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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Dec 24, 2007 20:01:48 GMT -5
This is the debut show guys so i hope you enjoy. I worked really hard on it. Hope you all enjoy. If something seems strange to you (like no entrance stage) it will all be explained in later shows. Enjoy and please if you watch reply =) www.freewebs.com/awfshows/ |
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Post by ljs on Dec 25, 2007 5:29:53 GMT -5
First segment, like all segments at a first show. Very "Hi everybody!". Teh game in heavy weight title match, really?! lol. Angle as well, I'm surpised that Vince is in the same ring  WGTT? Is it like team angle? Must say it is a good first match, suprising WOW! Must say a new person would have so ended the match. Don't like the ads in mid parragraph. If you do that make a new page. belly to belly from the top. Classic Angle. The D O double G!!!!! Thinking HHH is face along with DX. I must say great first match. Lets hope the rest is. Kenny- heel. Great idea. Like Sabin abit back or Devine now. And hype for the match, have you done this before? Last time I checked straight edge means i'm better than you.  NO! Punk and MVP out?!!?! NOO Kidman's died too?!? Nice ref rules. Is JBL your announcer or vince? Man, I that you didn't have any string so a bad match, but you did have string so  Not sure what's happening but  doesn't matter. Kid Kash! Not Funaki! Droping like flies. 619 onto the chair, inavitave. Rey won, cool. Vince mopping lolz I think burke did all the killing, ¬¬ Cool card for next time aswell. You have me approval anyway. wicked show. |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Dec 25, 2007 5:44:59 GMT -5
^thanx for thr great review man i really appreciate it. this is my first time pic fedding, but i have tired to learn from other feds. glad you enjoyed the show. Keep those replies coming
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Post by ljs on Dec 25, 2007 6:00:25 GMT -5
Wow, dude I see a great future if you keep onat this.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 25, 2007 9:25:12 GMT -5
WOW! NIce first show!
Love the opening by Jimmy Hart & Ric Flair!
Love your matches! Good for a pic fedder but great for a first timer!
Really loved your show! A 9/10 from me!
Keep it up!
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Post by christian425 on Dec 25, 2007 9:39:39 GMT -5
Hey guy, I remember you are the nice guy that you always support my threads I'm here to give you some comment.I like your Jimmy Hart^^ Ric Flair is your show's manager  But I think Triple H should also carry a bottle of water with him. And you need an entrance stage. Your referee is awesome! But I suggest you use DA Triple H, haha World Greatest Tag Team is heel, good. Road Dogg's help made me feels stocked. Your back stage is quite good, but you need more decoration such as: the room's background wallpaper etc. How come that Rey Mysterio was isolaed by several men?? -W- Luckily he won the title What a long episode, I live in Hong Kong, it's 11pm now I need to sleep, I will watch the rest and leave the comment!  |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Dec 25, 2007 9:49:07 GMT -5
^thanx for the support from both Boogey and Christian. just to answer some questions:
the whole no stage thing will play into my storyline in the upcoming episodes, but i am almost finished making my entrance. thanx to all for watching so far. happy holidays. KEEP THESE REPLIES COMING.
wwefan617
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Revelation O'Deeves
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The Man Called Sting...
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Post by Revelation O'Deeves on Dec 25, 2007 21:06:58 GMT -5
good show awsome name really close to mine (AWL) (american wrestling league) i got a site on freewebs too havent posted pics yet but ive had name for a while anyway (sorry bout that) i really enjoyed it story lines are good
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Dec 26, 2007 7:52:25 GMT -5
^ thats really cool that you have a fed too man. i hope yours does well. thanx for watching my show. these replies are really helpful =)
wwefan617
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Post by oafc on Dec 28, 2007 8:23:40 GMT -5
sweet as apple pie |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Dec 28, 2007 9:34:33 GMT -5
^ lol. thanx. thats what i was going for. =)
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Post by muleface on Dec 28, 2007 11:32:37 GMT -5
My god!
Fantstic first show!
I love the poses, the commenary was gr8. Nice match length, good matches, graet backstage stuff.
The only thing I didn't like was the match order, I mean HHH vs Angle in the opener
TBH this may be the best debut of a pic fed iv'e seen.
9/10.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Dec 28, 2007 12:36:34 GMT -5
^ thanx for your reply i really appreciate it. yeah once i watched the show i wasnt so happy about how i made angle and the game first. But thanx for your reply its greatly appreciated. It means alot because im a fan of your fed.
wwefan617
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Post by Dyamez on Dec 29, 2007 13:38:47 GMT -5
Great first show, man.
Pics are clear, You might wanna try using a lamp instead of a flash. If you already are, try adding another one.
Nice action sequences and i like the transition of the show, Pics are weirdly small though or arrange weirdly.
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Post by greenjack1992 on Jan 4, 2008 19:12:15 GMT -5
Great first show! I think you could improve on your lighting and some of your poses are wuite stiff. Other than that you're storylines and image quality is very good. I'm looking forward to see what becomes of this 'AWF'. 3/5.
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Post by ovw4life on Jan 8, 2008 18:55:48 GMT -5
The best fig fed, pics or text, this is by far the very best. Can't wait for the next show.
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Post by Nostrildamus on Jan 13, 2008 19:52:55 GMT -5
Jeremy, I can't believe I am saying this but this **** is  ing AWESOME! I swear to God I was laughing my ass off the entire time because one, you actually MADE a figure fed which is hilarious in itself but two, YOU MADE VINCE MCMAHON AN ANNOUNCER!!! I loved the stuff that King said, real funny. The best part of the show has to be Kenny standing at the door looking back and saying "This isn't over Rey" I also liked how you had Flair actually give a **** about ing BILLY KIDMAN. BILLY KIDMAN. Come on, Gooden. Also, the part where he says "Billy can you hear me" is hilarious. Why the hell are Daivari and Eric Bischoff reffing your matches? I totally liked that you had Kid Kash in the match though. Kid Kash is god. Oh God, Jeremy. Oh God. I ing love this **** because Vince was mopping up. You are awesome. You should have Vince go on a rampage by trying to destroy the company by putting windex in the water and tying the plumbing pipes together so poop comes out of Flair's shower. I would pay to see that. "Oh thank God my towel boy is here. What took you so long?" LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 OMG!!!!! You need to get more old school ECW guys in this. Raven and Taz (in his singlet, not in a suit) and Rhino need to be in this. Oh man. This **** was epic, Jeremy Gooden. You need to keep doing this, but post it on here because the freewebs **** is making my computer slow. Well done Jeremy but I am still going to make fun of you at school for having a ing FIGURE FED. |
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jan 13, 2008 22:40:36 GMT -5
^lol im looking forward to the ridicule. haha i was hoping you would watch it. thanx for the reply lol. ... priceless
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Post by Nostrildamus on Jan 14, 2008 4:54:10 GMT -5
Also Jeremy Gooden because I am a nice guy I will make you graphics if you need a banner or logo or something.
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Post by (=wwefan617=) on Jan 19, 2008 13:02:00 GMT -5
hey just wanted to thank all that replied and let people who want to make their last reply's do so because once the 2nd show is up this one will not be able to be veiwed. so wrap it up =) thanx alot guys
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