Deleted
Joined on: Nov 26, 2024 1:38:31 GMT -5
Posts: 0
|
Post by Deleted on Mar 11, 2016 17:42:36 GMT -5
THIS IS MY NEW COMICS SHOW : liranp10.wix.com/dwlnetwork#!blank/yrn3z THIS IS MY FIREST SHOW WITH THE COMICS FORMAT HOPE BY BETTER NEXT TIME =) THIS IS MY OFFICIAL WEBSITE: LIRANP10.WIX.COM/DWL4EVER |
|
|
|
Post by deskjet on Mar 13, 2016 18:09:15 GMT -5
I like the new comic format and the graphics/affects. Is there a program you used to make the comics? Some of the storylines were hard to follow. For it being so condensed it was decent but I think you need to let the matches play out more. Also when you uses the slideshow option in wix, it allows for manual scrolling from page to page. I'd change the transitions to the manual way that way people can stop the slide and take their time to read it. This has a lot of good potential, but like I said perhaps flesh out the show a bit more. I'm assuming this is a more tongue and cheek fed so I'll try not to pick it apart too much:)
|
|
