PWF Raw Episode 1

Love that intro music, reminds me of watching WrestleMania 5 as a kid!

Editing could be a little better here. Maybe take some shots around the arena first before the wrestlers come out.
Great camera quality! What camera are you using?
Framing could be improved, as you've cut off the top of Billy's head in the first pic.
I think maybe another picture or two would help with entrances.
I'm digging the text, very easy to read.

Fading your pictures and audio out at the end of segments would be a great improvement.
Decent match between Kane and Christian, glad Kane got the win.
Some of your poses could use with some work here man, make sure you make use of all the articulation of the figure.

Cool to see Balor! I really need to get that figure asap!
Poses are still pretty stiff.
Nice to see him pick up the victory.
Ambrose vs Ziggler was alright too.

Miz TV is a cool segment, not a lot of people do the whole talk show gimmick thing in their feds, so it's nice to see.
Some shots are a bit out of focus, make sure you check each pic on your camera before moving on to the next one to see if it's okay.
We've got a lot of people who want to be champion! I'm looking forward to the rumble.

Reigns vs Rollins was a nice match. I'd have preferred it if you had saved the stipulation match for a PPV or a special episode. It's a bit confusing to the viewer as to why these two are having a hardcore match when they don't know the history of the two men in your fed.

This was a nice episode! Just work on your poses and you should be sweet.

Opening was ok. I think the crowd needs to be made one big thing instead of multiple pages of a printout. Cut out and stick it together would improve it tenfold.
Framing an issue too, if your camera can do it shoot at 16:9.
Some of the poses were super stiff, bend literally every joint and really make them animated.
Demon Balor! Awesome stuff. A favourite figure of mine.

Ok yeah not a lot I can add here. For a first go it's pretty good. The shots are crystal clear most of the time and I love that, it really enhances my enjoyment. Really work on framing as a lot of the main subjects were just not in the right place. For a very first show, it didn't seem like much was established. Reigns vs Rollins is a huge main event, especially with that stip, but in the world of PWF.. why did it happen? This is a big reason I can't stand a lot of these NJPW Indie smarks. Matches with no rhyme or reason are pointless. Imagine Mike Tyson fought Lennox Lewis out of nowhere. No one would buy it. Conor McGregor's fights do ing huge business because he sells the fight. There's a story behind it. Hopefully for the next episode we get some epic shit. It looks like you've got some great fundamentals down (more than I could say over a year ago!!) and the groundwork is what the mansion is built on. Looking forward to what's next. Everyone starts somewhere and this is a good one.

Not bad for a first show! The arena seems a little cramped, so you might want to see if you can space it out a little more. The shots you've taken are pretty crisp and clear, but a bit too close, if you get me? Posing needs work, but I could already see some improvement towards the end of the show. Big time main event with Reigns/Rollins, but like attitudesback said, why are they feuding in PWF? Building a story is the most important part of a fed, so work on that too.

All in all, it was very good for a first show, and as long as you work on those things @newageoutlaws4champs, you'll go far.

Not a bad start, you have a foundation here to build on

Posing needs work, it is very stiff at times, bend thrm joints bay bay!

Zoom out or back the camera up, shots don't show enough action

Your set up is really good though, and I'm liking your roster

Keep at it!

I like your set up, and the image quality is great.
Just work on some of the focussing and positioning of shots.
You have a decent roster and I'm looking forward to seeing what stories you create with them. Especially looking forward to the Rumble.
The matches are very short, and the posing is extremely stiff at times. A lot of the figures you've used are elites, so really work on bending them joints.
I like the focus on the tag division you've got going on, not often seen in a pic fed, so good job on that.
Ziggler and Ambrose was the best match of the show, looking forward to seeing what happens next in your fed, I think it has the potential to be really great.

I really enjoyed this - obviously, it's your first show so there are a few things to work on but the content of the show itself was good, you've got good ideas about how to do things. The backdrop was a little distracting, like attitudesback said it would work better as a single printout or even just a plain backdrop for now. Framing was a bit of an issue, there were a few times people's heads etc were cut off but as far as your picture quality and lighting go it's absolutely spot on. If you can sort a few of the technical hitches (and I wouldnt worry too much about then really, it took about 8 years for my shows not to be filmed on the floor of a messy teenage bedroom) then everything should come together nicely. I'm looking forward to seeing what's to come.

This was a fun show to watch. I really dig your roster and like how you are developing storylines. As others have said, the content is great. There are just a few areas that need improvement.

Some of the pictures were a tad close and it was hard to see the move or pose that you were trying to pull off.

The backdrop in the back is a little choppy because you did not cut out the printout and you spaced them quite far apart. It doesn't take too much away from the show, but the suspension of disbelief is altered.

Other than that, I really enjoyed this show and think that this will be an awesome fed with a few more tweaks and a little bit of growth. Great work!

-Nice promo to open the show. I like that you're using the NAO
-Could do with bending the limbs a bit more when posing
-Christian lost
-RR sounds good
-Love that Balor figure
-Solid match with Ambrose
-Cool to see Miz TV being done
-Street Fight had some nice spots

Decent first show, PWF. A few more backstage segments to develop storylines would be good.

Good first show. Camera angles and pic quality are good. Stage and arena are solid. Good interaction between wrestlers and the overlay commentary was well placed and readable. Poses were too stiff through every match. You get the posing better and perhaps add some backstage segments, this could be really good. Keep it up:)