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Post by attitudesback on Jun 30, 2015 13:43:07 GMT -5
All the latest action this week in WFW world! Please leave several minutes for the page to load, this is my longest show yet. worldfigurewrestling.proboards.com/thread/14/wfw-nitro-episode-5Brock Lesnar takes on Batista! The Great Khali's first Intercontinental Title defense! What about Mankind? Will he reveal all? All this week, and more on WFW Nitro! Enjoy! |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 1, 2015 17:41:44 GMT -5
All right! I've been looking forward to this one! -Great opening segment. Looking forward to seeing how this feud plays out. -Punk/Mysterio was excellent! One of your best matches yet. Some great spots, very well done! -The Tweet from Edge was cool. Did you use TweetFake for that? That's what I use.  -Punk's pipebomb was cool. Damn, I miss him in WWE.  -The segment with Flair was good, but the WOOOO at the end ruined it, I think. Only because of the serious nature (no pun intended) of what he was talking about. -Damn! Heel RVD's a B*****D! -Mankind: Trolling before it was trolling. -Edge losing to Khali. Who ever thought they'd be able to say that?! The stuff with the mask was awesome though! -Time for the Main Event already? This show has flown by! -That Mankind promo gave me chills. Excellent work! -Oh Rock, insulting the Beast is never a good move... -Starrcade is really shaping up! -Two of my favourites right here! -What a brawl! -Wait, wait, wait! HOLD UP! Rock insults Lesnar, then attacks both him AND Batista?! He must really like digging his own grave! -I hope this is building towards a Fatal-4-Way for the title! GREAT show attitudesback! Your best yet in my opinion. Keep it up! |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 1, 2015 18:29:33 GMT -5
Well uh...heh.
Decided not to write this as I was watching it so eh.
Opening promo served its purpose very well. You seem to have Triple H's promos down.
Initial match lacked any ring psychology whatsoever. It's like you went into this match knowing "CM Punk complains, he does these 3 moves, Rey flips". Rather short as well but at least it wasn't as short as the opener for Slamboree.
Ric Flair's promo serves the purpose of announcing Hulk Hogan will be fighting the guy who attacked him. I automatically assume it's gonna be D-bry but I'm really hoping you don't go that route.
RVD's promo was good.
Edge vs Khali was weird. It seemed like you were having Edge squash Khali, then Mankind's mask appeared, then Khali won, then Mankind cut a promo where he said a whole lot without actually saying anything of value.
Rock cuts a good promo.
Batista fights Brock in a match that honestly wasn't that bad but brought down by a couple unrealistic reversals. Still highly enjoyable and the image of Rock on the turnbuckle was a good way to end the show.
You seriously need to work on your undercard. It seems like all you care about is the main event scene. You do a fine job of building storylines around your undercard but you don't seem to know how any of the wrestlers in it operate. You usually deliver when it comes to Batista, Brock Lesnar, Triple H, and The Rock. Sometimes RVD. I'd research the wrestlers you're using, or I'd just flat out replace them with people you know what to do with.
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Post by attitudesback on Jul 2, 2015 14:40:32 GMT -5
All right! I've been looking forward to this one! -Great opening segment. Looking forward to seeing how this feud plays out. -Punk/Mysterio was excellent! One of your best matches yet. Some great spots, very well done! -The Tweet from Edge was cool. Did you use TweetFake for that? That's what I use. -Punk's pipebomb was cool. Damn, I miss him in WWE. -The segment with Flair was good, but the WOOOO at the end ruined it, I think. Only because of the serious nature (no pun intended) of what he was talking about. -Damn! Heel RVD's a B*****D! -Mankind: Trolling before it was trolling. -Edge losing to Khali. Who ever thought they'd be able to say that?! The stuff with the mask was awesome though! -Time for the Main Event already? This show has flown by! -That Mankind promo gave me chills. Excellent work! -Oh Rock, insulting the Beast is never a good move... -Starrcade is really shaping up! -Two of my favourites right here! -What a brawl! -Wait, wait, wait! HOLD UP! Rock insults Lesnar, then attacks both him AND Batista?! He must really like digging his own grave! -I hope this is building towards a Fatal-4-Way for the title! GREAT show attitudesback! Your best yet in my opinion. Keep it up! Really appreciate it man. A F4W isn't in my plans right now, but it's definitely an option I've got to go down. The Flair promo was a bit excessive, you're right. It kinda fit the eccentricity, but I agree. "Starrcade shaping up" and this was my first show building towards it! I'm not playing when I say the best is yet to come! Well uh...heh. Decided not to write this as I was watching it so eh. Opening promo served its purpose very well. You seem to have Triple H's promos down. Initial match lacked any ring psychology whatsoever. It's like you went into this match knowing "CM Punk complains, he does these 3 moves, Rey flips". Rather short as well but at least it wasn't as short as the opener for Slamboree. Ric Flair's promo serves the purpose of announcing Hulk Hogan will be fighting the guy who attacked him. I automatically assume it's gonna be D-bry but I'm really hoping you don't go that route. RVD's promo was good. Edge vs Khali was weird. It seemed like you were having Edge squash Khali, then Mankind's mask appeared, then Khali won, then Mankind cut a promo where he said a whole lot without actually saying anything of value. Rock cuts a good promo. Batista fights Brock in a match that honestly wasn't that bad but brought down by a couple unrealistic reversals. Still highly enjoyable and the image of Rock on the turnbuckle was a good way to end the show. You seriously need to work on your undercard. It seems like all you care about is the main event scene. You do a fine job of building storylines around your undercard but you don't seem to know how any of the wrestlers in it operate. You usually deliver when it comes to Batista, Brock Lesnar, Triple H, and The Rock. Sometimes RVD. I'd research the wrestlers you're using, or I'd just flat out replace them with people you know what to do with. Your thoughts on the opening match are spot on. I didn't (no idea why) do what I normally do and watch the superstars in action as I'm filming. It's quite obvious that I didn't, which unfortunately brings it down. Hogan's attacker isn't anyone you can guess, which is why I really love this angle and may hold it out for some time. Edge/Khali was difficult because if Khali squashed Edge, Edge doesn't look like a threat and Mankind isn't having any effect. I tried to make Edge look legit, so that Khali is getting to Mankind and Edge will be a serious threat to Punk, although I agree it was a very "squash" style match. Mankind's promos are difficult for me because I'm slowly dropping hints, without giving much away and I think once all is revealed you can look back and see it all makes sense. The reversals will be looked into, I think it might be posing issues that mean they don't come off right. Undercard has always been an issue for me, as I think out of 6 Starrcade matches, 3 are "lower level" guys so obviously some work will have to be put into in order for half the show to pull off. Other than that, I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
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Post by T on Jul 5, 2015 16:13:52 GMT -5
-The accessories on the announce table could do with a dust down  -Nice promo and confrontation to kick things off -Some good poses and exchanges in Punk/Rey. Liked the sneak attack from Punk after the match -Very innovate with the Twitter quote -Liked the Mankind mind games, although Edge losing so soon after you highlighted that he was gloating after a Punk loss was a strange move -Looking forward to seeing the stip in the Mankind/Khali match being announced -You nailed the Rocky poses in his promo -Rock definitely made a statement in the main event. 4-Way at the next PPV maybe? Enjoyable show. You've already mentioned that you're going to build more of an undercard, which would definitely benefit your fed. Would like to see a few more characters introduced and your roster swell a bit. |
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Post by attitudesback on Jul 5, 2015 16:21:14 GMT -5
-The accessories on the announce table could do with a dust down -Nice promo and confrontation to kick things off -Some good poses and exchanges in Punk/Rey. Liked the sneak attack from Punk after the match -Very innovate with the Twitter quote -Liked the Mankind mind games, although Edge losing so soon after you highlighted that he was gloating after a Punk loss was a strange move -Looking forward to seeing the stip in the Mankind/Khali match being announced -You nailed the Rocky poses in his promo -Rock definitely made a statement in the main event. 4-Way at the next PPV maybe? Enjoyable show. You've already mentioned that you're going to build more of an undercard, which would definitely benefit your fed. Would like to see a few more characters introduced and your roster swell a bit. You have a good eye! Lol. The whole Mankind/Khali thing may or may not have a stipulation. Mankind is teasing ideas at the moment. Undercard takes more of a shine, with 3 of the 6 matches being less important guys. Edge/Punk, Rey/RVD and Khali/Mankind are all lower tier guys and apart from Khali/Mankind I don't think the other feuds have been built much, if at all. Glad you enjoyed it, there's plenty of surprises coming! |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 7, 2015 15:47:56 GMT -5
Awesome opening promo it's building to something huge from what it looks. Cm Punk and Rey Mysterio great fast paced straight to the point action. Awesome kick by Rey the poses are getting better. Few stiff shots,but that's fine your are ready talented at what you do so the shots don't matter. I love how Punk stole the win,typical heel way to do it with style! Love Punk's attitude. Just going right off and going off on everyone. ...PIPEBOMB! Nice little backstage scene. Edge and Khale interesting pairing here. Good storytelling and logic seeing Edge using the big man's body against him and tearing him apart. Sick Spear revere, interesting spot light and Mankind deal. But Mankind and Khale feud I just am not feeling. But i'll give you the benefit of the doubt. Some great promo works as well to go with it. Real great main event. The Brawling was great and the powerhouse action also did good. Good seeing Rock jump back into this.
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Another good show but I feel your fed bit all over the place. Or it just appears odd seeing guys like Edge,Punk,Etc in the lower card. But it's good seeing your roster doesn't overwhelm me with huge roster. It's just different for better words. Nice show and can't wait to see where it all goes.
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Post by attitudesback on Jul 7, 2015 16:40:20 GMT -5
Awesome opening promo it's building to something huge from what it looks. Cm Punk and Rey Mysterio great fast paced straight to the point action. Awesome kick by Rey the poses are getting better. Few stiff shots,but that's fine your are ready talented at what you do so the shots don't matter. I love how Punk stole the win,typical heel way to do it with style! Love Punk's attitude. Just going right off and going off on everyone. ...PIPEBOMB! Nice little backstage scene. Edge and Khale interesting pairing here. Good storytelling and logic seeing Edge using the big man's body against him and tearing him apart. Sick Spear revere, interesting spot light and Mankind deal. But Mankind and Khale feud I just am not feeling. But i'll give you the benefit of the doubt. Some great promo works as well to go with it. Real great main event. The Brawling was great and the powerhouse action also did good. Good seeing Rock jump back into this. Overall Another good show but I feel your fed bit all over the place. Or it just appears odd seeing guys like Edge,Punk,Etc in the lower card. But it's good seeing your roster doesn't overwhelm me with huge roster. It's just different for better words. Nice show and can't wait to see where it all goes. Thank you man. Plenty of swerves coming your way! I'm trying different things just to make it unique, so it's hopefully a little more interesting. Glad you enjoyed it! |
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Post by deskjet on Jul 10, 2015 8:46:53 GMT -5
Really good show. Opening match had lots of great action and good poses. Love how you've created khali as a monster in the fed instead of a comedy role. Interesting developments with hogan. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. Brock vs Batista was an excellent match. Lots of good poses, very realistic. I feel like the four main guys aren't distinguishing themselves at the top. I know hhh is the champ but there doesn't seem to be one dominate guy. They all four are on the same level and maybe that's because they are all big stars. Not a bad thing just not used to so many top guys in the main title picture. Sorry for such a short reply but another enjoyable view!
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Post by attitudesback on Jul 10, 2015 18:12:28 GMT -5
Really good show. Opening match had lots of great action and good poses. Love how you've created khali as a monster in the fed instead of a comedy role. Interesting developments with hogan. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. Brock vs Batista was an excellent match. Lots of good poses, very realistic. I feel like the four main guys aren't distinguishing themselves at the top. I know hhh is the champ but there doesn't seem to be one dominate guy. They all four are on the same level and maybe that's because they are all big stars. Not a bad thing just not used to so many top guys in the main title picture. Sorry for such a short reply but another enjoyable view! Thanks man. I think Khali almost books himself into a monster role. Glad you enjoyed the show, there is much more coming! |
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Post by Robert69 on Jul 14, 2015 0:06:38 GMT -5
Good opening segment
Good Flair stuff
Liking the Mankind mind games a lot
Dug the mask stuff with Khali.
Khali > Edge? :Vader: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rock's promo was quality
Quality main event
Rocky seems to be digging his own grave o.O
Enjoyable as always. I do think we could do with maybe one more match for the under card. Other then that, enjoyable. Rock on, man. Rock on.
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Post by attitudesback on Jul 15, 2015 12:22:11 GMT -5
Good opening segment Good Flair stuff Liking the Mankind mind games a lot Dug the mask stuff with Khali. Khali > Edge? :Vader: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rock's promo was quality Quality main event Rocky seems to be digging his own grave o.O Enjoyable as always. I do think we could do with maybe one more match for the under card. Other then that, enjoyable. Rock on, man. Rock on. Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it |
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Post by slowgraffiti on Jul 16, 2015 11:41:03 GMT -5
Good opening with Batista and Triple H. Has the feel of a real main event feud, which is great.
Enjoyed Punk vs Mysterio, there was some great poses in there, and the psychology for both guys felt pretty real to me. I don't know if I've mentioned, but I love the way your fed is set up, just gives me a chance to see guys used differently than they normally would, which is always great.
Really intrigued to find out what's going to happen with Khali and Mankind - again, it's great to see Khali used seriously. I wasn't as big a fan of this match as the first one, but that could be because I'm not a Khali fan. The mask bit was cool, as was the Mankind promo afterwards.
Batista vs Brock was good for a straight-up brawl, you captured the idea of what I presume you were going for well with it. Wasn't surprised it ended with interference, but sort of makes sense in the storyline so I wasn't annoyed by it. A fatal four way for the title would be great to see, if that's where you're going with it. Good show.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jul 18, 2015 16:51:56 GMT -5
attitudesback, As always, I love your setup and that championship belt. Both look so cool and give your fed an original feel. You're quickly becoming one of my favorite feds. you've got some awesome presentation. And everyone knows I'm a sucker for that. Seeing Batista confront the Game was awesome and I'm looking forward to seeing those two go head to head.I also like what you're doing with the Foley character. he seems more menacing and dangerous than ever. Overall, this was a fun show that furthered some really cool storylines. Your posing gets better and better as well! I'm excited to see what happens next!
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Post by attitudesback on Jul 20, 2015 10:11:29 GMT -5
Good opening with Batista and Triple H. Has the feel of a real main event feud, which is great. Enjoyed Punk vs Mysterio, there was some great poses in there, and the psychology for both guys felt pretty real to me. I don't know if I've mentioned, but I love the way your fed is set up, just gives me a chance to see guys used differently than they normally would, which is always great. Really intrigued to find out what's going to happen with Khali and Mankind - again, it's great to see Khali used seriously. I wasn't as big a fan of this match as the first one, but that could be because I'm not a Khali fan. The mask bit was cool, as was the Mankind promo afterwards. Batista vs Brock was good for a straight-up brawl, you captured the idea of what I presume you were going for well with it. Wasn't surprised it ended with interference, but sort of makes sense in the storyline so I wasn't annoyed by it. A fatal four way for the title would be great to see, if that's where you're going with it. Good show. Thanks man! I think the door is wide open for possibility right now. Mankind's angle with Khali is one of my favourites right now and I think it'll surprise a lot of people. A Fatal Four Way is a great idea, it wasn't in my plans originally but I think it's sort of worked itself. Thanks again! Looking forward to it! |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 20, 2015 10:23:17 GMT -5
Ah go on attitudesback! Give us a Fatal 4 Way, you swine! Just Please don't have 'Taker show up and kick Brock in the nuts. |
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Post by Stuart? on Aug 1, 2015 17:42:16 GMT -5
As I have promised over the last few days, here's my review:
I love how Triple H looks with that title.
"I told you to get in the gym" Trips is pretty funny lol.
Come to think of it... Batista looks pretty good with the title too.
I really enjoyed Punk vs Mysterio. You captured Rey's style perfectly imo.
The fake tweet is pretty cool.
Nice pipebomb by Punk.
I liked Flair and RVD's backstage segments. I used to have that Flair figure when I was a kid but I attempted to customise it into a Paul Bearer when I was 6 with a sharpie... Wasn't a good idea lol.
I'm still getting used to Khali in the position he is in WFW, but you pull it off nicely.
The mindgames from Mankind were well used. Looks like he's really messing with Khali's head.
Uhh guys... I think Edge might be dead... Punk will be happy about that I guess lol.
Rock's promo was great.
I love the camera cuts to JR and King between segments, makes the show very realistic.
Main event was a quality match - straight up brawl. I like it.
I really dig how you use The Rock. I'm looking forward to his match with Lesnar.
Good show overall dude, now I've gotta check out Eps 6 lol.
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Oct 20, 2015 8:42:56 GMT -5
great episode, love that you are using Kahli
the tweet was a nice touch
the gts pose was a bit odd
mankinds promo was awesome
the match between Lesnar and Batista was great, you could feel the power in the moves, and i love a big guy battle
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Post by attitudesback on Oct 20, 2015 13:01:36 GMT -5
great episode, love that you are using Kahli the tweet was a nice touch the gts pose was a bit odd mankinds promo was awesome the match between Lesnar and Batista was great, you could feel the power in the moves, and i love a big guy battle This is an old one! Thanks for checking it out, I always struggle with the GTS but I'm going to try and get it right for the Pay Per View. |
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