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Post by Snitch on Oct 27, 2006 12:58:17 GMT -5
www.freewebs.com/brett-619/part1.htmYep, i've finished the first show and put it up. I know there's a few faults like Smackdown and WWE logos scattered everywhere and the commentary isn't great but i tried to fix stuff as i went along to make it as good as possible. Also, i don't expect many replies becuase i've replied to nobody elses but could you please try and give me some tips and constructive critism, so i can improve. Thanks, enjoy 
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Post by wweisbest on Oct 27, 2006 14:11:58 GMT -5
WOW  really like the setup of the fed and you have many superstars already in the fed !!! rvd&619 vs edge & orton 10/10 batista vs taker 8.5 /10 flair vs steiner 9.5/10 benoitvs kennedy vs booker vs lashley 9/10 overral 9.5/10 realy looking forward too see more great shows!! |
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Post by Snitch on Oct 30, 2006 10:28:28 GMT -5
Well, i've got much more bandwith for the site so it's up and running again. Consider this bump number 1. And thanks alot for the reply ibrahim  |
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Post by swantonbomb15 on Oct 30, 2006 14:57:36 GMT -5
is that the world of smackdown playset?
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Post by mrwrestlemania on Oct 30, 2006 17:58:54 GMT -5
really not a bad show,but who is your world champion..I think you should have established that in the first show, and established the Main characters in the hunt for the HW Title. but all in all it was a really great show...
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Post by lightsout on Oct 30, 2006 20:02:07 GMT -5
Overall I liked the show. My favorite match was Edge and Orton vs RVD and Rey. It had great action in it
Keep up the good work dude
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Post by llionv on Nov 5, 2006 14:41:53 GMT -5
good show!!!i liked it!!! 7/10
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Post by maniac12 on Nov 6, 2006 13:47:23 GMT -5
The pics take ages to upload ill edit this when im done watching it.... That was actally pretty good there was no string used but yeah no biggy. Wow Batista landed bad on that guard rail My fav part was when Angle Angle Slammed Eric Bischoff through the table it made be LOL at bischoffs face. RKO through announcement table holy crap that was awesome ___________________________________________________ ROFL at 'Mr Snitch' lol. overall snitch you did a kick-ass job Hope you do another fed like this 10/10 |
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Post by perilloboy123 on Nov 6, 2006 20:36:44 GMT -5
Hurricane & Rosey vs. Shelton Benjamin & Chris Jericho - Short, but great. A lot of action... Finally, the Superheroes win a match in a Fed, but also winning some gold.
6-Man Cruiserweight Battle Royal - There was only three ACTUAL cruiserweights in that match... Matt Hardy's not a cruiserweight, as well as Christian, and Orlando. Kash screwing Crazy over in the end? Okay, I guess that's fair.
King Booker vs. Chris Benoit vs. Lashley vs. Mr. Kennedy - KING BOOKA WINS THE UNITED STATES CHAMPIONSHIP! ALL HAIL KING BOOKA!
Ric Flair (w/Chris Masters) vs. Scott Steiner - Boo! I hate Steiner! What was up with Boogeyman in there?
Randy Orton & Edge vs. Rey Mysterio & Rob Van Dam - Awesome match. I would've had Orton and Edge win, though. Keep a feud going or something...
John Cena vs. Triple H - Gr... John Cena... Hey! At least he lost! Nice job, Lashley! A nice heel turn, right? Bow down to the King!
Kurt Angle as JBL's first pick? Amen to that, brother.
Batista vs. Undertaker - Simple. Nice job with that idea, giving Undertaker the win, and all. You just need a better Taker figure.
Overall:[/u] Great show with some minor flaws. Can't wait 'til the second show. BTW, best match of the night was Rated RKO vs. Mysterio and RVD.
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Post by Snitch on Nov 13, 2006 2:44:44 GMT -5
Thanks alot for the replys everyone and Perillo Boy123, the boogyman was with Steiner Bump #2 |
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Post by reecechillin on Dec 21, 2006 17:24:21 GMT -5
Overall it was a good show, you can tel that a lot of effort was put into it. Im a little concerned about Derick & Eric a GM and an annoucer who look the same !! But that dunt reli matter. My favourite match was Rated [RKO] against Rey and RVD, some great action !! Keep it up, cant wait for another show.
9/10
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Post by jdsnow14 on Dec 21, 2006 20:47:35 GMT -5
great job 7/10
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Post by rhysus2006 on Dec 22, 2006 1:57:56 GMT -5
WOW, I loved the show it was action packed exciting and fun, once I read one part I just had to read the rest...like said before the best match was definetely Rated RKO vs. RVD/Rey Mysterio. I hate Cena but I'm glad he lost, and your main event was not very good because there was no storyline behind it. Good Luck with show two though and I will hopefully be reading it.  |
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Post by jdsnow14 on Dec 22, 2006 22:37:15 GMT -5
once again tnhats great when is part 2 coming out
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Post by jdsnow14 on Dec 22, 2006 22:37:36 GMT -5
thats*
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Post by modano09 on Dec 25, 2006 1:57:09 GMT -5
I really enjoyed it, great first show.
May I ask...
what series are your Edge and Cena figures from? I wanted both of them for awhile!
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Post by Snitch on Dec 25, 2006 14:41:13 GMT -5
I really enjoyed it, great first show. May I ask... what series are your Edge and Cena figures from? I wanted both of them for awhile! Thanks for the reply. And the Cena is AD15 and i can't remember what series the Edge is. once again tnhats great when is part 2 coming out Thanks alot for the reply. I've filmed the first three matches of it, it should be up sometime in January. Thanks again everyone for the replies. |
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Post by Mattie! on Dec 26, 2006 16:43:28 GMT -5
Great For Your First Show
8/10
Next Time Try Make Your Matches Longer
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Post by what on Jan 4, 2007 22:49:18 GMT -5
hahaha! Bischoff getting Angle Slammed haha! Thats hilarious man!
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