MPW 1- Revolution- Watch and Reply please.

ok finally editing this

-- ok decent indy setup, rofl poison. random. anyway hated the commentary in the intro, i would have had them hyping up the card or something.

-- Gibson/Jacobs, i really don't like the crowd/wrestler coversations, and for the record Gibson is good on the stick. Jacobs is really not that skinny, unless you look back at his HUSS days, anyway onto the match. meh commentary so far. some poses are confusing so far. wow oversell on the lariat. gomba stomp rofl, double mang. powder, rofl. yakuza yayz. sorta cool facewash counter by jacobs. ghey jacobs springboard elbow attempt. wow ghey pinning combonation. pretty cool finish, it's funny how i have all gibson all bad ass in ROG, it has seemed to rub off in others. decent opener. didn't really establish anything other than getting Gibson over. so yeah.

-- Chavo/Akio, so i guess your splitting both teams up and putting them in singles matches, should have said that in commentary. technical to start it out. again some poses are confusing. indy stand off, YES. wow insane yet unrealistic moves here, i want those rails. finish was sorta unrealistic, chavo was like on the other side of the ring, and yet Akio still connected with the moonsault. well Akio won. again didn't establish anything, well if it did i had no clue because you don't storytell in your commentary.

-- Banks/Generico, Banks is cool. same goes for generico, but i don't like the head. meh hated the big moonsault off the soda machine spot, too early. i have never seen mvp to a 450, but w/e. pretty cool mafia/yakuza kick pose. meh didn't like the Play maker counter. braib bustah pose was cool. should have been the finish right there. again cool trademark generico moves. yeah cool combo and generico gets the win. yeah it got generico over, but didn't really tell us anything. and yeah the finish should have happened after the brain buster. meh your commentary is trying to be funny, your trying to hard.

-- Homicide/Ultimo, so the second of the tag single matches. stiff poses early on. i really liked the 'cide running senton through the ropes, as i did with the facewash in the rail. well ultimo hit the GTS, meh he should have had some sort of advantage, yet in the next move 'Cide gets right back up and suplexes him. too late for a stand off, lariat lolz. holy cop killa from the top, hot finish, and yeah ultimo should have went over. yeah again like i said in all of the matches it did not tell a story. but yeah motn so far.

-- meh backstage promo, random Punk just challenged the winner and it had really no point behind it. but yeah go Hardy.

-- Tag title match, ok tag title match the pics seem sorta blurry. cyber punks could be cool, the same for Mutilation. Danielson, cool. nice chop effects. danielson only does springboards on rare ocassions. ok heels cutting the ring in half now. is burchill trying to screw is own partner, yeah the dirty chair shots etc.. should have came sometime closer to the finish. well danielson is bleeding. danielson coming back here, cool suplex/mutilation combo. unrealistic corkscrew leg drop. and shelley with a lung blower, and the punks get the win. cliche finish, but yeah heels win, hopefully this develops into a feud.

-- Hardy/Doane, ok pics back to normal now. fast pace action to start things out. ok well i guess the blood was unplanned. now Hardy is bleeding, ok. cool finisher by doane. bloody match, ok so Doane/Punk at the next show, hopefully we see some Hardy interference.

-- why does danielson have a crutch? I thought he only had a concussion. face danielson, yeah cool. nice announcment of the figiamania match.

-- MPW title match, pretty random just putting these two in the title match, I would have had a tourney or a battle royal to crown the first champ, anyway onto the match. meh poses early on. london taking it to carlito early on. sorta cool yet unrealistic lungblower through the ropes. there is no way carlito is walking out with the belt tbh. yeah cool flippy stuff. ARMBAR. wow carlito is bitching, ghey. to much blood in this event dude. tassels coming off lol. wow i really hate this match, no physicality or anything. and after a flurry of offense london wins. meh confetti, should have had real instead of editing it in. anyway yeah hated this match, carlito (the heel i assume) should have controled the match and worked over london; only for london to make an 'underdog' comback at the end and win the match. that was probably my least favorite match on the show tbh.

-- overall this still needs a lot of work, match storytelling, work on poses and match physicallity, your trying to hard on being 'funny' on commentary, work on promo's they are sorta bland. I do see this getting better in time. work on that and MPW will be super cool.

Yayz!

I really like your shows. I can tell you take real pride in your pictures. Also, it seems you take alot of time with your shows. Which is good thing. i really like your commentary too. Gibson's match was an amazing opener and could have been match of the night. Great job, can't wait for MPW 2!

Edit later

I am going to today, expect a reply after you get home from school.

my reply:
Gibson vs Jacobs
good
Poses, really good
Gibson with the win
commentary
bad
not much really. Maybe just the custom, not feeling it but that's me.

akio vs Chavo
good
good lenth
poses good again
bad
nothing a good solid match

mvp vs El generico
good
back and forth action
Generco geting the win
the custom
bad
Commentators thinking some one is dead, if they did die when they said you would have no one left

cide vs Ultimo
good
poses
Cide with the win
some good action
bad
The custom was meh
Biased fans, At least one person will be rooting for dragon

backstage
good
Punk was funny
bad
abit short, could have had more from Matt

tag match
good
action, could have had a bit more but from what that was it was ok
Brain and Shelley customs
bad
Moore custom

Hardy vs Ken
good
Good moves from both
the blood, big part of the match
This: Nickle: He's bleeding like a shark! A shark?
bad
Nothing, solid match

backstage 2
Is Brian a junkie?
Looking forward to the nigel custom

main event
good
Good solid match, hardly read the commentary because that match and the pics told the story.
London over, which is good.
It didn't look one sided.
bad
Nothing really part from the streemers, they were good but would have been beter if they moved instead of being n a stuck position.

Great show

ok then.

Gibson V Jacobs - Should be higher up the card iyam. Really confusing in parts, i thought you said your commentary was better now? Still really odd, and not explaining anything. Also, why would Jacobs use powder when hes on top of things, and how can Gibson no sell being blind???

Chavo V Yang - put yang over plz. Good match, a lot better than the last, although there were a few stiff poses, and the corkscrew standing moonsault was unrealistic.

MVP V Generico - Decent match, although not as good as Chavo/Yang. Just seemed a little clustered iyam. The moonsault should of been later on in the match, as it was a big spot. Pleased Generico won, although it should of been via the brainbuster.

What a great reply




Will you nubs edit please?

xFALLx not bad not bad you have some pretty good matches. But dude I have to ask you, Is that A Brock Lesnar head on that Referee?LOL thats pretty funny but man its pretty good! You had some good matches I like the crowd and The setup It's pretty funny that you used Benoits Head for Kleiner your commintator.LOL Yah Ill have to say my favorite match was the matt vs ken I like that ken got busted open did you use Vis a Vis over head markers? Yah There pretty good to use for blood. Yah but great show man I look forward to the next ones.