You've still got it, that's for sure! I look forward to more Unbreakable. Thanks alot for the kind reply Jaimie F. Greatly appreciated! Noted about the entrances |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2015 15:36:38 GMT -5
deskjet, my apologies for not replying to this sooner! -LOVED that opening graphic! -OK, kicking things off with Heyman. -WWWYKI -No entrance for Big E? -Great mid-air pose there with Big E. -Some excellent posing in this match DJ! -Zack got launched! -Loved Heyman's line about the F-5! -It was refreshing to see Ryder have a proper match for a change, but Big E deserved that win. -Yeah! A-Ry! I'm a bit of a fan, if you didn't know... -Eva asking Kelly if she's a lady?! Oh the irony! -BROOKLYN, BROOKLYN! BRING THE HOOD TO Y--- I mean, erm, oh look it's JTG! -Oh, poor JTG... -I'm guessing Mercer's going to be your monster heel? -HA HA HA! The Brooklyn Brawler?! I love BWR! You never know who's going to show up! -Erm, Xavier? Are you...Are you OK? -I'm disappointed that Jinder went over, but hey, we can't have everything we want. -Liking this role for Drew. -I'm loving the use of lower card wrestlers here. Rooting for Fandango! -That ref really looks like a Von Erich... -Great posing on that top rope leg drop! -Well deserved win by Bourne there. The tournament is shaping up very nicely! Excellent show DJ! The only thing I would change is the entrances, but that's avery minor niggle in what was a very good return show! You've still got it, that's for sure! I look forward to more Unbreakable. Thanks alot for the kind reply Jaimie F. Greatly appreciated! Noted about the entrances As I said, only a minor niggle. The show really is fantastic, nice to see you back fedding again! |
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Post by deskjet on Apr 10, 2015 15:45:03 GMT -5
Thanks alot for the kind reply Jaimie F. Greatly appreciated! Noted about the entrances As I said, only a minor niggle. The show really is fantastic, nice to see you back fedding again! IT's nice this time around. A little less stressful. It's been a full year I believe since WWEXALT. I have more motivation this time around too and I know Titch will kick my ass is I start slouching,lol |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2015 15:48:12 GMT -5
As I said, only a minor niggle. The show really is fantastic, nice to see you back fedding again! IT's nice this time around. A little less stressful. It's been a full year I believe since WWEXALT. I have more motivation this time around too and I know Titch will kick my ass is I start slouching,lol Has it really been a year already? I've been around here longer than I thought!  |
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Post by deskjet on Apr 10, 2015 15:57:00 GMT -5
IT's nice this time around. A little less stressful. It's been a full year I believe since WWEXALT. I have more motivation this time around too and I know Titch will kick my ass is I start slouching,lol Has it really been a year already? I've been around here longer than I thought! Yep, nearly a year  . Thought I was done to be honest. The activity on the board was just too infectious I guess |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 12, 2015 15:17:42 GMT -5
Great show, your arena is brilliant it takes me back to the days of GENEXT, remember Chaos in Cardiff City. the BWR North American title tournament looks great. i love the connection with Titch's BWR, i see great things happening with the Titch's fed and your fed. great matches and the storylines look brilliant. great show, keep up the good work. can't wait to see more. |
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Post by Wicked on Apr 12, 2015 23:36:45 GMT -5
-Production is awesome. Love the webpage on wix. Cool little intro thingy with the loading logo and music. -Nice arena. I like the dual flags and fire works. -The tournament looks stacked. -The intro with Zack and Heyman was ok, a little humorous. Cool announce team. Nice ref, is that Harvey Dent.  .. Nice Canadian glad in the background. The opening match was kind of a squash match. I was hoping Zack would've got more moves in. The F5 comments by Paul was funny. I wish this match had have been longer. I guess this just sqaushes my hopes that Zack would've been more than a job boy.. -Alex and K 2 are cool together. Alex seems like a nice baby face to promote, especially against a foreigner and a ginger.. -JTG vs. Tommy "Crimson" Mercer was a bit of a bust for me. I was hoping JTG would've been more than a jobber. I guess you gotta put over the guys with the big muscles. 2 out of 2 matches so far have been squash matches, which is a bit upsetting to be honest. -That Xavier woods sketch was sick. Nice Bow Tie! -Riley vs. Mahal was a cool little match. It had some ok action which was overshadowed by there valets. -I am really intrigued with what Drew will do in BWR. -Fandango vs. Bourne was the first match that I really got into. This match actually had some length to it and I thought the action was pretty good. I am glad Bourne won and I am excited to see the next match of his. Overall this show was an alright show. It was a pretty good way to debut the North American BWR. I hope on the next show there are less squash matches and they are replaced with good matches that are a bit longer. I thought this show had some pretty cool character development and I am excited to see what happens next. I love the production values. It seems like you seemed to improve on posing but I still think you can still improve more. Good job DJ and keep up the good work. |
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Post by deskjet on Apr 13, 2015 4:45:50 GMT -5
@tom thank you for the reply and nice to see you back:) Wicked Thank you for taking the time to give me some detailed and constructive feedback. I've definately made some notes. I actually looked closely at some of your posing from your last show and used that as a model to assist with getting better in that area, so thanks for that. It's certainly not my strong point, but I'm glad you noticed I've made some strides:) |
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Post by Robert69 on Apr 13, 2015 6:54:28 GMT -5
Really enjoyed this!
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