The Canadian Zebra
Main Eventer
WF 15+ Year Member
Formerly: T-Swift, Flyleaf, Ian White's Mustache, and Strike Force
Joined on: Apr 17, 2004 12:00:07 GMT -5
Posts: 2,862
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Post by The Canadian Zebra on May 21, 2007 18:44:06 GMT -5
Well, this is my first attempt at a pic fed, and critizism is welcome, also any pointers that can help me. So turn up your speakers, and Enjoy. www.freewebs.com/wrdub/ |
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Post by kc on May 21, 2007 18:48:00 GMT -5
I think XRW Is already taken  EDIT - yeah, couldn't say I reallly enjoyed It. the Into's took forever, and when we finally got to see the match I was like meh . No string and the poses killed It for me. Decent commentary, Ultimo/Rey should be godly, yeah MOTN but that Isn't saying much, tbh . I hope to see you return, use string In the future. |
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Main Eventer
Joined on: Aug 17, 2004 0:15:18 GMT -5
Posts: 4,776
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Post by |»Champ«| on May 21, 2007 22:42:29 GMT -5
Don't have that much time to go through everything at the moment but i'll list some points
.Matches were a tad bit short. Next show try to make them a bit longer
.Nice starting some fueds/friendships on your first show
.Posing was nice
.Commentary wasn't bad, just a few mistakes in words but not that bad
.Fav match had to be Ultimo vs. Rey
.Can't wait to see how Austin/HBK angle turns out
.Can't wait for your second show
7/10
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Post by greenjack1992 on May 22, 2007 12:14:18 GMT -5
Okay, Here's the thing, I love the concept, the characters and the story lines, however, your matches are too short to develop any kind of character in terms of whether or not they are a face or a heel, I like what you have but I'm not going to rate it, I think that with longer matches it would be awsome.  |
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