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Post by Deleted on Oct 4, 2015 19:16:36 GMT -5
Another well-written effort here mate; the descriptions of certain settings and not just matches...Colour me impressed mate!
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Post by Sizzle on Oct 4, 2015 19:20:21 GMT -5
Another well-written effort here mate; the descriptions of certain settings and not just matches...Colour me impressed mate! Thank you for returning to read. I'm glad you enjoy it!
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Post by Joe/Smurf on Oct 5, 2015 20:32:29 GMT -5
Finally got a chance to check out your last two shows. Really love how everything is progressing toward All Hallow's Eve. In particularly I loved the description of the segments for the clown. Hope to see that character debut soon! I'm not as big of a Hot Shots fan as Slappy, so I'm hoping the WGTT gets them back. Looking forward to Reeves vs Vlad... Now that's a HOSS FIGHT if I've ever seen one. Good work, man! Keep it up.
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Post by Sizzle on Oct 5, 2015 20:51:09 GMT -5
Finally got a chance to check out your last two shows. Really love how everything is progressing toward All Hallow's Eve. In particularly I loved the description of the segments for the clown. Hope to see that character debut soon! I'm not as big of a Hot Shots fan as Slappy, so I'm hoping the WGTT gets them back. Looking forward to Reeves vs Vlad... Now that's a HOSS FIGHT if I've ever seen one. Good work, man! Keep it up. Thanks for the feedback. Love to see so many replies.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 6, 2015 2:43:59 GMT -5
Finally got a chance to check out your last two shows. Really love how everything is progressing toward All Hallow's Eve. In particularly I loved the description of the segments for the clown. Hope to see that character debut soon! I'm not as big of a Hot Shots fan as Slappy, so I'm hoping the WGTT gets them back. Looking forward to Reeves vs Vlad... Now that's a HOSS FIGHT if I've ever seen one. Good work, man! Keep it up. Thanks for the feedback. Love to see so many replies. Yep...that's the dream right there...
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Post by Daggit on Oct 7, 2015 13:29:48 GMT -5
I have read your shows and I am very impressed. Here are the things im excited about.
I love that you are giving some exposure to both the WGTT and this hot shots team. That storyline should be very interesting to see unfold. Hope the hot shots win the titles eventually.
I am a pretty big Curt Hawkins fan and am glad he is holding some gold as the Hardcore TV Champion.
I cant wait to see what happens with Taker and Kane. Cool that you are using Taker as a one night only special attraction.
I am interested in seeing if Ironclad Vlad can beat Reeves for the title. I thought that Vlad should have had a more successful run in WWE and it would be great to see him be successful in your fed.
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Post by Sizzle on Oct 7, 2015 14:38:44 GMT -5
I have read your shows and I am very impressed. Here are the things im excited about. I love that you are giving some exposure to both the WGTT and this hot shots team. That storyline should be very interesting to see unfold. Hope the hot shots win the titles eventually. I am a pretty big Curt Hawkins fan and am glad he is holding some gold as the Hardcore TV Champion. I cant wait to see what happens with Taker and Kane. Cool that you are using Taker as a one night only special attraction. I am interested in seeing if Ironclad Vlad can beat Reeves for the title. I thought that Vlad should have had a more successful run in WWE and it would be great to see him be successful in your fed. Thank you buddy, nice to see people are enjoying it.
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Post by Sizzle on Nov 1, 2015 1:38:57 GMT -5
Every title is on the line, and there's nowhere to hide. GLOBAL WRESTLING SYNDICATE: ALL HALLOWS' EVE 10,000 people were sitting in their seats in the Gulf Coast Athletic Event Center, the arena was sold out, and eyes were glued to the stage, which was decorated with orange spotlights and all things Halloween.
The Hot Shots Versus The World's Greatest Tag Team, Number One Contendership
The World's Greatest Tag Team's theme song started and the crowd went wild...Until they noticed that they were actually cheering for the Hot Shots, who not only entered to their opponent's music, but were also dressed as the team (well, the two members and their looks as singles competitors). Justin Gabriel's hair was dyed a golden blonde and cut short, representing Benjamin as The Gold Standard. The Miz was dressed as Charlie Haas, wearing a singlet and a fake beard. The World's Greatest Tag Team entered to a loud roar of the fans as always.
The match was to decide the New Age Outlaws' opponents later in the show. After the intro, the match began.
The match started with basic chain wrestling and grappling between Gabriel and Haas. Gabriel Irish whipped Haas to the ropes, leapfrogged over him, and hit a dropkick. He followed up with a headlock, which Haas reversed by flipping Gabriel over onto his back and locking in his own submission. The Miz ran in and broke up the hold. The referee scolded him and Gabriel raked the eyes of Charlie Haas, so Shelton got involved and superkicked Justin Gabriel. The referee turned around and noticed the two men down and began to count.
He reached six, and the two men climbed to their feet and tagged in their partners. The Miz immediately attempted a clothesline. Benjamin ducked and rebounded off the ropes and took The Miz down with a calf kick. Benjamin pinned quickly, but it was unsuccessful. Benjamin got up and attacked with a bulldog. Miz rolled out of the ring and Justin Gabriel began with a pep talk.
"Let's go Miz! You've got this!"
Benjamin intervened.
"Yeah! He sure does! Hahahaha! You kids need a reality check. WE are the greatest and are win tonight will prove it!"
The Miz slid into the ring and tackled Shelton. He punches his mouth a few times before the ref tells him to get off. The Miz tagged in Justin Gabriel. Gabriel attacks with a duo of forearms and a crossbody. He sets Benjamin up for a 450 splash, leaps and gets the wind knocked out of him as Shelton's boots bury into his abdomen. Luckily, Gabriel landed in his corner, so he tagged The Miz. The Miz hit a fisherman's suplex and went to town with stomps. He stomped and stomped, and followed up with an Elbow drop.
Benjamin jumped up and was Irish whipped into the Hot Shot's corner. The Miz tagged Gabriel in and Gabriel proceeded with a monkey flip. Shelton landed perfectly on his feet and tagged in Charlie Haas, who again went to work on Justin Gabriel. Haas went for a powerbomb, and Gabriel attempted to counter it into a hurricanrana, but Haas kept on. Gabriel now hung from Haas' shoulders, not for long though. Haas succeeded with a powerbomb, then locked in the Haas Of Pain, which Gabriel tapped out of after a lengthy struggle to reach the ropes.
Announcer Ponyboy Johnson announced the winners.
"Your winners, and facing The New Age Outlaws later on for the GWS World Tag Team Championships, THE WORLD'S GREATEST TAG TEAM!"
D.O.C Luke Gallows Versus Lodi
The debuting Lodi was set to face the destructive Director Of Chaos Luke Gallows. He walked out with signs that stated phrases including:
"Future World Champion" and "Director Of Crayons"
Lodi began with a lock up with the D.O.C. Luke pushed him off, sending him falling back to the mat. Lodi got up, but was hit with a half nelson slam. Gallows went for a cover.
1! 2! Kickout
Luke waited for Lodi to stand up. Lodi rose, and was whipped to the ropes. Gallows was about to hit the Axe Bomber, but Lodi ducked, rebounded the ropes, and dropkicked Luke. He didn't fall, but Lodi rolled Luke up with a small package.
1! 2! 3!
Lodi had defeated the Director Of Chaos, Luke Gallows in a major upset. He picked up his "Future World Champ" sign and pointed to it.
Backstage
Kane was walking to the entrance stage, but came to a halt as the light above him shattered and crashed to the floor. A dense smoke filled the air, and Kane coughed as a result.
"What is going on in here? Who did that?"
The bright lights were replaced with the dim radiance of candlelight. A single candle lay in front of Kane, illuminating a mask, his very own mask. He went to grab it, and he succeeded. He put it on, cracked his knuckles, and grinned from ear to ear. Following this grin, was a piercing laugh that could be heard from other wrestler's locker rooms on the other side of the building. The laughter reached a ghastly crescendo and the candle blew out.
GWS Hardcore TV Championship- Curt Hawkins (c) versus Rob Van Dam
Ponyboy Johnson announced the two and the match started.
RVD swept Hawkins' feet out from under him, sending him down to the canvas. Hawkins stood up in an instant, grabbed RVD's left arm and kicked it. He whipped RVD to the turnbuckle. Van Dam hopped over a running Hawkins, sending him chest first into the turnbuckle. RVD continued with a backstabber. Hawkins hopped out of the ring, holding his back. RVD ran the ropes and dove out of the ring right onto Hawkins. He went for a pinfall, but Hawkins kicked out at two.
RVD Irish whipped him into the steel barricades, ran and pounced on him, sending the combatants over the barricade. Van Dam and Hawkins both crawled and clawed at the barriers, trying to stand up. Hawkins attacked with a burst of energy and a clothesline. He brought RVD up and hit him with a neckbreaker, then sat him in a fan's, who had stood up not to interfere with the action, chair. He hopped over the barricade, rested on the apron and charged at RVD. Hawkins leaped over the barrier and landed an elbow to the chest of Van Dam. Curt went to pin Van Dam, but he rolled away. Hawkins then stood up and planted Rob with a DDT into the concrete floor of the arena. He followed up with a pin, and got the win.
"Winner, and still GWS Hardcore TV Champion, Curt Hawkins!"
Dean Ambrose Versus ? ? ? ? ? ?
Dean Ambrose was introduced and received a loud pop from the fans in Fort Myers. He stood in the ring, waiting for his opponent...
The familiar sound of circus jingles filled the arena, and the shadow of a clown appeared on the screens next to the entrance stage.
"Dean, you come from a place where ultraviolence is common, Combat Zone Wrestling. Life threatening are perfect words to describe your journey in that promotion. I've seen your matches, I've seen you bleed, I've seen a saw cut your forehead open... But you haven't seen me... I've fought for my life in deathmatches in Japan, matches where I didn't know if I would come out alive. I've fought in M&M, the innovators of American deathmatch wrestling. I've survived piranhas, C4, light tubes, gusset plates... And now I think it's time someone survives me!"
The screen went black. A clown in a long, jet black trench coat appeared on the stage. He was holding a trashcan with various weapons in it. Barbed wire and a 2x4 were visible. He rolled the can into the ring and got in with it. He stared at Ambrose, who was confident, perhaps too confident, the man he was about to face was a man with a pain threshold like no other. The crowd didn't know what to make of this outsider, no one cheered, no one booed, they were petrified.
There were no limitations or rules in this match, it was this man's playground. For a man who was known for his hardcore, deathmatch style, he was quite technically sound. He started with a plethora of mat-based moves. He took Dean Ambrose down, and then brought him back up, and locked him in a chicken wing. He lifted him up, and slammed Ambrose straigh onto his spine, smashing the trashcan. Any regular man would have went for the cover, but not him, he took advantage of a fallen Ambrose and searched around the ring for a weapon. He found a table on the outside of the ring, and pushed it in. After setting it up, he wrapped it in barbed wire, and put Ambrose up on his shoulders. The Clown powerbombed Dean through the table and pinned Ambrose, who was a bloody mess.
After an easy three count, he walked out smiling. If he can make that out of an established star, he can do anything. The crowd watched in utter disbelief as Ambrose was lifted out of the ring on a stretcher.
He grabbed a microphone and spoke again.
"I don't bleed...Others do it for me."
Interview With The Legion Of Doom
The Legion Of Doom appeared in the interviewing area with new GWS employee, and interviewer, Adam "The Isotope" Mix.
Adam Mix began,
"Do you feel that Sandow and Taz are threats to GWS in any way?"
Animal responded,
"Indeed, that Damien Sandow character is too smart. His knowledge has driven him mad, with deranged desires and a demented state of mind. This can affect innocent GWS athletes."
"...Well, do you think they are easy opponents for an established veteran tag team like you?"
This time, Hawk replied.
"Yes, Taz is miniscule, that is an advantage to us. Sandow may be a great wrestler, but we know what we're doing. We're the Legion Of Doom.
"Alright then, thank you for participating."
Chris Jericho Versus Wade Barrett
Neither of the competitors entered to distinct cheers or boos, but only a loud and neutral sound.
The match began with a traditional lockup and a test of strength. Jericho kicked Barrett in the gut and Barrett bent over. Jericho planted Barrett's head into the canvas. Jericho looked to lock in the Walls Of Jericho, but Wade Barrett kicked free and rolled out of the ring. As Wade recuperated, Jericho taunted to the crowd and his opponent. Barrett rolled in and threw fists at Jericho. Jericho fought back and knocked Barrett into the ropes. He rebounded and attempted the Bullhammer. Jericho slid and escaped the strike, then went to finish Barrett with a Codebreaker. Barrett slammed Chris onto his back and pinned him.
1! 2! Kickout!
Barrett had him up and Irish whipped him into the corner. He stomped and pounded on Jericho's body until he was sitting down. Wade drove his knee into the skull of Jericho, grabbed Y2J by the legs, and dropped him on his back once again. Barrett went to go for the pin, but Jericho repeatedly kicked at him as he knelt down. Barrett stood up and stumbled back, and Jericho was also up on his feet, Jericho hit a German suplex and bridged for the pin, but only earned a one count. Barrett still lay on the mat while Chris Jericho was flying onto him with a lionsault. Barrett rolled out of the way, and Jericho slammed onto the mat. Chris got up and ran straight into a Bullhammer elbow.
1! 2! 3!
"Here's your winner, Wade Barrett!"
Damien Sandow And Taz Versus The Legion Of Doom, For Damien Sandow, Taz, and Luke Harper's careers.
The duo of Sandow and Taz entered the ring. Luke Harper, who seemed to take the role of their bodyguard, was in their corner. Animal and Taz were set to start the match.
The contest began with Taz and technical wrestling. Taz transitioned to a belly to back situation. He attempted to lift Animal, but the Warrior clutched Taz's wrist and escaped from the hold. He backed Taz up into the turnbuckle. Animal tagged in Hawk, and they attack with a double team gutbuster. Hawk proceeds with an exploder suplex, sending Taz into the mat. Sandow reached to tag in Taz, but was too far. Hawk stomped on Taz's calves and thighs. Hawk tagged in Animal and they were setting up for a Doomsday Device.
Sandow ran in and broke up the team setting up for the finale. The referee, Boris Herrera went to take Sandow out of the action, meanwhile Luke Harper came in and the ref was distracted. Harper kicked Hawk out of the ring and powerbombed Animal. Taz got up and hit a Tazmission-Plex. Taz picked up the win for the team, and kept the three men in GWS. Sandow entered the ring and celebrated with Taz. He patted him on the back, and raised their arms together. Luke Harper entered and stood next to them in typical bodyguard fashion, with a straight face and crossed arms.
"Your winners, keeping themselves and Luke Harper in GWS... Damien Sandow and Taz!"
Harper left his position and superkicked Sandow. Taz suplexed Harper to defend himself. A man in a dark blue jumpsuit and a sheep mask entered from the crowd. He grabbed Taz and hit him with a two handed chokeslam.
The lights flickered, and Harper and the mask-bearing brute vanished.
GWS World Tag Team Championships- New Age Outlaws (c) Versus The World's Greatest Tag Team
The two starting combatants were Shelton Benjamin and Road Dogg. The match started off fast paced, with frequent tags and heavy attacks such as double-team clotheslines and synchronized dropkicks. The World's Greatest Tag Team double teamed Billy Gunn most of the exposition of the match. Gunn tagged in, and so would one of them. This happened every time. The WGTT had Gunn under there arms, and lifted him up with a stalling suplex. The legal man was Benjamin, who attacked with powerful kicks to the abdomen of Gunn. After a failed pin attempt, he tagged in Charlie Haas who climbed to the second turnbuckle and came down with a crossbody. Gunn kneed the gut of Haas, got up and tagged in Road Dogg.
The crowd was ecstatic when Road Dogg proceeded with a hot tag. He clotheslined Haas, and followed up with a second clothesline. Haas stood up, and Road Dogg began his signature "Shake, Rattle, and Roll" series of punches. Haas caught the flying fists, and kicked Road Dogg in the stomach. He tagged in Shelton Benjamin, who came in and hit a trifecta of forearms and shoulder tackles. Charlie Haas entered the ring and flung Billy Gunn over the top rope and onto the mat. He brought him up and signaled toward Benjamin. The duo hit two double team gutbusters onto both of their opponents, then concluded with two belly-to-back suplexes. Benjamin pinned Road Dogg for the win, and the World's Greatest Tag Team became champions.
"Ladies and gentlemen, your new GWS World Tag Team Champions, The World's Greatest Tag Team!"
The Undertaker Versus Kane
Kane walked out to his "Slow Chemical" Theme song. He was wearing his mask, which is new to his outfit, along with his regular attire. The Undertaker gradually stepped towards the ring in his signature black hat and trenchcoat.
The match began with Kane's trademark flurry of chops and strikes to the chest. Undertaker fought back with punches and slaps back to his brother. Kane bounced off the ropes, but Taker reversed his attempt into a powerslam. Kane stood up and ran into a big boot by Taker. The Undertaker resumed his punches to Kane, who after three, stumbled backwards. After a bounce off the ropes, he clotheslined Undertaker down flat in the center of the ring. Kane stomped on The Undertaker's limbs. One by one they throbbed in pain after the colossal boot of "The Demon" Kane dropped hard of them.
Kane taunted at Taker. The Undertaker got up and Kane grabbed his throat. Taker elbowed at Kane's neck. One elbow, then another. Kane released and Taker grabbed his throat and dropped him with a chokeslam. Taker pinned Kane, but Kane got the shoulder up. Taker grabbed Kane's arm and climbed to the top rope. He walked the tight rope that was the top rope and leaped onto Kane for a signature Old School. Taker flipped Kane into a Tombstone Piledriver, but Kane dropped out of it before damage could be done. Kane dragged Taker down and pinned him
1! 2! Kickout.
They both got up and Kane attacked with a devastating clothesline. Kane teased with a cutthroat taunt.
The lights flickered and a heavily tattooed man in baggy white pants, a sleeveless black shirt, a scraggly beard and thin wet hair appears. He grabs the head of The Undertaker, kisses his forehead, and plants his face to the mat. The referee calls the match a disqualification, with Undertaker being the winner. The bearded man turned to Kane, laughed, and disappeared after another flickering of the lights.
A cameraman followed Kane backstage. Kane flipped tables over in catering, kicked trashcans down, and jostled workers around the locker room.
GWS World Championship- Ryan Reeves (c) Versus Ironclad Vlad
"The Moscow Mauler" Ironclad Vlad and "Silverback" Ryan Reeves stood face to face in the ring. Reeves held the GWS World Championship in his hand and held it high. Vladimir looked at the lustrous gold.
"This match is for the GWS World Championship! Introducing first, the challenger, The Moscow Mauler, Ironclad Vlad! His opponent, the GWS World Champion, Ryan Reeves!"
The match was a slugfest. It began with the two throwing huge fists in the middle of the ring. Vlad caught Reeves in a backbreaker, but Reeves would maintain the upper hand. He bounced and clotheslined Vladimir to the floor. Reeves picked him up and dropped him with a body slam. He elbowed to the face and body of Kozlov, who couldn't get up as he was held down each time by the Silverback. Reeves climbed to the top rope and dived down with a splash. Ironclad Vlad caught him and kneed his side. He followed up with a fallaway slam, and Reeves rolled out of the ring.
Soon after, the two found themselves back in the ring, and Vladimir Kozlov squashed Reeves in the corner with splashes. Kozlov picked Reeves up and the two sat on the top turnbuckle. Kozlov pounded Reeves' back and put his head under his arm. The crowd watched intensely as the two brawled at the top, but Vlad lifted him up and hit a colossal vertical suplex off the top rope, sending the two giants falling down. The two laid there, not moving, but Reeves' arm rested on Kozlov's chest, and the ref counted the pin.
1! 2! 3!
"Winner, and still GWS World Champion, The Silverback, Ryan Reeves!"
The two still didn't move, but Reeves was helped up by the referee, who raised his arm and handed him his belt.
The screen goes black, and the program ends with a GWS graphic.
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Post by slappy on Nov 1, 2015 2:33:33 GMT -5
Let's go Hot Shots!
I'm disappointed in the Hot Shots.
Good for Lodi.
How creepy of Kane.
Come on Hawkins. You've got this.
I knew he could do it.
Wow. That was intense, the promo and the match. The Clown is a force to be reckoned with.
I'm glad Barrett won.
I was hoping The Legion Of Doom would win.
How ungrateful of Harper.
They truly are the World's Greatest Tag Team.
That man ruined what was a good match.
I'm putting all my money on Ironclad Vlad.
Damn.
My favorite part of the show was The Clown. I loved that part. It was interesting.
It was a really good show. I really enjoyed it.
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Post by Joe/Smurf on Nov 1, 2015 8:50:05 GMT -5
Good stuff as usual man! I enjoyed that the Hot Shots dressed up as the WGTT haha. Wouldn't be Halloween without costumes! I'm interested to see where everything goes with the Wyatt family (as it would appear). The Clown stuff was downright creepy. Keep up the good work!
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Post by Sizzle on Nov 1, 2015 10:59:36 GMT -5
Let's go Hot Shots! I'm disappointed in the Hot Shots. Good for Lodi. How creepy of Kane. Come on Hawkins. You've got this. I knew he could do it. Wow. That was intense, the promo and the match. The Clown is a force to be reckoned with. I'm glad Barrett won. I was hoping The Legion Of Doom would win. How ungrateful of Harper. They truly are the World's Greatest Tag Team. That man ruined what was a good match. I'm putting all my money on Ironclad Vlad. Damn. My favorite part of the show was The Clown. I loved that part. It was interesting. It was a really good show. I really enjoyed it. Thank you Slappy!
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Post by Sizzle on Nov 1, 2015 11:00:56 GMT -5
Good stuff as usual man! I enjoyed that the Hot Shots dressed up as the WGTT haha. Wouldn't be Halloween without costumes! I'm interested to see where everything goes with the Wyatt family (as it would appear). The Clown stuff was downright creepy. Keep up the good work! Thanks smurf, and yes.. The Wyatts are here. But you already knew that.
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Post by slappy on Nov 1, 2015 11:04:11 GMT -5
You're welcome.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 2, 2015 5:05:57 GMT -5
...Well, Mr Shamrock, this was an intriguing read... Very descriptive in parts, and a good flow but for me personally, there were a few instances of tenses being out of sync and some logic that I couldn't really get past without mentioning something...examples include the WGTT not registering that their opponents had mimicked them, Halloween or not, and the LOD's oddly out-of-character promo... The Clown was perhaps the most interesting part, as it unfolded in a way that made us think perhaps the identity would be revealed, given the exposition he gave earlier...however, this is lost as he begins the match with traditional wrestling moves instead of going in for the kill, which IMO would have added to his aura as a truly terrifying entity, leaving people both scared but intrigued as to who it could be...he also looks for weapons when he brought some into the ring when he arrived...these are just my two cents... Solid effort all round though; well done.
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Post by Sizzle on Nov 2, 2015 6:27:10 GMT -5
...Well, Mr Shamrock, this was an intriguing read... Very descriptive in parts, and a good flow but for me personally, there were a few instances of tenses being out of sync and some logic that I couldn't really get past without mentioning something...examples include the WGTT not registering that their opponents had mimicked them, Halloween or not, and the LOD's oddly out-of-character promo... The Clown was perhaps the most interesting part, as it unfolded in a way that made us think perhaps the identity would be revealed, given the exposition he gave earlier...however, this is lost as he begins the match with traditional wrestling moves instead of going in for the kill, which IMO would have added to his aura as a truly terrifying entity, leaving people both scared but intrigued as to who it could be...he also looks for weapons when he brought some into the ring when he arrived...these are just my two cents... Solid effort all round though; well done. Thank you for your critique. I look for this as a way to improve, and I gladly take it. As I read the WGTT and Hot Shots segment, I do see that that was a mistake on my part, and I am going to try to fix that. I agree with you on the LOD promo as well. Thank you for helping me. I am grateful that you saw things that irked you and showed me them.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 2, 2015 14:24:35 GMT -5
...Well, Mr Shamrock, this was an intriguing read... Very descriptive in parts, and a good flow but for me personally, there were a few instances of tenses being out of sync and some logic that I couldn't really get past without mentioning something...examples include the WGTT not registering that their opponents had mimicked them, Halloween or not, and the LOD's oddly out-of-character promo... The Clown was perhaps the most interesting part, as it unfolded in a way that made us think perhaps the identity would be revealed, given the exposition he gave earlier...however, this is lost as he begins the match with traditional wrestling moves instead of going in for the kill, which IMO would have added to his aura as a truly terrifying entity, leaving people both scared but intrigued as to who it could be...he also looks for weapons when he brought some into the ring when he arrived...these are just my two cents... Solid effort all round though; well done. Thank you for your critique. I look for this as a way to improve, and I gladly take it. As I read the WGTT and Hot Shots segment, I do see that that was a mistake on my part, and I am going to try to fix that. I agree with you on the LOD promo as well. Thank you for helping me. I am grateful that you saw things that irked you and showed me them. You're welcome - that's all I'm doing, is helping....I'm very glad that you take it as it is intended; constructive criticism and nothing more - I did note that I enjoyed it and that you have a real knack for this. Again - good work mate!
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Post by Sizzle on Nov 6, 2015 17:03:45 GMT -5
GLOBAL WRESTLING SYNDICATE EPISODE V: TURKEY BOWL The screen of viewers at home and in the Gulf Coast Athletic Event Center went static, and He showed up on the screen. The Clown was holding a camera in his hand."Ambrose walked out of our match at All Hallows' Eve. That disappoints me. I am ashamed of myself."He set the camera down."Maybe I shouldn't have wasted my time trying to wear him down, have him slowly suffer... I should've enjoyed what I was doing."He aimed the camera at a man by his feet. He grabbed the man's dark curly hair and pulled him up. His right eye was black, and dry blood stained his nostrils."I didn't do THIS to a human being by grappling with him... I did it by hitting him...HARD. I did it by gouging his eyes, bruising his body, busting him open..."He shifted the camera so it was viewing his upper body again. He dropped the man, but nothing could be seen, there was only a loud thud of the man's skull hitting the floor."Ambrose, I wish to meet you again..."Static.GWS TURKEY BOWL TOURNAMENT MATCHESRound 1, Match 1- X-Pac vs. Abyss Round 1, Match 2- Wade Barrett vs. Diamond Dallas Page Round 1, Match 3- Eddie Guerrero vs. Tommy Dreamer Round 1, Match 4- "The Whole F'n Show"Rob Van Dam vs. "The Swamp Monster" Luke Harper
Turkey Bowl R1, M1: X-Pac versus Abyss
Abyss and X-Pac entered the ring. X-Pac received loud cheers, and Abyss got boos. Ponyboy Johnson introduced the competitors.
"Introducing first, from Parts Unknown, weighing in at 350 pounds, ABYSS! And his opponent, from Minneapolis Minnesota, weighing 200 pounds, X-PAC!"
X-Pac started quick, racing around Abyss. X-Pac ran to the turnbuckle and hopped onto the second rope. He came down onto Abyss, but Abyss caught him. He powerbombed him not once, not twice, but three times. Abyss went for the pin, and got close, but only a two count. X-Pac rolled away and carged at Abyss with a lariat. Abyss caught him and used X-Pac's own momentum to shift him onto his shoulders. Abyss dropped down hard with a Samoan drop.
X-Pac stood up and suddenly hit a bicycle kick. He bent Abyss over, ran the ropes, and attempted a sunset flip. Abyss grabbed him and threw him onto his shoulders. He attempted to powerbomb him again, but X-Pac surprised him with an X-Factor! A hook of the leg, but only a two count. He looked to hit another X-Factor, but Abyss attacked with a spinebuster. He taunted at X-Pac to stand up. X-Pac got to his feet and was captured in a sidewalk slam.
1! 2! 3!
"Winner, and moving on to round two of the Turkey Bowl tournament, ABYSS!" Turkey Bowl R1, M2: Wade Barrett versus Diamond Dallas Page
Ponyboy Johnson announced the combatants and the match began. Wade Barrett put up his dukes and signaled for DDP to come at him. DDP raised his fists and walked over to him. Barrett struck DDP's side twice. DDP dodged the third punch and kicked Barrett's knees. DDP clotheslined Barrett down. Barrett swatted at Page's legs and tripped him. The two laid side by side, but Barrett got up, holding DDP's knee, raised it up, then slammed it to the mat. He signalled for the Bullhammer and pulled down his elbow pad.
Loud music, Chris Jericho's music, blasted in the arena. Jericho walked near the ring and distracted Wade Barrett. Barrett left the ring, and chased down Chris Jericho. He hit Chris Jericho with a Bullhammer, but this was at the referee, Boris Herrera's eight count. Barrett ran quickly back to the ring, but didn't get there in time. The ref signalled for the bell, ruling the match a DDP win by countout. Diamond Dallas Page taunted with his signature diamond cutter taunt.
"Ladies and Gentlemen, winner by countout, and facing Abyss in the semifinals of the Turkey Bowl tournament, Diamond Dallas Page!"
Adam "The Isotope" Mix Interviews The World's Greatest Tag Team
The camera followed Adam Mix chasing down the GWS World Tag Team Champions, Charlie Haas and Shelton Benjamin, The World's Greatest Tag Team.
Adam caught up with them:
"Gentlemen, may I ask you some questions?"
The tag champs stopped.
"So, at All Hallows' Eve, it was Halloween, and The Hot Shots, Miz and Justin Gabriel were dressed as you guys, did this affect you at all?"
Charlie Haas responded
"Is that a serious question? We're holding the belts now, not them."
"Did their masquerade bother you?"
Shelton Benjamin answered,
"It didn't bother either of us. If these two want to dress up as their favorite wrestlers, then let them."
The World's Greatest Tag Team walked away...
Turkey Bowl R1, M3: Eddie Guerrero versus Tommy Dreamer
"Introducing first, hailing from El Paso, Texas, weighing 220 pounds, EDDIE GUERRERO! His opponent, from Yonkers, New York, weighing in at 255 pounds, TOMMY DREAMER!"
Guerrero asked to start off with a test of strength, but Dreamer struck first. He kicked Guerrero and whipped him to the turnbuckle. Dreamer punched Guerrero in the head multiple times before he started attacking with slaps to the chest. He brought Eddie out of the corner with a neckbreaker. Dreamer attempted a pin, but Eddie kicked out. Dreamer again went on the attack. He grabbed Eddie's head and hit a snap suplex. Dreamer picked Guerrero up and expected to DDT him, but Guerrero escaped, ran the ropes, and hit a flying dropkick to the Innovator Of Violence.
Guerrero drop kicked Dreamer again. He hit a running bulldog and set up for the frog splash. Dreamer moved, got up and punched him on the tope rope. Dreamer climbed up and hit an avalanche butterfly suplex. He went for the cover, but only achieved a two count. Dreamer picked Guerrero up, but he shocked Tommy with a jawbreaker. He bounced off the ropes and landed a crossbody to Tommy in the center of the ring. Guerrero climbed to the top once again, leaped, hit the splash, and got the three count.
"Here's your winner, and moving to the second round of the Turkey Bowl Tournament, Eddie Guerrero!"
Turkey Bowl R1, M4: Rob Van Dam versus Luke Harper
Rob Van Dam walked onto the stage and pointed his thumbs at himself. He stepped down the ramp, but as he walked to the ring, The Swamp Monster Luke Harper jumped the barricade and attacked with a colossal lariat. He grabbed RVD and threw him into the ring. He dragged Van Dam up and Irish whipped him. Van Dam reversed it into an Irish whip of his own. Harper rebounded the ropes and hit a hurricanrana, surprising for a man his size, but not for a man with talent like his. Luke Harper grabbed his head and brought him up. He lifted him up and hit a scoop slam piledriver. He covered Van Dam, but he kicked out.
Van Dam soon found himself on the offensive attack. He drop kicked Harper back to the turnbuckle. RVD monkey flipped Harper closer to the desired spot for him to finish off the match. RVD climbed to the top rope and "Rob Van Dam" chants ensued. He leaped off the top rope, but Harper caught him. The Swamp Monster adjusted RVD's position and powerbombed him. Luke went down and wore him out even more with a Gator Roll. RVD groggily got up, and walked straight into a discus clothesline. Luke Harper pinned RVD and got the win.
"Ladies and Gentlemen, you're winner, The Swamp Monster, LUKE HARPER!"
The camera panned around the arena, and then at the Turkey Bowl Trophy backstage in a glass case.
The screen goes black, and the program ends with a GWS graphic.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 7, 2015 6:45:13 GMT -5
...the ubiquitous Mr Shamrock... Another fine effort, much in line with the previous show, All Hallow's Eve - well done. The opening with The Clown was quite well done, showing that whoever he is, he is intent on being as ruthless as possible. I'm glad that the WGTT addressed the fact they were mimicked - even if the answer is that they couldn't have cared less - we NEED to know that, otherwise why bother? Just wondering. A few grammatical slip ups here and there, and you've kept to past tense (which I personally use) for the most part...if it's all one tense it flows better IMO. While the matches were action packed and solid, they felt a tad choppy in places; like certain things were missed out...maybe it's just me, but for instance how X-Pac hit a Bicycle Kick after just being planted with a Samoan Drop... Thanks for sharing your work.
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Post by Sizzle on Nov 7, 2015 9:32:59 GMT -5
...the ubiquitous Mr Shamrock... Another fine effort, much in line with the previous show, All Hallow's Eve - well done. The opening with The Clown was quite well done, showing that whoever he is, he is intent on being as ruthless as possible. I'm glad that the WGTT addressed the fact they were mimicked - even if the answer is that they couldn't have cared less - we NEED to know that, otherwise why bother? Just wondering. A few grammatical slip ups here and there, and you've kept to past tense (which I personally use) for the most part...if it's all one tense it flows better IMO. While the matches were action packed and solid, they felt a tad choppy in places; like certain things were missed out...maybe it's just me, but for instance how X-Pac hit a Bicycle Kick after just being planted with a Samoan Drop... Thanks for sharing your work. Thank you again Chris, I have to check up on my grammar. Glad you came back to read.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 7, 2015 18:25:09 GMT -5
...the ubiquitous Mr Shamrock... Another fine effort, much in line with the previous show, All Hallow's Eve - well done. The opening with The Clown was quite well done, showing that whoever he is, he is intent on being as ruthless as possible. I'm glad that the WGTT addressed the fact they were mimicked - even if the answer is that they couldn't have cared less - we NEED to know that, otherwise why bother? Just wondering. A few grammatical slip ups here and there, and you've kept to past tense (which I personally use) for the most part...if it's all one tense it flows better IMO. While the matches were action packed and solid, they felt a tad choppy in places; like certain things were missed out...maybe it's just me, but for instance how X-Pac hit a Bicycle Kick after just being planted with a Samoan Drop... Thanks for sharing your work. Thank you again Chris, I have to check up on my grammar. Glad you came back to read. You're welcome - again, just wanting to help; GWS is a fed that stands out to me - well done. I just wish others would support each other here, you know?
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