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Post by Deleted on Aug 16, 2015 16:09:56 GMT -5
RAW 2Here it is guys episode 2 of RAW reviews and opinions would be much appreciated
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Post by Deleted on Aug 17, 2015 8:08:56 GMT -5
-Kicking things off with Punk. -Punk didn't wait very long. -Glad Lesnar won. -Interesting line-up for Raven's Flock. -Man, I really hate Jeff Hardy. That's not a dig at you man, so please don't think that!  -That was one Hell of a brawl! -Interesting segment with HBK and Sting. -Nice way to end the show. Good show @masspick, storylines are developing and moving along which is good. Just work on your posing here and there, and you'll be on to a winner. |
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Post by Woods on Aug 18, 2015 8:38:23 GMT -5
Episode 2 of RAW! Awesome,
Punk calling out Hardy was great to kick things off! Hardy didn't show:( so no brawl between the two just yet, but it adds to the suspense for when these two do actually get to go at it one on one.
Lesnar making easy work of the fallen angel there in the opening match up, interesting to see Brock does all the talking himself in RAW and doesn't need a mouth piece.
Harper vs Hardy was my favourite match of the night as they're two of my favourites and you captured their moves perfectly in that match, great stuff!
Liking this feud between the 3 factions and the brawl after the Razor/Joe match was epic! All members of the teams just going at it, awesome!
Nice segment with Sting and HBK there, I thought sting would've beaten Kane but with Undertakers powers, his brother Kane came out victorious in what was a really good match.
Some of the poses are a little off, but i found that was only really in the segments with a lot of the figures in (the faction segemnt) so i get that the focus will be mainly on one part at a time in them segments, your matches have a great flow to them, and i like the format with the YT matches, it helps the show flow nicely, Great Work @masspick
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Post by attitudesback on Aug 18, 2015 13:22:03 GMT -5
Punk opening the show was good, no complaints apart from the belt. Having it dead straight like that looked odd, wrap it around his shoulder or around his waist. Only a slight problem, more of a visual thing. Faction promo was nice. Would've liked a backdrop, could see wires etc. Again, just a problem with the visual aspect. Harper/Jeff was nice. As Woods said, you captured them nicely. The stairs spot was cool to see. The Big Show statue behind JBL/Razor was nice, lol. I would've moved him between the shots as at one point he's not even looking at what's going on. Razor/Joe was nice. Liked the dirty tactics from Razor to win. Sting vs. Kane is a blockbuster main event, and it worked. Having Sting lose makes him look weak, especially so early in the feud. It makes the Undertaker look incredibly powerful though, so I guess it worked on that half. Going forward, work on the visual elements I mentioned. I think you're off to a great start, and hopefully with some fine tuning it could get even better! |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2015 21:06:01 GMT -5
thanks for the reviews guys! Episode 2 of RAW! Awesome, Punk calling out Hardy was great to kick things off! Hardy didn't show:( so no brawl between the two just yet, but it adds to the suspense for when these two do actually get to go at it one on one. Lesnar making easy work of the fallen angel there in the opening match up, interesting to see Brock does all the talking himself in RAW and doesn't need a mouth piece. Harper vs Hardy was my favourite match of the night as they're two of my favourites and you captured their moves perfectly in that match, great stuff! Liking this feud between the 3 factions and the brawl after the Razor/Joe match was epic! All members of the teams just going at it, awesome! Nice segment with Sting and HBK there, I thought sting would've beaten Kane but with Undertakers powers, his brother Kane came out victorious in what was a really good match. Some of the poses are a little off, but i found that was only really in the segments with a lot of the figures in (the faction segemnt) so i get that the focus will be mainly on one part at a time in them segments, your matches have a great flow to them, and i like the format with the YT matches, it helps the show flow nicely, Great Work @masspick Yeah I'm still getting used to posing with Elites which is easier in some aspects than DA's but still pretty different -Kicking things off with Punk. -Punk didn't wait very long.-Glad Lesnar won. -Interesting line-up for Raven's Flock.-Man, I really hate Jeff Hardy. That's not a dig at you man, so please don't think that!
-That was one Hell of a brawl! -Interesting segment with HBK and Sting. -Nice way to end the show. Good show @masspick, storylines are developing and moving along which is good. Just work on your posing here and there, and you'll be on to a winner. Yeah I was going for the heel that acts like a bully thing there, where he calls him out but gives him an unrealistic time limit. Raven's flock I basically wanted ECW originals and then Abyss because I was such a big fan of that alliance in TNA with Raven, Abyss, Stevie Richards & Daffney. No offense taken with the Hardy thing, once this rivalry's done with dynamic for the title picture changes. Punk opening the show was good, no complaints apart from the belt. Having it dead straight like that looked odd, wrap it around his shoulder or around his waist. Only a slight problem, more of a visual thing. Faction promo was nice. Would've liked a backdrop, could see wires etc. Again, just a problem with the visual aspect. Harper/Jeff was nice. As Woods said, you captured them nicely. The stairs spot was cool to see. The Big Show statue behind JBL/Razor was nice, lol. I would've moved him between the shots as at one point he's not even looking at what's going on. Razor/Joe was nice. Liked the dirty tactics from Razor to win. Sting vs. Kane is a blockbuster main event, and it worked. Having Sting lose makes him look weak, especially so early in the feud. It makes the Undertaker look incredibly powerful though, so I guess it worked on that half. Going forward, work on the visual elements I mentioned. I think you're off to a great start, and hopefully with some fine tuning it could get even better! Yeah I felt that way too it's just my OCD at the time was bugging me because I like the flat look when the figures hold up the belt which kinda goes away once you bend it, I can easily overcome my ocd and fix that though. Raven's Flock thing could've been better I guess I was kinda going for the abandon warehouse look with the wires in the back and sorta failed at it. I only noticed the lack of movement on Big Show thing after filming and by the time I noticed I was already filming the match and got a little lazy and didn't correct it so I'll keep a better eye out next time. Sting losing was actually supposed to be a thing I felt where he had Kane where he needed him and would have won if Taker hadn't come out but I probably didn't portray that very well in this episode but plan to address in the next. |
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Post by T on Aug 19, 2015 5:37:26 GMT -5
-Steady Punk promo to start with -Looking forward to seeing who answers Lesnar's challenge - Khali? Henry? -Some cool spots in the Hardy/Harper match -Interested to see whether the Shield will align themselves with the Syndicate or if they're just causing trouble everywhere -Wasn't sure why Big Show couldn't do anything to protect JBL, or why they weren't going after Big Show either. Looking forward to possibly a big 6v6 match down the pipeline -Surprised that Kane beat Sting, but I liked it. Hopefully we'll get to see some great promos between Sting and The Undertaker Nice work again, masspick. Stuart? your W3A shows are next on my review list, just so you know I've not forgotten.  |
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Post by Deleted on Aug 19, 2015 10:10:10 GMT -5
-Steady Punk promo to start with -Looking forward to seeing who answers Lesnar's challenge - Khali? Henry? -Some cool spots in the Hardy/Harper match - Interested to see whether the Shield will align themselves with the Syndicate or if they're just causing trouble everywhere - Wasn't sure why Big Show couldn't do anything to protect JBL, or why they weren't going after Big Show either. Looking forward to possibly a big 6v6 match down the pipeline -Surprised that Kane beat Sting, but I liked it. Hopefully we'll get to see some great promos between Sting and The Undertaker Nice work again, masspick. Stuart? your W3A shows are next on my review list, just so you know I've not forgotten. lol do they even have a Khali elite? I wish! Shield is a part of Syndicate technically, they're paid henchmen more or less. To be honesy part of Big Show doing nothing was probably laziness on my part but I figured it amde sense for him to do nothing if he was outnumbered 7 to 1. Thanks a ton for reviewing T! Always glad to see you guys enjoying the show! |
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