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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2015 18:14:09 GMT -5
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Post by attitudesback on Apr 6, 2015 18:42:53 GMT -5
Right then! - Arena needs a touch more black - It's 'Bischoff' - Nice stage. Like the use of a crowd. - DX! Nice. - Quite a few typos. - Sting! Good stuff. Nice to see him in a fed. - Really strong first match. Saving personal opinions aside, great technical match. Despise Benoit, but looking past that, it was a great match. Little stiff here and there but really good. - Hogan! Woo boy here we go! - Would like to see more commentary. Is that The Giant? - Nice mix of Jakks and Mattel. - Lots of really nice spots. - Decent main event. Overall, I can see a lot of easy improvement. I think this was a really good, strong first showing and apart from some off posing the in-ring action was pretty good. Van Dam vs Benoit captured the technical essence I'd expect from them. My tips for improving? I'd proof read the text, maybe change the audio so it's crowd noise instead of a song, throw a little more commentary in there and make sure the lighting is consistent throughout. Apart from that I did enjoy it and I think it's a great foundation to start a solid fed here. Sting as World Champion can never go wrong!! Looking forward to the second episode. Will add it to the 'Show Directory' now.  |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2015 19:17:05 GMT -5
Right then! - Arena needs a touch more black - It's 'Bischoff' - Nice stage. Like the use of a crowd. - DX! Nice. - Quite a few typos. - Sting! Good stuff. Nice to see him in a fed. - Really strong first match. Saving personal opinions aside, great technical match. Despise Benoit, but looking past that, it was a great match. Little stiff here and there but really good. - Hogan! Woo boy here we go! - Would like to see more commentary. Is that The Giant? - Nice mix of Jakks and Mattel. - Lots of really nice spots. - Decent main event. Overall, I can see a lot of easy improvement. I think this was a really good, strong first showing and apart from some off posing the in-ring action was pretty good. Van Dam vs Benoit captured the technical essence I'd expect from them. My tips for improving? I'd proof read the text, maybe change the audio so it's crowd noise instead of a song, throw a little more commentary in there and make sure the lighting is consistent throughout. Apart from that I did enjoy it and I think it's a great foundation to start a solid fed here. Sting as World Champion can never go wrong!! Looking forward to the second episode. Will add it to the 'Show Directory' now. Thanks bro, I'll try working on the typos. I type so fast sometimes that I just blast through it. Yeah I'll add in crowd audio next time I just played some of the songs from WCW/NWO Revenge World Tour just do it lol. I'll make sure to add some commentary but I can't promise a one for each Pic since I dislike doing commentary but I'll find way to include more. Thanks fro the feedback man. |
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Post by deskjet on Apr 7, 2015 18:12:08 GMT -5
I enjoyed this show. The music was well placed througout which helped add to the show. The promos were well done and the in ring action was very good. You've got some very good posing going on throughout all the matches. You've also got a nice mix of roster characters. My only suggestions would be to use YouTube music embedded of the video if you have those capabilities, and maybe get a new ref. other than that a good solid start to your new show. Keep it up:)
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Post by Deleted on Apr 7, 2015 22:46:14 GMT -5
I enjoyed this show. The music was well placed througout which helped add to the show. The promos were well done and the in ring action was very good. You've got some very good posing going on throughout all the matches. You've also got a nice mix of roster characters. My only suggestions would be to use YouTube music embedded of the video if you have those capabilities, and maybe get a new ref. other than that a good solid start to your new show. Keep it up:) Thanks bro for your feedback. Glad you liked it quite a lot man. |
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Post by T on Apr 8, 2015 3:38:54 GMT -5
-Like the opening logo -Three different belts already after the Sting promo  -RVD/Benoit had a nice flow to it. The length of the frame transition was spot on -Liked the Austin segment -Marella and A-Train are a strange mix, so will be interesting to see how they go -Ah, a squash, poor FBI -Battle Royal was very short, especially for a match with a title shot on the line. Nice finish with SCSA coming down though, as it sets a storyline up there -Innovative use of the phone for a backstage screen -Solid main event to finish Pretty good first show overall. I'm a bit confused with the title situation, but there were a few storylines started, which is what you want from a first show. Good effort. |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2015 20:17:45 GMT -5
-Like the opening logo -Three different belts already after the Sting promo -RVD/Benoit had a nice flow to it. The length of the frame transition was spot on -Liked the Austin segment -Marella and A-Train are a strange mix, so will be interesting to see how they go -Ah, a squash, poor FBI -Battle Royal was very short, especially for a match with a title shot on the line. Nice finish with SCSA coming down though, as it sets a storyline up there -Innovative use of the phone for a backstage screen -Solid main event to finish Pretty good first show overall. I'm a bit confused with the title situation, but there were a few storylines started, which is what you want from a first show. Good effort. Thanks man, I am glad you enjoyed as whole. I'll brief you little more on the titles. Their's IC,World,NWA,Tag Titles out of the whole company. The NWA was split by 2 chambers (Explained at much later date). Some stars are signed to only compete for the World Title and some are only to the NWA. It will make more in month or two when the reason is explained. |
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Post by Wicked on Apr 10, 2015 23:58:20 GMT -5
This was a pretty good show Nick. You've come a long way. You keep on improving. Posing is alright but you can still improve, I believe in you! Good first episode. Good work and keep it up. -Nice start with DX and a cool Circled2 promotion. The Superkick pose to Eric was sweet, too sweet. This fed starts off cool with definite distinction from EWE. I like the tone/mood/vibe I get from it. Those poses in Sting's interview were weird. -Alright arena. I would love for you to post all the champions and a roster. -RVD vs. Benoit was a cool opener. Some ok action in there. Posing was ok. Match flow was ok, you seem to be improving so much. Nice ending. Benoit looked ruthless, cool character development. -Why is Stone Cold standing so weird... Work on that posing BROTHER! -FBI with A-Train is cool. Hogan and the Giant is a cool team. This match was pretty cool. Well done for who was in it. -Nice push up edge. -Cool battle Royal. Some serious names in there. Posing seems to be decent. Glad Jericho won. WHAT? Stone Cold attacks and eliminates him. Can't say I am sad.  -Wow Edge changed his attire quick.. Dang RVD is just as ruthless as Benoit. -Edge vs. Sting was a decent first main event. You used both guys well. Overall good first show. Just work on Posing and match flow. Good stuff Nick. OH YAH, By the way I liked how you have both elements of traditional and youtube pic fed styles in your new fed. |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 12, 2015 15:03:52 GMT -5
Very good show, the matches were great and the pacing of them was very good. i am pleased to see more youtube pic feds on here, as i really enjoy watching them. i really liked how you did, the entrance music aswell i thought that was a nice touch. i like your arena. good work keep it up and i can't wait to see more. |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 13, 2015 19:42:09 GMT -5
This was a pretty good show Nick. You've come a long way. You keep on improving. Posing is alright but you can still improve, I believe in you! Good first episode. Good work and keep it up. -Nice start with DX and a cool Circled2 promotion. The Superkick pose to Eric was sweet, too sweet. This fed starts off cool with definite distinction from EWE. I like the tone/mood/vibe I get from it. Those poses in Sting's interview were weird. -Alright arena. I would love for you to post all the champions and a roster. -RVD vs. Benoit was a cool opener. Some ok action in there. Posing was ok. Match flow was ok, you seem to be improving so much. Nice ending. Benoit looked ruthless, cool character development. -Why is Stone Cold standing so weird... Work on that posing BROTHER! -FBI with A-Train is cool. Hogan and the Giant is a cool team. This match was pretty cool. Well done for who was in it. -Nice push up edge. -Cool battle Royal. Some serious names in there. Posing seems to be decent. Glad Jericho won. WHAT? Stone Cold attacks and eliminates him. Can't say I am sad. -Wow Edge changed his attire quick.. Dang RVD is just as ruthless as Benoit. -Edge vs. Sting was a decent first main event. You used both guys well. Overall good first show. Just work on Posing and match flow. Good stuff Nick. OH YAH, By the way I liked how you have both elements of traditional and youtube pic fed styles in your new fed. Thanks brother,happy to see your input. Edge sharted in the other so he had to change... Glad you pointed out some funky poses. The Sting stuff is explained by I was doing interview set up by my TV and it reflected me and I wasn't looking the greatest that day (hair). Lol,but the other stuff I'llw ork on. Thanks for your feedback. |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 13, 2015 19:42:51 GMT -5
Very good show, the matches were great and the pacing of them was very good. i am pleased to see more youtube pic feds on here, as i really enjoy watching them. i really liked how you did, the entrance music aswell i thought that was a nice touch. i like your arena. good work keep it up and i can't wait to see more. Thanks brother |
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Apr 15, 2015 10:11:15 GMT -5
Good posing throughout, i like the roster choices glad you had commentary, and entrance music
A couple of typos here and there, and some more light would be good
Benoit as a heel felt odd
Good stuff overall and i look forward to seeing more
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Apr 16, 2015 16:26:25 GMT -5
i'll give this a reply as well tonight. hang tight, bud.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Apr 19, 2015 19:07:49 GMT -5
Thanks for being so patient in waiting for my reply. Overall, I enjoyed this show. You have a really good sense of how to write funny and/or intense dialogue! I loved the DX & Bischoff banter. I thought that was very well done.
I also enjoy your roster. Seeing guys like Edge go up against Sting is great. You're putting together some dream matches of mine.
My only suggestion would be to work on your posing and incorporating commentary in the matches. That would make the action a lot easier to follow.
I look forward to seeing more work from you! Thank you for working so hard to contribute to the board. The more the merrier!
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