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Post by Sizzle on Nov 7, 2015 19:40:19 GMT -5
Thank you again Chris, I have to check up on my grammar. Glad you came back to read. You're welcome - again, just wanting to help; GWS is a fed that stands out to me - well done. I just wish others would support each other here, you know? I see what you mean! And you wanna to talk about standing out? SUMMIT PRO is the most unique promotion ever seen.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 7, 2015 19:58:00 GMT -5
You're welcome - again, just wanting to help; GWS is a fed that stands out to me - well done. I just wish others would support each other here, you know? I see what you mean! And you wanna to talk about standing out? SUMMIT PRO is the most unique promotion ever seen. Just something I notice from time to time. Thank you very much - I appreciate it. What's important to me though is that it's not different or unique just for the sake of being different or unique...it's inherently mine with an approach that resonates with me. Thanks again.
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Post by Sizzle on Nov 11, 2015 12:52:53 GMT -5
GLOBAL WRESTLING SYNDICATE EPISODE 5.5: TURKEY BOWL Pt.2 The camera panned away from the Turkey Bowl trophy and showed GWS' Home arena, the Gulf Coast Athletic Event Center, filled to the brim with GWS fans. The fans were about to witness the go-home show to the WF Network's first collaborative Special Event of the year, November To Remember, where the finalists of the GWS Turkey Bowl Tournament will collide, and only one will walk out with not only bragging rights, but the GWS Turkey Bowl trophy.
Turkey Bowl R2, M1: Eddie Guerrero
"Ladies and gentlemen, this match is set for one fall and is the first match in round two of the GWS Turkey Bowl Tournament! Introducing first, from El Paso, Texas, weighing in at 220 pounds, EDDIE GUERRERO! And his opponent, weighing 275 pounds, The Swamp Monster, LUKE HARPER!"
The Swamp Monster, Luke Harper started off with hard hitting punches to the lower torso of Eddie Guerrero. He whipped him to the corner and continued the punches. Harper put Guerrero into the tree of woe. Harper stomped a few times, causing Guerrero to fall flat onto the mat. Harper picked him up and hit a backbreaker. Guerrero rolled out of the ring and leaned on the barricades.
Guerrero was walking back to the ring when Luke Harper dove out of the ring through the ropes. Guerrero moved over and Harper bounced off the steel barriers.
"1! 2! 3! 4!-"
Eddie climbed through the ropes and hopped onto and over the ropes, going down onto Harper with a cross body. By now, the referee was at a count of eight. The two men were leaning on the apron. Guerrero pushed Harper into the ring and followed him in. Guerrero climbed up to the top rope and leaped, about to hit the Frog Splash.
Luke Harper got up on one knee and caught him. He proceeded with a fallaway slam. Guerrero spun about and landed on his hands and knees. He quickly got to his feet and kicked Luke Harper with an enziguri. Harper fell back to the mat. Once again, Guerrero went to the top rope and jumped, this time landing the Frog Splash.
"1! 2! 3!"
"Here's your winner and moving to the finals of the GWS Turkey Bowl Tournament, EDDIE GUERRERO!"
Turkey Bowl R2, M2: Wade Barrett versus Abyss
"This match is the second and final match in round two of the GWS Turkey Bowl Tournament, and is set for one fall. Introducing first, fighting out of Preston, England, weighing a total of 246 pounds, Wade Barrett! And his opponent, from Parts Unknown, weighing in at 350 pounds, ABYSS!"
Barrett and Abyss started off with a test of strength. Abyss pushed Barrett off and sent him backwards. Barrett ran to Abyss and tried to hit the Bull Hammer Elbow. Abyss ducked, grabbed Barrett's waist, and tossed him with a German Suplex. Abyss grabbed Barrett's head, put his arm around his neck, and carried Wade Barrett so that he was pointing straight up like a skyscraper. Barrett kicked his legs around, causing Abyss to drop him down. Barrett hit a DDT and went for the cover. He only achieved a one count. Barrett got up and pulled down his elbow pad. Abyss climbed to his feet and Barrett ran towards him. Abyss tackled Wade Barrett down to the mat and began to throw huge punches to Wade's jaw.
Abyss dragged Barrett up and carried him in the air and dropped him down, shades of Ultimate Warrior were showed with the Gorilla press. He went for the pin. Only a two count. Abyss grabbed Barrett again and hoisted him up onto his shoulders. Barrett's back was facing down, which could only mean one thing, Abyss was planning to end the contest with his finishing move, Shock Treatment. Barrett elbowed his head multiple times, again escaping the grasp of Abyss. Abyss turned around and Wade Barrett lifted his knee to Abyss' skull. Abyss backed away, but Barrett again went on the attack. He lifted Abyss up to his shoulders and slammed him down with the Wasteland. Abyss slowly climbed to his feet. Barrett ran towards him and drilled his elbow straight to Abyss' head. He went for the cover.
"1! 2! 3!"
"Here's your winner, and fighting Eddie Guerrero at the WF Network Collaboration Special Event November To Remember, Wade Barrett!"
A hidden camera showed a familiar, heavily tattooed man in a wooden rocking chair. Another familiar man stood beside him, the man with the sheep mask. The Swamp Monster, Luke Harper walked towards the tattooed man, who had his arms wide open. He stood up and put his hands on Harper's shoulders.
"Don't worry Harper, you may have lost, but it doesn't matter. There's no need to waste your time and fight for petty, materialistic things like a trophy, when you've got a family like us, man... She is proud that you accepted this defeat..."
He grabbed Luke Harper's head, kissed his forehead, and sent his skull straight to the floor.
The screen goes black, and the program ends with a GWS graphic.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 11, 2015 21:17:50 GMT -5
Hi there mate,
Well, another solid edition of GWS...being only two matches it felt like a Network Special, which is good IMO - making the importance for N2R even moreso...
I'll admit that I'm still not following the matches as cohesively as I'd like, but it is interesting that the finishers are italicised...nice work...
The tenses are again back and forth but if that's comfortable for you, by all means, no worries...intriguing way to wrap it up too, with Harper and Wyatt.
Good stuff bud! You got my other PM, yes?
Cheers
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Post by Sizzle on Nov 11, 2015 22:18:57 GMT -5
Hi there mate, Well, another solid edition of GWS...being only two matches it felt like a Network Special, which is good IMO - making the importance for N2R even moreso... I'll admit that I'm still not following the matches as cohesively as I'd like, but it is interesting that the finishers are italicised...nice work... The tenses are again back and forth but if that's comfortable for you, by all means, no worries...intriguing way to wrap it up too, with Harper and Wyatt. Good stuff bud! You got my other PM, yes? Cheers Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed. As for the tenses, I get kind of odd with them, and one goes one way and then it just comes out like that, but I'm alright with it, I hope others are too. Yes, I got your PM. The changes will be made. Goodnight.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 11, 2015 23:40:59 GMT -5
Hi there mate, Well, another solid edition of GWS...being only two matches it felt like a Network Special, which is good IMO - making the importance for N2R even moreso... I'll admit that I'm still not following the matches as cohesively as I'd like, but it is interesting that the finishers are italicised...nice work... The tenses are again back and forth but if that's comfortable for you, by all means, no worries...intriguing way to wrap it up too, with Harper and Wyatt. Good stuff bud! You got my other PM, yes? Cheers Thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed. As for the tenses, I get kind of odd with them, and one goes one way and then it just comes out like that, but I'm alright with it, I hope others are too. Yes, I got your PM. The changes will be made. Goodnight. Good afternoon. All good - I like your enthusiasm mate.
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Post by Sizzle on Jan 29, 2016 21:31:05 GMT -5
After an unscheduled two month hiatus after WF Network's November To Remember Collaboration PPV Event, GWS-The Global Wrestling Syndicate is finally back with a night full of spectacular matches and conflicts. Live from the Gulf Coast Athletic Event Center, see who won the GWS Turkey Bowl, and witness Curt Hawkins defend his Hardcore TV Championship, tonight on GWS TV!
GLOBAL WRESTLING SYNDICATE EPISODE VI The screen showed a video package of Eddie Guerrero's Turkey Bowl Tournament win, which granted him a GWS World Championship match. It showed his wins against Luke Harper, Tommy Dreamer, and in the decisive match, Wade Barrett. The video displayed in text that Eddie will participate in his first match since his win.
GWS HARDCORE TV CHAMPIONSHIP: CURT HAWKINS VERSUS ??
Curt Hawkins stood in the ring next to Teddy Long, surrounded by thousands of fans in the GCAEC (Gulf Coast Athletic Event Center) in Florida. Hawkins was wearing a sleeveless hooded jacket with the GWS Hardcore TV Championship around his shoulder. He glanced at Teddy Long and Mr. Long began to speak.
"As you know, I am Teddy Long, your General Manager of Global Wrestling Syndicate. I am proud to announce that the GWS Hardcore TV Championship is becoming a true Television Title, and Mr. Hawkins here, will defend his title here tonight and every night that he can."
Teddy handed the microphone to Hawkins.
"Well, I didn't want this. As champion, I should have certain rights, and one of those rights is to defend my title when I want and where I want. Again, I didn't want this because I know I am vital to this company, and you don't want to lose me Teddy, but for that same reason, I am willing to defend my title here tonight. And since I need to lead by example, I have handpicked a worthy adversary to defend this belt against. I searched far and wide, and I found someone that will prove to be my ultimate challenge."
Booming theme music erupted in the arena.
"Ladies and gentlemen this match is for the GWS Hardcore TV Championship and is a no disqualification match. Introducing first, from Tampa, Florida, he is The Big Show!"
Teddy Long's face showed a look of utter disbelief. Curt Hawkins had picked Big Show? Curt stands in the corner waiting to be introduced.
"And his opponent, from Queens, New York, the GWS Hardcore TV Champion, Curt Hawkins!"
Curt Hawkins walked over to the Giant and looked up. Big Show smirked and cracked his knuckles.
Curt Hawkins started off by throwing jabs to the gut of Big Show. Big Show laughed them off and grabbed Curt Hawkins by the throat. He lifted him up, going to hit him with his signature Chokeslam, but Hawkins elbowed out of the hold. He ran the ropes and bounced off of them, sending himself into the Big Show with a forearm. Big Show stumbled for a second, but then got right back on his game and clotheslined Curt Hawkins. Hawkins laid on the floor for a few seconds, holding his neck. He got up, but was quickly attacked by Big Show. Hawkins ducked the punch and rebounded the ropes. He hits Big Show with an enzuigiri, and the giant oddly fell to the floor, flat on his back. Curt Hawkins climbed the ropes and hit Big Show with a Heat Seeking Elbow. He hooked the leg...
"1, 2, 3!"
"Your winner and still GWS Hardcore TV Champion, Curt Hawkins!"
Hawkins picked up his belt and went backstage, not even bothering to get his hand raised.
LIVE INTERVIEW WITH DEAN AMBROSE
GWS' own Adam "The Isotope" Mix, was in Dean Ambrose's house, in his living room, sitting in a chair across from Dean Ambrose, who wore a wifebeater and torn jeans.
"Hello Dean, we're here to speak about the attack you suffered from by the hands of who many are calling Clown."
Dean responded,
"He's a joke, he probably saw what I did back before I came here and thought to himself he could do just what I did. He attacked me with weapons and sent me through a table. Normally that wouldn't do anything to me, I would bounce right back up and attack him myself. But I got injured, I was pissin' blood because of that freak, my kidneys were messed up. But now I'm healthy, and he's got to face me now, now that I know what he'll try to do."
"Interesting, Dean. Is there anything el-"
A loud thump can be heard in an adjacent room.
"What was that?" Adam asked.
"I don't know, but it's not important. What is important is the fact that when I meet Clown again, he'll have a real reason to hide his face behind that silly makeup" Dean remarked.
A man came in the living room and took out the cameraman.
The camera landed on a couch and had a good view of Adam Mix, Dean Ambrose, and the attacker. The attacker went straight for Dean Ambrose after he ambushed the cameraman. The camera showed the man's face, a face covered in clown makeup. He wore his same green wig and a torn apart button down shirt. Dean and Clown were brawling now, pounding each others' heads with punches. Dean pushed Clown into a wall, and knocked down a glass table in their path. Dean Ambrose pushed Clown off and sent him into the shards. Dean Ambrose grabbed Clown and dragged him to his front door, and by now, Adam Mix had picked up the camera and was following the action. Dean threw him into his front door and then opened it, slammed it on his head, and tossed him out the door, sending him rolling down the entry way with a slight slope. Ambrose looked to Adam and said
"Get that out of here."
D.O.C LUKE GALLOWS VERSUS LODI
The program returned with Lodi standing in the ring. Luke Gallows walked out and went to his corner, stretching and warming up.
"This match is set for one fall, introducing first, from Asheboro, North Carolina, Lodi! And his opponent, from Chicago, Illinois, D.O.C Luke Gallows!"
The D.O.C started off hot. He smashed an elbow onto Lodi's head sending him down to the mat. Gallows grabbed Lodi's leg, picked it up (while simultaneously picking Lodi up), and dropped Lodi to the ground. He went for the cover, but Lodi quickly kicked out.
They were both up now, and Lodi shot at Gallows with punches to the lower torso. Lodi dropkicked Gallows, sending him to the corner of the ring, where he sat leaning on the turnbuckles. Lodi started stomping on Gallows' head. Lodi propped him up and attempted to suplex the big man. Luke Gallows countered with a suplex of his own, which smacked Lodi's back to the canvas with an echoing thud. Lodi sat up, holding his lower back. Gallows walked over to him and locked him in a headlock. He brought Lodi up, while still maintaining the hold. The D.O.C pounded the cranium of Lodi a few times before releasing him from his grasp. Luke Gallows pushed Lodi off. Lodi stumbled, holding his head and neck. Gallows attacked with a decapitating big boot. Lodi dropped to the mat, which made a loud slapping sound. Lodi laid there for nearly a minute before he even started to get up. Lodi stood up slowly and looked at Gallows running at him like a freight train with his signature Axe Bomber. Gallows pinned him, but didn't even bother to hook the leg.
"1, 2, 3!"
"Here's your winner, Luke Gallows!"
The referee raised Gallows' arm, but Gallows pushed him away and rolled out of the ring. Gallows grabbed a microphone and got back in the ring. He raised the mic, standing above his incapacitated opponent. Gallows kicked the sprawled-out limbs of Lodi closer to his torso. The D.O.C lifted the microphone close to his mouth. He opened his mouth, but didn't speak. He attacked his victim with the microphone, giving the man a busted lip and a gash on his brow. Gallow's music began to play and he exited the ring, walking out through the crowd.
KANE CONFRONTS HIM
Kane walked through the curtain and onto the stage. He goes to the ring and grabs a microphone.
"Explain yourself, bearded freak."
Immediately, the lights flicker and the man is sitting in a rocking chair on the entry ramp. Beside him are two behemoths, a familiar face in Luke Harper, with his dirty wifebeater and faded jeans, and the man in the sheep mask, who is wearing a dark green jumpsuit.
The man in the rocking chair is wearing an orange Hawaiian shirt over a black undershirt. He dons baggy white pants and snakeskin shoes. His face is covered in scraggly hair and his plump cheeks are bright red.
The man took off his hat and put his lengthy brown hair back. He lifted a microphone up to his mouth.
"Kane, do you know who we are?"
Kane replied,
"Does it look like I do?"
The bearded man chuckled and spoke again.
"You're a trip, man. We are The Wyatt Family, a name that will stay in not only your mind, but in every single witness' mind. And it will stay there... forever!"
"Quit the rambling, who are you?"
"My name is Bray Wyatt, and this is Erick Rowan."
The man in the jumpsuit took off his mask, revealing an orange beard and a pale face.
Bray Wyatt looked at Luke Harper
"I'm sure you all know who this is, I know a certain someone who knows him very well."
He punctuated the end of the sentence with a wide grin.
"Kane, you are a demon... well... at least that's what they call you. A demon should be ruthless and the embodiment of evil. You are none of that! You can't win, and it's affecting you. You won't win unless you have a true drive, someone breathin' down on your neck, spittin' in your face! Sister Abigail does this for me, she saved me. She saved Erick here, she saved Luke, who was being held back by materialistic things, like friends. You too can join me, and be saved by Sister Abigail."
Kane went to speak, but the lights flicker and the trio vanishes.
DAMIEN SANDOW TALKS WITH TEDDY
"You know me and him were friends right? Ever since we were little kids, we had each others' backs. From grade school to wrestling school, we were best of friends. But Luke decides to throw all our friendship down the drain by joining some bearded cult?! I'm sorry Teddy, this is just bothering me. Why'd you come in here in the first place?"
Damien looks at Teddy Long.
"I came in here to say that you and Taz will be in a tag team match, playa! It's tonight! Against The Usos, who your good buddy Luke put out of action for a while."
The camera goes back to the ring.
THE USOS VERSUS DAMIEN SANDOW AND TAZ
"Introducing first, standing in the ring, weighing in at a combined weight of 479 pounds, Jimmy and Jey, The Usos!"
The twins dance and cheer waiting for Damien Sandow and Taz.
Damien Sandow and Taz enter the arena, but without music.
"And their opponents, Damien Sandow and Taz!"
Taz started off, locking up with Jimmy Uso. Taz whipped Jimmy into the turnbuckle. Taz walked over to the Uso and punched him in the stomach. He attacked by shoving his shoulder into the torso of Jimmy. Taz dragged him to the middle of the ring and wrapped his arms around the Uso. Jimmy flipped off of Taz as the latter attempted a German suplex. He ran and tagged in Jey Uso. Jey Uso ran in, but Taz reversed a leaping Uso into a flapjack. Taz tagged in Sandow, and Sandow immediately went after Jey. He threw elbows at the Uso's back and made Jey fall to the mat. Jey stood up slowly, and Sandow attempted a dropkick. Jey moved back and bounced off the ropes, he came back at Sandow with a Superkick. Sandow fell hard, and Jey quickly hooks the leg. The count reached two before Taz saved the pinfall. Jimmy Uso came in and attacked Taz. Taz ducks the punch and suplexed Jimmy across the ring. He rolled out onto the outside floor. Taz grabbed Jey and put him in the Tazmission. After about a second of the hold, he hit a Tazmission-Plex. Sandow went for the pin,
"1, 2, 3!"
And got the win.
"You're winners, Damien Sandow and Taz!"
EDDIE GUERRERO VERSUS THE MIZ W/ JUSTIN GABRIEL
"Introducing first, from El Paso, Texas, winner of the GWS Turkey Bowl Tournament, Eddie Guerrero! And his opponent, accompanied by Justin Gabriel, representing The Hot Shots, The Miz!"
Eddie Guerrero walked down the entry way holding the lustrous Turkey Bowl trophy. Justin Gabriel walked beside the Miz, pointing at him and patting his back. The Miz knew a win here would boost him up in the rankings.
The bout began with a traditional lock up. The Miz and Eddie Guerrero matched up evenly for this first contact, and broke clean using the ropes. Another lock up, this time with The Miz in control. The Miz wrenched Eddie's head in a side headlock. He started running and hit a bulldog. The Miz went for a speedy cover, but Guerrero kicked out with ease. The two were back on their feet. Miz ran at Guerrero, but Eddie countered with a monkey-flip, sending The Miz flat onto the mat. The Miz stood up and ran into an arm drag by Guerrero. Guerrero maintained control of the arm and pulled it back. The Miz raised his hand as if he were going to tap, but eventually escaped the hold.
The Miz and Guerrero stood up, but The Miz raked Guerrero's eyes, and at the same time, Justin Gabriel hopped up onto the apron and stood there yelling at the ref to distract him. Guerrero stepped back after his eyes were raked, then surprised The Miz with an enzuigiri. The referee, Boris Herrera turned around and counts the pin. The Miz kicks out at two. The Miz and Eddie both take their time getting up. Eddie looked back at The Miz while holding onto the rope. He jumped up and hit a springboard crossbody onto The Miz. Eddie rolled him up and held him down with all his weight.
"1, 2, 3!"
Eddie startled The Miz with a crossbody out of nowhere and won the match.
"Here's your winner, Eddie Guerrero!"
Eddie rolled out of the ring to get his trophy while Justin Gabriel checked on his pal. Eddie grabbed the trophy, but GWS World Champion Ryan Reeves came from nowhere and knocked the trophy, and Guerrero onto the floor. Reeves picked up the trophy with one hand and began to peel the outside floor padding from the ground. He exposed the concrete floor and threw the trophy to the ground. It cracked into tiny fragments and pieces scattered all around the ring area floor. He stomped on the larger remnants and made them smaller. He raised the GWS World Championship and screamed.
"This is The Silverback's belt!"
The screen goes black, and the program ends with a GWS graphic.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 30, 2016 16:14:32 GMT -5
Well, it's good to have you back, mate. I must say I like how you section things off, use of different text functions and how accessible your work is. I often find that when I give my thoughts on others' work it may come off like I'm grading it (as if I was a teacher) but it's only because I'm quite particular about uses of certain techniques and rules (sticking with one tense for example), but I'll try not to do that here. ... Interesting to see The Clown back. I like that you use Lodi; not many would do the same for their Fed. Yes, your matches are short but it works within the spectrum of what you're doing. I'm intrigued as to how you would handle using The Wyatt Family. The Turkey Bowl trophy would be 'illustrious'. Seeing as you're describing an actual object though, perhaps a better adjective for it would be 'prestigious'. Good stuff bud - welcome back once again.
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Post by Sizzle on Jan 30, 2016 17:56:53 GMT -5
Well, it's good to have you back, mate. I must say I like how you section things off, use of different text functions and how accessible your work is. I often find that when I give my thoughts on others' work it may come off like I'm grading it (as if I was a teacher) but it's only because I'm quite particular about uses of certain techniques and rules (sticking with one tense for example), but I'll try not to do that here. ... Interesting to see The Clown back. I like that you use Lodi; not many would do the same for their Fed. Yes, your matches are short but it works within the spectrum of what you're doing. I'm intrigued as to how you would handle using The Wyatt Family. The Turkey Bowl trophy would be 'illustrious'. Seeing as you're describing an actual object though, perhaps a better adjective for it would be 'prestigious'. Good stuff bud - welcome back once again. Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. When I wrote lustrous I meant as if something were shiny, but thank you anyway, I'm sure I would have made that mistake if I did write that. Again, thank you. I'll get to SUMMIT PRO soon, over the past few days I was writing for the E-Fes on here, WFWF, so now that I've got less on my hands and it's the weekend, I'll respond to some SLAM! shows and SUMMIT PRO.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 30, 2016 18:56:37 GMT -5
Well, it's good to have you back, mate. I must say I like how you section things off, use of different text functions and how accessible your work is. I often find that when I give my thoughts on others' work it may come off like I'm grading it (as if I was a teacher) but it's only because I'm quite particular about uses of certain techniques and rules (sticking with one tense for example), but I'll try not to do that here. ... Interesting to see The Clown back. I like that you use Lodi; not many would do the same for their Fed. Yes, your matches are short but it works within the spectrum of what you're doing. I'm intrigued as to how you would handle using The Wyatt Family. The Turkey Bowl trophy would be 'illustrious'. Seeing as you're describing an actual object though, perhaps a better adjective for it would be 'prestigious'. Good stuff bud - welcome back once again. Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. When I wrote lustrous I meant as if something were shiny, but thank you anyway, I'm sure I would have made that mistake if I did write that. Again, thank you. I'll get to SUMMIT PRO soon, over the past few days I was writing for the E-Fes on here, WFWF, so now that I've got less on my hands and it's the weekend, I'll respond to some SLAM! shows and SUMMIT PRO. You're welcome. Oh, okay, so the focus was instead on the physical attributes of the trophy, rather than what it represents? If that's the case, then perhaps the likes of 'dazzling', 'radiant' or 'luminous' could help too. While the trophy is important, for me personally the prestige and acclaim that comes with it. If you could, I'd appreciate it, if not, that's fine too. Cheers
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Post by Sizzle on Jan 30, 2016 19:01:30 GMT -5
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. When I wrote lustrous I meant as if something were shiny, but thank you anyway, I'm sure I would have made that mistake if I did write that. Again, thank you. I'll get to SUMMIT PRO soon, over the past few days I was writing for the E-Fes on here, WFWF, so now that I've got less on my hands and it's the weekend, I'll respond to some SLAM! shows and SUMMIT PRO. You're welcome. Oh, okay, so the focus was instead on the physical attributes of the trophy, rather than what it represents? If that's the case, then perhaps the likes of 'dazzling', 'radiant' or 'luminous' could help too. While the trophy is important, for me personally the prestige and acclaim that comes with it. If you could, I'd appreciate it, if not, that's fine too. Cheers Thank you for giving me some words to use. I also appreciate that you said to focus on the importance of it. I'll try and improve on episode VII.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 30, 2016 19:44:00 GMT -5
You're welcome. Oh, okay, so the focus was instead on the physical attributes of the trophy, rather than what it represents? If that's the case, then perhaps the likes of 'dazzling', 'radiant' or 'luminous' could help too. While the trophy is important, for me personally the prestige and acclaim that comes with it. If you could, I'd appreciate it, if not, that's fine too. Cheers Thank you for giving me some words to use. I also appreciate that you said to focus on the importance of it. I'll try and improve on episode VII. You're most welcome; I'm glad I could help you - that's all I want to do. I look forward to episode VII.
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Post by Chicago on Feb 4, 2016 1:06:08 GMT -5
Welcome back to the board Sizzle ! Your presence is vital here and GWS still has much to offer, just so you know. Hawkins nearly gambled and lost, but he did prove himself to be a defending champion. Ambrose is a real treat and it's always great when you can bring out that crazy side in him. Gallows has a lot of potential it seems. I like the promo tease that led into the beat down. Hmm...The Wyatt Family vs. Kane? I think you'll do a much better job with this than WWE has in recent years. Damn Teddy Long and his constant tag team matches lol, but this one I can be thankful for since it pairs Sandow with Taz. Eddie comes across like a true vet of the squared circle and I like the way in which he finished off Miz. Very believable move for picking up a quick win. Breaking the trophy into pieces is a great heel tactic while Eddie's riding high. Definitely looking forward to him and Reeves facing off for the title. Thank you for posting this, and keep up the excellent work!
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Post by Joe/Smurf on Feb 4, 2016 21:48:13 GMT -5
Glad to see another episode of GWS on the forums! Enjoyed the interaction with Dean and the Clown, the Wyatt Family -- I especially thought you captured Bray's voice well! Really looking forward to seeing Eddie get some revenge on the Silverback!
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Post by MadDogJoe on Feb 7, 2016 12:07:23 GMT -5
I am enjoying these storylines. There are a lot of innovative ideas you are showing amongst your title contenders and divisions. I particularly like the tag division.
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Post by Sizzle on Feb 7, 2016 12:15:32 GMT -5
I am enjoying these storylines. There are a lot of innovative ideas you are showing amongst your title contenders and divisions. I particularly like the tag division. Thanks man. I'm actually trying to make the tag division better, I've only got a few teams at the moment, so when I get a few new figures maybe I will add them to my roster.
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Post by ricflair4ever on Feb 8, 2016 8:52:49 GMT -5
I just "binge watched" all your episodes. Great building of your roster from the first show to the last. Such an eclectic mix of names and everyone seems to have something to do that is suited for their character. Your use of Ryback has been quite enjoyable and his feud with Eddie is very original and intriuging. I love the way you're booking Hawkins. And your writing for Sandow and Bray Wyatt is very good.....very fitting. The Clown vs Ambrose is a great example of suspense,horror and wrestling all rolled into one. A live action comic book/thriller story between two depraived ,manaical, fearless violence mongers who are crazy.....or are they? Ambrose maybe......but we know nothing about the Clown. Brilliant
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Post by Sizzle on Feb 8, 2016 16:08:40 GMT -5
I just "binge watched" all your episodes. Great building of your roster from the first show to the last. Such an eclectic mix of names and everyone seems to have something to do that is suited for their character. Your use of Ryback has been quite enjoyable and his feud with Eddie is very original and intriuging. I love the way you're booking Hawkins. And your writing for Sandow and Bray Wyatt is very good.....very fitting. The Clown vs Ambrose is a great example of suspense,horror and wrestling all rolled into one. A live action comic book/thriller story between two depraived ,manaical, fearless violence mongers who are crazy.....or are they? Ambrose maybe......but we know nothing about the Clown. Brilliant Thanks man! It's cool to see someone that isn't a text fed writer here. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 4, 2016 15:19:53 GMT -5
Unlocked as per OP's request.
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Jimmy Toucan (+ The Flipout)
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'They should just give us album of the year...right now.'
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Post by Jimmy Toucan (+ The Flipout) on Sept 4, 2016 22:27:04 GMT -5
Trying to juggle reading Chris' SUMMIT PRO and GWS here man. You have a great style, I like it! So many cool reimaginings of established characters in cool ways, like Hawkins, Ryback as Silverback and Sandow. This Clown is interesting too, has his own thing going on. Kind of like SUMMIT PRO's Occasus group, which I reckon Chris created as five Undertaker-type ghosts or something. Either way, the creativity is awesome and you should be proud. I'll be sure to keep checking out your shows.
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