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Post by jonesy12345 on Dec 13, 2007 0:14:06 GMT -5
Claudio Castagnoli vs. Senshi3CW Tag Team Championship MatchTriple X vs. Up In Smoke vs. Motor City Machine GunsSonjay Dutt vs. Marishimo Tojira vs. Matt Sydal vs. Ken Doane3CW Pure Championship MatchWilliam Regal vs. Mike Quackenbushwww.freewebs.com/chmn1/index.htm
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Post by hCo.Bro™ [brandon_lee] on Dec 13, 2007 0:53:07 GMT -5
Ah, one of the anticipated debuts...
I know your fed is supposed to be indy, but to indy for turnbuckles and ropes? Dunno if I like the idea.
Customs could use some work, I know you wanted it simple with part switches, but using the same Orton head for two different wrestlers is kinda, I guess destracting?
Im probably alone on this one, but I dont like the idea of using different types of figures, again, destracting?
Your poses were simple, Im dont want to say you didnt use string, but use a lot of it! Especially if your going to have an Indy fed. Move that camera around more during the match, seemed like for the most part it was just "chillin"on a tripod.
Your commentary was short and sweet with mostly just play by play. IMO if you do this style, I would have only one commentator, the other just kinda completes the other guys sentences if you catch my drift.
For the most part it was a pretty good first show (I know you had one before).
Im sure a lot of people will like it, I enjoyed it and I would like to see you continue and improve. And thanks for taking the time to do it!
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Post by jonesy12345 on Dec 13, 2007 1:00:29 GMT -5
Thanks for your help man. I really appeciate the advice. The reason for the no turnbuckle and ropes ring is because it broke and I am asking for an RSR for Christmas.
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Post by hCo.Bro™ [brandon_lee] on Dec 13, 2007 1:08:34 GMT -5
No prob
lol I understand about the turnbuckle deal, ive gone through a many due to my cat and little bro.
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Post by DTP. on Dec 13, 2007 15:11:17 GMT -5
You should try this again, with the no turnbuckles you missed half a million spots. :-\ It would be better too
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Post by alex123ecw on Dec 13, 2007 16:15:53 GMT -5
Not to be harsh or anything but man.
No turnbuckles or ropes, horrible angle, and the customs... aren't really customs.
a non modded london head on a random tights body.... not cuttin it.
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Post by jonesy12345 on Dec 13, 2007 16:17:31 GMT -5
Eh, they are what they are.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 13, 2007 23:05:24 GMT -5
Holy! No ropes! Wrestlers might never wrestle in your fed again! When they fly, they fly straight to the crowds(or the arena floor)! Your posing needs a little more, just a itsy bitsy little more of some tweaking & it will be perfect!
You're costums are, how could I say it, eh, simply, very simple, but I like it's angles!
You're commentating is a little bit too straight to the point, you better do some little twisting like, a color commentator & a play by play one would be nicer!
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Post by jonesy12345 on Dec 13, 2007 23:09:42 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply Boogeyman, I will get replying on your new show.
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Post by ljs on Dec 15, 2007 6:39:47 GMT -5
OK, wasn't digging the no rope thing. Customs were eh. You also miss alot of action with a stationary camera. Lol, UWA logo in bottom right corner in first match. Didn't dig it. Missed the end of the tag match, couldn't get the flow of it. Interview, meh. last two match could have done with alot of string. A very meh show.
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Post by jonesy12345 on Dec 15, 2007 14:37:13 GMT -5
OK, wasn't digging the no rope thing. Customs were eh. You also miss alot of action with a stationary camera. Lol, UWA logo in bottom right corner in first match. Didn't dig it. Missed the end of the tag match, couldn't get the flow of it. Interview, meh. last two match could have done with alot of string. A very meh show. Thanks for the comments and advice.
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Post by greenjack1992 on Dec 16, 2007 11:39:38 GMT -5
I think it's unfair to be bashing his customs, they're only to add to the roster, it's not as though he's added them to the customs board as serious work. Anyway I immediately lost interest after the first match, the lack of ropes and the terrible angles spoiled it for me from the get go. Take the advice from this show's reviews and build on them for the next one, that's what I did with my old ECW pic fed.
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Post by jonesy12345 on Dec 16, 2007 13:49:46 GMT -5
I think it's unfair to be bashing his customs, they're only to add to the roster, it's not as though he's added them to the customs board as serious work. Anyway I immediately lost interest after the first match, the lack of ropes and the terrible angles spoiled it for me from the get go. Take the advice from this show's reviews and build on them for the next one, that's what I did with my old ECW pic fed. Thanks for the back-up Jack. I am going to try and get a better angle on my arena and I will use my back-up ring I gave to my friend.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Dec 17, 2007 4:54:44 GMT -5
Thought i would leave a review for this show. kinda late but here it goes lol. first match: Nice Senshi custom it looks pretty cool. And Claudio is looking quite snazzy himself. Ok no ring ropes is fine because they are broken, but i dont think it will mess up your match quality too much. your poses are pretty good so far. i like the brainbuster pose good job with that one. im rooting for Claudio in this one. Ouch a stomp on the back by Claudio. Senshi's gonna feel that. SPINNING BACKBREAKER!!! and Claudio wins. good match 3.5/5 I have a feeling Joe might play a big part in your fed. glad to see him on the roster 2nd Match: I dont usually like mixing wwe figs with TNA figs, but you pulled it off pretty well. I thought the camera was a bit too far away on this match. i would reccomend making an arena or something so you could get some angles. cooler camera angles would have made this match alot better IMO, but the match was still good. Glad triple x came out on top. Nice touch with the angel's wings on the ring bell. =) i give this match a 3/5 3rd match: Sorry if my review for this match is shorter than the others but i thought it was pretty good. i would give it a 3/5. i wish this one had gone longer, but still pretty good poses. Some of the poses were a bit stiff (i have problems with that too) anyway still good match. 4th match: For some reason i want regal to win this one. The poses seem better in this one, but like Boogey said they need a littles tweaking thats all. aaah man regal lost. still a good match. i would this match a 4/5. i think this is really good so ar for yur first show. Notes: I would just say work on some of your customs (sonjay). i can tell who they are, but they just need a little more originality thats all. use some camera angles and make an arena. that would make your fed boss. oh and ring ropes and post too. that would make your poses better. and use camera angles instead of a straight look at the ring. good job man keep it up. good show overall: 3.5/5. oh and thanx for saying that your looking out for my show =)
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Post by jonesy12345 on Dec 17, 2007 14:09:41 GMT -5
Thanks for the great reply, I appreciate it.
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