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Post by juggalok66 on May 25, 2007 14:36:08 GMT -5
Hey guys, this is my first post on the board and my first attempt at making a show, my fed ROE. Its only three matches but ill do more in my future shows. I want your opinions on it because i need the criticism so i can get better at this, but keep in mind its my first attempt. www.freewebs.com/roehardcoretv1 |
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Post by reecechillin on May 25, 2007 16:57:26 GMT -5
Okay so it really doesn't need so much work. First off you need to remove the WWE logo from the ring seen as it isnt WWE.  The commentry needs alot more work to it, just because there is only a few pics doesnt mean you can commentate on them all.... poses, good use of string. but use it most of the time:   not bad for a first EDIT: oh and one more thing, make your arena look more like an arena...... remove the giant can etc.... ;D Well done though. |
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Post by alex123ecw on May 25, 2007 19:58:12 GMT -5
its really not that bad,stiff possing and major fingers in the pics,but,i could see you goind somewere
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Post by -=[ CRuSH ]=- on May 28, 2007 9:57:53 GMT -5
I enjoyed it man, I'd only say one thing. Near Falls. I think they need to be in there, some of the offence was unbelievable and you'd have to go for a pin.
Other than that, very enjoyable. Awesome commentary.
Keep your eye ouy for my new fed in the upcoming months
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