★Mr. Korn★
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Joined on: Sept 2, 2006 23:17:48 GMT -5
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Post by ★Mr. Korn★ on Apr 3, 2007 5:58:28 GMT -5
Heres my first ever show on the forums. Opening match: Sabu vs. Rhyno vs. 123-Kid for spot in tonights main event with Kurt Angle. Triple H vs. Tommy Dreamer. UFF Championship ladder match Kurt Angle vs.  www.freewebs.com/polp44/Rate/ Reply |
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cgj
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Joined on: Sept 5, 2004 9:00:25 GMT -5
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Post by cgj on Apr 3, 2007 6:06:13 GMT -5
Not bad for a first show. You certainly have potential. Even though I could see your hand in some of the shots, it's good to see that you were using string, but you need to edit it out. (there's a link to a program which can do that in the FAQ). Your matches were too short, but some of the bumps in them were quite cool. My advice to you would be to focus on the length of your matches and backstage segments. Good job. I hope to see more from you.  |
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★Mr. Korn★
Main Eventer
Joined on: Sept 2, 2006 23:17:48 GMT -5
Posts: 1,735
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Post by ★Mr. Korn★ on Apr 3, 2007 6:12:13 GMT -5
TY, ive also got another brand called EWC which has longer matches.
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Joined on: Nov 21, 2024 9:19:57 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Apr 3, 2007 9:42:27 GMT -5
WOOPS! Watched it gotta reply on this.
HE! HE! HE!
Your matches are good, love the style of your matches, specially the first one( I like the part where Rynos speared 1.2.3. Kid then Sabu does a moonsault on him. Your storyline are good but some of the moves are.....
Well, we may call it a little stiff, but still, you got one heck of a show!
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