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Post by Stuart? on Jan 4, 2016 5:36:03 GMT -5
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Post by attitudesback on Jan 6, 2016 14:30:57 GMT -5
Liked the little intro. Liking this opening match so far. Really strong opener. Managing to capture the styles well. Lack of string is hurting some of these shots. Decent finish. Jericho vs. Del Rio is pretty good so far. Nice finish again, glad Y2J got the win. Enjoyed the backstage Rock interaction. CENA HEEL TURN! Lol Yes! Rock laid the er out. Awesome lighting effect for the Hunter entrance. Some awesome poses in this one. Man, Hunter gets thrown into matches and still wins. Damn shovel is back at it. The not-so crazy Dean Ambrose! This should be good. String! Awesome. Lol Great main event. Technical matches have always been a good highlight of your fed. Nice event. Crazy to see you put another solid showing out so quickly. I'd liked to have seen some more arena, it seemed very black with nothing on the right side of the ring. A ring skirt, even if all black would've looked good too. Would've liked string in the early matches, I gotta suggest this stuff (http://www.hobbycraft.co.uk/hemline-nylon-invisible-thread-200mtrs-clear/567039-1000) it's cheap as chips and does a solid job. Don't even need to edit it out. Other than that, was a really solid show with some great matches!
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Post by Stuart? on Jan 6, 2016 14:37:38 GMT -5
Liked the little intro. Liking this opening match so far. Really strong opener. Managing to capture the styles well. Lack of string is hurting some of these shots. Decent finish. Jericho vs. Del Rio is pretty good so far. Nice finish again, glad Y2J got the win. Enjoyed the backstage Rock interaction. CENA HEEL TURN! Lol Yes! Rock laid the er out. Awesome lighting effect for the Hunter entrance. Some awesome poses in this one. Man, Hunter gets thrown into matches and still wins. Damn shovel is back at it. The not-so crazy Dean Ambrose! This should be good. String! Awesome. Lol Great main event. Technical matches have always been a good highlight of your fed. Nice event. Crazy to see you put another solid showing out so quickly. I'd liked to have seen some more arena, it seemed very black with nothing on the right side of the ring. A ring skirt, even if all black would've looked good too. Would've liked string in the early matches, I gotta suggest this stuff (http://www.hobbycraft.co.uk/hemline-nylon-invisible-thread-200mtrs-clear/567039-1000) it's cheap as chips and does a solid job. Don't even need to edit it out. Other than that, was a really solid show with some great matches! Thanks for the advice mate! I'm debating on carrying on the tournament or doing a Fatal 4 Way between the final four at my next big show (Likely in June) as school is getting pretty intense with my AS exams coming up. I might be able to do it, but I'm not 100% sure.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 7, 2016 7:12:37 GMT -5
Sorry I've been a bit behind with your fed bro, I intend on playing catch up but had to shoot this show a reply. I really like your stripped back arena, you hold a flag for that type of simplistic set up, similar to my own so I admire. Your production and graphics are awesome, really love that BOLA logo. Orton Vs Reigns was great, especially loved the poses setting up the superman punch in the corner, as well as the leapfrog/RKO spots. Jericho Del-Rio was great too, loved the codebreaker/double stomp spot in the corner! A nice throwback having Ziggler and E together there an enjoyable bout. Loved the shots on HHHs entrance. Bryan Vs Ambrose was intense! Sick spot on the outside into the stairs early on, will a pic fed ever have Daniel Bryan actually connect with a diving headbutt?! nice sequences throughout, the lariat/German Suplex was particularly crisp. Nice to see Bryan get the win. If I had any advice bro, I'd have liked to have seen more string used, but you manage to do mid air shots without exposing that, so well done there. I also could have done without Fall out Boy, but that's personal preference Really enjoyable stuff! I like your fed a lot man I'll be sure to catch up on the rest (probably gunna be in backwards order, sorry dude!)
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Post by Stuart? on Jan 7, 2016 11:06:48 GMT -5
Sorry I've been a bit behind with your fed bro, I intend on playing catch up but had to shoot this show a reply. I really like your stripped back arena, you hold a flag for that type of simplistic set up, similar to my own so I admire. Your production and graphics are awesome, really love that BOLA logo. Orton Vs Reigns was great, especially loved the poses setting up the superman punch in the corner, as well as the leapfrog/RKO spots. Jericho Del-Rio was great too, loved the codebreaker/double stomp spot in the corner! A nice throwback having Ziggler and E together there an enjoyable bout. Loved the shots on HHHs entrance. Bryan Vs Ambrose was intense! Sick spot on the outside into the stairs early on, will a pic fed ever have Daniel Bryan actually connect with a diving headbutt?! nice sequences throughout, the lariat/German Suplex was particularly crisp. Nice to see Bryan get the win. If I had any advice bro, I'd have liked to have seen more string used, but you manage to do mid air shots without exposing that, so well done there. I also could have done without Fall out Boy, but that's personal preference Really enjoyable stuff! I like your fed a lot man I'll be sure to catch up on the rest (probably gunna be in backwards order, sorry dude!) Thanks a lot man! I'll be sure to catch up on your fed too. I've been slacking on reviews recently lol.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 8, 2016 17:54:36 GMT -5
This was great. Can't wait to see more. Very impressive!
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Post by Stuart? on Jan 9, 2016 5:33:56 GMT -5
This was great. Can't wait to see more. Very impressive! Thanks!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 24, 2016 10:41:01 GMT -5
Sorry for not getting a reply to you sooner, Stuart?, have had a lot going on this month! Anyway, I really enjoyed the show, top-notch stuff as always. A very solid showing. Keep it up!
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Post by RBW on Jan 24, 2016 14:37:36 GMT -5
Nice intro vid!
-Opener was good, loved the orton bit jumping off the top and caught into a belly to belly suplex. And The catapult into the entrance wall was nice
- cool Y2J entrance with the lights. Lionsault countered with dropkick was nice. So far liked orton/ADR's dropkick poses.
- Man, cena is suck a punk, he got what he deserved by Rocky! Interesting how RKO and Rocky are pals too, 3rd generation guys gotta look out for one-another
- Nice HHH entrance with the green effect. Aww shame Ziggler jobbed out, Big E didn't help him! The pedigree could've got a bit more height I think
- Dean and Bryan is a great pairing for a main event. Nice grappling at the start. Steel steps doomed Dean's fate.... Love the armdrag into Yeslock combo, very slick!
Also what video editing software did you use? I like the graphics that pop up for the dialogue Bring on Night 2!
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Post by Stuart? on Jan 24, 2016 15:52:36 GMT -5
Nice intro vid! -Opener was good, loved the orton bit jumping off the top and caught into a belly to belly suplex. And The catapult into the entrance wall was nice - cool Y2J entrance with the lights. Lionsault countered with dropkick was nice. So far liked orton/ADR's dropkick poses. - Man, cena is suck a punk, he got what he deserved by Rocky! Interesting how RKO and Rocky are pals too, 3rd generation guys gotta look out for one-another - Nice HHH entrance with the green effect. Aww shame Ziggler jobbed out, Big E didn't help him! The pedigree could've got a bit more height I think - Dean and Bryan is a great pairing for a main event. Nice grappling at the start. Steel steps doomed Dean's fate.... Love the armdrag into Yeslock combo, very slick! Also what video editing software did you use? I like the graphics that pop up for the dialogue Bring on Night 2! Thanks! I use Premiere Pro to edit my shows, but I add the music and graphics in on Movie Maker. Unfortunately Night 2 won't take place as I'm rebooting my fed in June. Glad you enjoyed it though!
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Post by slowgraffiti on Jan 26, 2016 13:16:46 GMT -5
Great intro video, I always love the packages you put together for your shows. The matches themselves were great, Bryan vs Ambrose was the highlight for me. Like other people have said, string poses would really help you out but overall I really dig your presentation - was part of what I used for my inspiration when I moved over to YouTube.
I know you're planning to relaunch soon, and I'm excited to see what you have in store but hopefully you don't change too much of the feel of the show because I feel it really sets you apart.
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Post by Stuart? on Jan 26, 2016 13:52:51 GMT -5
Great intro video, I always love the packages you put together for your shows. The matches themselves were great, Bryan vs Ambrose was the highlight for me. Like other people have said, string poses would really help you out but overall I really dig your presentation - was part of what I used for my inspiration when I moved over to YouTube. I know you're planning to relaunch soon, and I'm excited to see what you have in store but hopefully you don't change too much of the feel of the show because I feel it really sets you apart. I'm definitely keeping this kind of feel to the show, I'm just switching up the roster and the champions. Thanks man!
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Mar 3, 2016 9:25:37 GMT -5
Nice show, loved the backstage brawl, you nailed the pedigree pose, fun to see this all play out
Your main event was off the hook, one of your best matches
Great work
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Post by Woods on Mar 5, 2016 3:33:18 GMT -5
A really fun watch! I loved the in ring action, the posing was great, and the music was awesome, as usual! I'm not a fan of the blank black canvas as I struggled to see some of the poses, specifically in the reigns vs Orton match as reigns' gear blended in with the mat at points throughout Lol. Other than that it was a great show, catching up on all these shows has made me realise that I really miss seeing w3a, it's one of my favourite Feds on the board, and I'm really looking forward to the relaunch. Good work again Stuart?
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Post by Stuart? on Mar 5, 2016 5:42:53 GMT -5
A really fun watch! I loved the in ring action, the posing was great, and the music was awesome, as usual! I'm not a fan of the blank black canvas as I struggled to see some of the poses, specifically in the reigns vs Orton match as reigns' gear blended in with the mat at points throughout Lol. Other than that it was a great show, catching up on all these shows has made me realise that I really miss seeing w3a, it's one of my favourite Feds on the board, and I'm really looking forward to the relaunch. Good work again Stuart? Thanks man! I'm working on some new material today, so expect an announcement regarding the card of the relaunch show some time next week!
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Post by kc on Mar 20, 2016 15:11:08 GMT -5
w3a battle of los angeles: night one this is my first time checking out anything from this fed so forgive me if i'm not up to date on storylines/what's going on and stuff. but hey, tournaments are always fun, right!? i liked the finish to orton/reigns. honestly, on paper i saw reigns going over, so i'm glad you had orton advance. poses could use some work, but otherwise a decent opener. jericho/adr was a nice technical match up. i liked del rio working over the arm while y2j was attempting to lock in the walls at all costs. the double stomp spot was sweet, along with the false finish. i hated the actual finish. adr complains for a moment and walks right into a codebreaker, right after jericho took that huge bump. glad jericho advanced, but didn't like the finish. nice to see a backstage segment, but it was pretty bad. the dialogue (spelling errors) was cookie cutter and pretty on the nose. is john cena heel? or just trying to get revenge? if he's heel, then sweet. okay so trips is taking cent's spot in the tourney. meh. i like ziggler wrestling with the fishnet tank top haha it fits his character. pretty much a glorified squash for triple h. it seems like a lot of feds now and days push ziggler to the moon so it was nice/different to see something else. i like that you're at least attempting to use string at times. bryan/ambrose was probably the best choice for the main event. champ vs. champ, non-title of course battle. this was a good match but i felt it was too short for the 'big' main event feeling. it was a first round match after all though. cool bryan went over. so according to the match order night two will feature orton vs. jericho and bryan vs. triple h? i felt like something lacked. matches were decent, maybe it was the lack of commentary or the one-solo backstage segment. i look forward to night two though. i see bryan winning it all.
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Post by Stuart? on Mar 20, 2016 15:30:49 GMT -5
w3a battle of los angeles: night onethis is my first time checking out anything from this fed so forgive me if i'm not up to date on storylines/what's going on and stuff. but hey, tournaments are always fun, right!? i liked the finish to orton/reigns. honestly, on paper i saw reigns going over, so i'm glad you had orton advance. poses could use some work, but otherwise a decent opener. jericho/adr was a nice technical match up. i liked del rio working over the arm while y2j was attempting to lock in the walls at all costs. the double stomp spot was sweet, along with the false finish. i hated the actual finish. adr complains for a moment and walks right into a codebreaker, right after jericho took that huge bump. glad jericho advanced, but didn't like the finish. nice to see a backstage segment, but it was pretty bad. the dialogue (spelling errors) was cookie cutter and pretty on the nose. is john cena heel? or just trying to get revenge? if he's heel, then sweet. okay so trips is taking cent's spot in the tourney. meh. i like ziggler wrestling with the fishnet tank top haha it fits his character. pretty much a glorified squash for triple h. it seems like a lot of feds now and days push ziggler to the moon so it was nice/different to see something else. i like that you're at least attempting to use string at times. bryan/ambrose was probably the best choice for the main event. champ vs. champ, non-title of course battle. this was a good match but i felt it was too short for the 'big' main event feeling. it was a first round match after all though. cool bryan went over. so according to the match order night two will feature orton vs. jericho and bryan vs. triple h? i felt like something lacked. matches were decent, maybe it was the lack of commentary or the one-solo backstage segment. i look forward to night two though. i see bryan winning it all. Where are the spelling mistakes in the backstage segment? No night two. W3A has been completely rebooted.
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Post by kc on Mar 20, 2016 16:05:57 GMT -5
w3a battle of los angeles: night onethis is my first time checking out anything from this fed so forgive me if i'm not up to date on storylines/what's going on and stuff. but hey, tournaments are always fun, right!? i liked the finish to orton/reigns. honestly, on paper i saw reigns going over, so i'm glad you had orton advance. poses could use some work, but otherwise a decent opener. jericho/adr was a nice technical match up. i liked del rio working over the arm while y2j was attempting to lock in the walls at all costs. the double stomp spot was sweet, along with the false finish. i hated the actual finish. adr complains for a moment and walks right into a codebreaker, right after jericho took that huge bump. glad jericho advanced, but didn't like the finish. nice to see a backstage segment, but it was pretty bad. the dialogue (spelling errors) was cookie cutter and pretty on the nose. is john cena heel? or just trying to get revenge? if he's heel, then sweet. okay so trips is taking cent's spot in the tourney. meh. i like ziggler wrestling with the fishnet tank top haha it fits his character. pretty much a glorified squash for triple h. it seems like a lot of feds now and days push ziggler to the moon so it was nice/different to see something else. i like that you're at least attempting to use string at times. bryan/ambrose was probably the best choice for the main event. champ vs. champ, non-title of course battle. this was a good match but i felt it was too short for the 'big' main event feeling. it was a first round match after all though. cool bryan went over. so according to the match order night two will feature orton vs. jericho and bryan vs. triple h? i felt like something lacked. matches were decent, maybe it was the lack of commentary or the one-solo backstage segment. i look forward to night two though. i see bryan winning it all. Where are the spelling mistakes in the backstage segment? No night two. W3A has been completely rebooted. finalizing not finalising - nothing huge, just kind of stuck out. the dialogue just felt so bland, basic. maybe work on that to make them sound/act like the actual superstars? oh I see. well, hopefully your reboot goes well. stick with it dude!
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Post by Stuart? on Mar 20, 2016 16:18:13 GMT -5
Where are the spelling mistakes in the backstage segment? No night two. W3A has been completely rebooted. finalizing not finalising - nothing huge, just kind of stuck out. the dialogue just felt so bland, basic. maybe work on that to make them sound/act like the actual superstars? oh I see. well, hopefully your reboot goes well. stick with it dude! Ah thanks man, didn't notice that. We might actually use 'finalising' in the UK here though. Not sure lol. Thanks for the constructive criticism man!
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