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Post by Deleted on Mar 9, 2016 6:36:57 GMT -5
My ESR ring broke so I had to film this show with my sh*tty jakks ring. It is pretty simple show, without entrances or a proper arena; it is just a build up show leading up to Wrestlemania!
Enjoy!
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Post by attitudesback on Mar 10, 2016 17:52:29 GMT -5
I might not be a mod anymore but please don't bump your own show after a day. People will get around to reviewing it, it just takes time. - Use string. Seeing fingers just takes you completely out of the moment. - It's a wrestling show, and a PPV at that. What wrestling PPV doesn't have entrances? Even something small like a couple VHS tapes maybe adds a lot to it. - Lack of arena does take away from the action, but that ring is perfectly fine. It's quite a good ring. - Poses in Orton vs. Wyatt were good, but it needed string to take it to the next level. - The main event was a bit of a spot fest. Finisher, after high spot after finisher with too many near falls. The Sheamus kicks we could only see half of his body, again taking away from it all. Not rushing a show is hugely important. Taking your time setting up a proper arena, using string etc. it all takes your show to the next level. The fundamentals are all here, with some nice in-ring action and some great poses here and there, and the few improvements would really take it up a notch. Keep at it, and definitely don't rush a show like WrestleMania. That's the big one. The ring isn't a problem, CHIMU uses a basic Mattel and his fed is great. Setting up even black card for the floor and walls of the arena just makes it more visually appealing and easy on the eyes so it doesn't look like a kid playing with their figures in a toy room.. it's almost an entire 'universe' in itself. Solid start, I'd like to see more, but work on the points I mentioned.  |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 10, 2016 18:08:57 GMT -5
Yeah... No. We don't do that here. EVER. People will review your show when they have the time. Bump it again, and it will be locked. |
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Mar 10, 2016 19:49:46 GMT -5
Pretty much everything attitudesback said. Dude knows his crap, take his advice The posing was ok, not amazing but not terrible, need a background bad though If i keep writing im just going to be repeating attitudesback so, just take his advice |
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Post by Woods on Mar 16, 2016 16:37:30 GMT -5
Good in ring work, the posing is solid. You do need to have an arena though, as the background really takes you out of the show,
I think with better surroundings this promises to be a really good fed...and I would like to see you add something that tells the story of how all these matches came about.
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