Deep Shadows
Main Eventer
MXW 6 is here! https://youtu.be/LiDlNuiKmjA
Joined on: Jul 7, 2006 2:39:30 GMT -5
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Post by Deep Shadows on Nov 1, 2006 1:06:20 GMT -5
It's here! Last month I estimated the first show to be up late-November but fate was on my side. I put a lot of effort into it so try and keep that in mind while viewing. A few of the pics may be blurry and I did my best with the commentary. Hopefully, you guys can give me constructive feedback.  www.geocities.com/mxw_2007 |
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Post by Man Without Fear on Nov 1, 2006 1:36:31 GMT -5
awesome show! I appreciate the constructive criticism you give me on my shows so i will try to help you out as much as i can... some of the poses look a little stiff but nothing major...the only problem i have is the gaps...some of the parts of the match seem missing like here img243.imageshack.us/img243/8633/1mxw36rn8.jpghe leaves the ring to get something then suddenly he has that something and is using it in the very next picture img133.imageshack.us/img133/9721/1mxw38kd8.jpga picture of him grabbing it in between would fix that right up and make it feel more rounded out IMO and some string here... img155.imageshack.us/img155/7438/1mxw83pm9.jpgwould have made this a stunning missed headbutt but its still a good pose nonetheless The light tubes were kick ass and the finish to the benoit match was really really cool...love any match that ends in a sharpshooter haha...everything else was great dude keep it up! and you definately werent f-ng around when you said Xtreme hehe i hope my upcoming Franchise VS Raven match at WWFX Unforgiven can top some of your hardcore activities...i doubt it but we shall see hehe good job dude! |
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Chuck
Mid-Carder
Joined on: Apr 11, 2006 3:02:01 GMT -5
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Post by Chuck on Nov 1, 2006 2:15:18 GMT -5
Wow good show but your skipping alot of the bits and in the poses and try to use string next time.I loved hardy vs beniot!This company is saughta like hardcore house.And try doing backstage segments to.Yayyyyy my faverout  kicked everyones asses at the end of the show! |
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Post by dmallett4 on Nov 1, 2006 11:18:27 GMT -5
Your fed seems to have a lot of potential. You know (well probably) that i like your videos, that was no exception. Not too bothered about Geocites, i dont like the yahoo banners. Resize your pics also, makes it look like a better. Your cam looks really good, top marks for that. Corrona V VH - Good looking customs, to be your own characters. Some good wrestling to begin, try to make, your transition between pics smoother. And more pics per page, the minimum should be about 7, i used to do that, and i agree, it didnt look good. I like that cane. Some pics are missing, like some people have said. Jackson V Benoit - Better poses so far in here, than the first. String? Would be better is used. Ending was slow, no pics, boooo, you need more. Raven V Matt - Not to keen on Raven, but it is better than what i can do. Edit tommorow/weekend.OK then, now gonna finish this, then over to Pook, and maybe a reply to ROG, as im feeling generous right now. Your cam quality is really good, the close pics are good quality. I like your barbed wire, i had a go at making some, and its difficult. Your tacks are, ummm, alright, a little small, but i quite like them. That match was great, it would be good if more were that length. HHH V Angle - Thats a bit low of Trips isnt it?  Belly to Belly looked weird looking Woah, no mid air pic though foor the moonsault. Good ending in all though. So, a lot of potential like i thought. Add more pics to the matches, to make it flow better, thats the main point at this minute. |
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Deep Shadows
Main Eventer
MXW 6 is here! https://youtu.be/LiDlNuiKmjA
Joined on: Jul 7, 2006 2:39:30 GMT -5
Posts: 3,504
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Post by Deep Shadows on Nov 1, 2006 13:30:51 GMT -5
Thanks for all the great feedback so far. But 86 views and only 3 replies?!
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Post by thatsthebottomline on Nov 1, 2006 16:38:06 GMT -5
Nice but the only thing I saw that annoyed me was the fact that you could have used quotations or something to show when the guy introducing them was talking to whether or not its the commentators.
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