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Post by Deleted on Mar 29, 2016 8:08:47 GMT -5
Episode 2 is here guys enjoy! And always i'd love to hear some feedback
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Post by Woods on Mar 29, 2016 15:41:52 GMT -5
The recap of last weeks show was a cool way to start off the ep, making everything that's going on fresh in the memory. Good opening segment setting up the main event for the night. Cool opener between the Wyatt and RVD. Expected bray to pick up the win after his showing against Rollins on the last ep. Simple little back stage setup but it worked! That's something I need to address in my fed. But yours did the trick nicely. Jericho vs Cena was my favourite match of the show! Great match. With some really good poses throughout.. Cool, though unusual to have Undertaker out there throughout the match. Good main event between the game and Nash! Enjoyable watch and with HBK out there it left the thought that something significant would happen. The ending was chaotic, with dean ambrose, of all people standing tall at the end. Stories are picking up now, and I enjoy the matches on your shows, I still think the length of time in each frame is slightly too long during the matches, maybe a few figs around the ring as a crowd would help bring the arena to life a little, and there's a few blurry shots throughout. But overall it was very good and i enjoyed it more than the first episode! God job!
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Mar 29, 2016 18:33:52 GMT -5
I finally had some time to view this and I must say that I am again impressed. Yes, this is a new fed and there is room for improvement, but overall, this is looking good. You have a clean setup, a fun roster, and some solid posing.
Wyatt vs. RVD: Great match here to kick things off. Love how you captured Rob's unorthodox style here. Wyatt came out on top at the end and he is looking strong. Good work.
Cena vs. Jericho: Interesting how Taker fits in this whole thing, but this was a nice match with some cool signature move spots. Liked it a lot.
HHH vs. Nash: The main event! I used to have and loved that Nash figure, but it broke :-( This was a fun match to watch and HBK changed the dynamic in a fun way. Great ending as well. All hell broke loose, but I'm definitely looking forward to next episode. Great work!
Overall, another great show. In the future, I challenge you to dabble in editing out string; taking clearer shots from different angles; and jazzing up your arena a bit. Make it your own. Make it original. This fed is well on its way to being great! Thanks for posting!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 3, 2016 17:00:05 GMT -5
Woods- glad you like the recap, I plan on trying to do it for every episode just to keep the story going since I have a whole series plotted out. Yeah it's a ton of fun setting up these feuds I'm glad you liked the opening segment, I'm trying to build Triple H into a vengeance crazed machine Bray did pick up the win, I wouldn't want him to come off as weaker losing 2 times in a row since he's in a feud with Mankind, it would be weird for the story, but maybe I'm just being a bit ocd about it. Yeah I liked setting it up I just need to find a better place so I can make a better setup, although I'm considering getting the pop-up setup (and the Pop arena as well) Yeah I figured it may be a little weird but I figured it gave the sense that Taker wants to see the full capabilities of this "chosen challenger" I'm trying to build all the feuds toward the first PPV I figured having Ambrose try to take revenge on Rollins while things were chaotic with HBK, HHH & Nash made sense right now the arena's a bit small for a crowd, and seeing as I've already filmed the first 4 episodes without one it will change but not just yet, as for frames I think I may change it to 1 second next time and just see how that flows and maybe submission pictures will be 2 seconds. I'll be adding an arena soon just not yet since money's tight and the space I have for now is a bit small as it is for a crowd just yet. I'm really glad you liked it dude hope you keep tuning in wwefan617- Wyatt's going to keep getting stronger too just watch that new absorbing power of his is a huge factor in his storyline I wanted to start a Cena/Taker feud in a lighthearted way so that things could build to its boiling point since all the other feuds already have some heavy heat behind them. I love the Nash figure too, unfortunately most of the TNA toybiz figures weren't made well enough to last but I'm just glad this one's still in solid condition. I figure the explosive ending is a good way to create more matches and move more stories. Really glad you liked it I'm going to be changing up the arena soon once money's not so tight, but I have tons of bills to pay along with travel costs due to me doing comedy and what not. Really looking forward to what you think of the future episodes man.
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Post by The Champ is Here! on Apr 5, 2016 7:42:50 GMT -5
Love the recap
I like that you do promos even though its youtube, helps progress the story
Solid posing throughout
Loving this clique fued
Awesome stuff you have going, stories are really looking good
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Post by attitudesback on Apr 11, 2016 13:44:54 GMT -5
Things to work on:
Try and edit string. Keep text the same colour. Throws the viewer with it constantly changing. Transitions between segments. Where did HHH go? Make sure all the shots are clear. Spice up the arena a little. Figures, some colour etc.
Things I enjoyed:
The matches. All of them were pretty enjoyable to me and Jericho vs Cena is asking to be a classic. Backstage segments. Things progress with these and every fed needs them. That ending! Absolute chaos. The posing was pretty good too. Stories advanced and everything went at a good pace. The shots could've been a little shorter though.
Most of the things I mentioned you've already said so it looks like my issues are pointless! Really solid 2nd episode. HHH has to get that title at some point.
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Post by T on Apr 16, 2016 3:40:45 GMT -5
Firstly, nice idea to have a prelude so that you can hit the ground running with storylines.
Episode 1 -Opener was a good back and forth match -Nice Taker promo -Rollins wins! -Mankind turning on the Wyatts so soon? -And HHH to chase HBK away. Triple Threat between HHH/HBK/Rollins would be good
Episode 2 -Nice opening promo. Would have been cool to have Nash/HHH right away -Good match and promo by Wyatt about wanting a better Foley to beat -Wasn't too keen on Ambrose's Bryan segment nor 'Taker's promo. Seemed very wooden -Looking forward to Cena/Taker though -Decent main event and good brawl to finish with
Two solid shows. Would like to see your roster expand a bit more, as there are only a few guys that seem to matter at the moment.
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