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Post by x0kimmy on Jan 17, 2008 20:24:09 GMT -5
ROAD TO SUPERBRAWL : BEAUTY IS BRUISE DEEP The simplest things make females stand out. Their eyes, their skin tone, their bust, and, for Barbie Love, their bruises. Girls are known as eye candy in some male minds but in some male bodies, they know they can fight. Barbie Love showed them that though she may have a "perfect" body, she has a perfect punch that will make you scream "mercy". It`s unfortunate that Barbie never understood the word "mercy" until she won or over-came tricks as tough as a maze. Barbie`s intensity comes from the remarks and idiots that think girls can`t fight. Her drive comes from the little girls sitting at home, watching the television cheering on the Diva`s in the ring fighting and proving guys wrong. Barbie Love was just the kind of role model. But when guys check her out, they check her fists, bruises, and even her power.FISTSPunching bags have no chance with Barbie. She hits and scoops and can overtake the heavy, overstuffed, bag. No obstacle is too big or too small for the diva with drive and intensity in her eyes and her fists. Sure, any other Diva can "talk" with her eyes, but only a skilled wrestler can "talk" with her fists. "POW!" A jab to the face and a blow to the stomach. Hearing someone scream in pain is enough words for Barbie Love. BRUISESWith every true battle comes the marks and bruises and Barbie is no different. No matter how many times she gets in the ring, there is no doubt she will get hurt and damaged. It takes, however, a true fighter to walk out with their head held high, with their bloody nose, and their aching bodies even when they don`t win the match. Barbie is just that wrestler. POWERStrength, agility, and all that magic stands high, but power comes into play with Barbie Love. You haven`t fought a match until you are raised over her shoulders and slammed to the mat as hard as you can think. It makes other power moves look like your mother could do better. Such a powerful powerbomb, even the nosebleed section will feel the slam and hear the mat echo when the innocent wrestler`s body is slammed against the mat because of Barbie Love. Maybe just one day when guys see a Diva walk through that curtain, down that ramp, and enter that ring they won`t first look at their ass. Or first won`t look at her bust. But look at her passion for this business. For her pain and suffering she has overcome. And even her smile, because at the end of Barbie Love`s match on the Road to Superbrawl, she will win her match, and she will be smiling at the end of it.[/CENTER]
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Post by zombiesx on Jan 18, 2008 8:30:59 GMT -5
OK rp, well I wish you luck in your match, even though I am against you, and I will not go easy as when I asked what you thought about me, you told me I was a creep....LOL
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Post by bad guy™ on Jan 18, 2008 10:29:07 GMT -5
Ok. I understand this RP....but this really cannot be called an RP. This would be an amazing intro to an RP....but you just....stopped. And this is up rather fast too. Did you think of trying to expand on your topics? I mean...it is not my match so I really do not care....Just keep those little things in mind next time.
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Post by matthardy on Jan 18, 2008 23:15:07 GMT -5
great roleplay 10/10, but a few things to fix
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Post by Calvin on Jan 18, 2008 23:17:26 GMT -5
great roleplay 10/10, but a few things to fix don't you remember someone saying how you can't have a 10 out of 10 and also have mistakes?
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Post by B-Radimus Prime on Jan 19, 2008 10:54:41 GMT -5
Ok. I understand this RP....but this really cannot be called an RP. This would be an amazing intro to an RP....but you just....stopped. And this is up rather fast too. Did you think of trying to expand on your topics? I mean...it is not my match so I really do not care....Just keep those little things in mind next time. I agree. It would've been a perfect intro to an RP. I like the idea and the title, but there could've been a lot more to it.
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Post by sonstuds on Jan 20, 2008 13:56:05 GMT -5
Ok. I understand this RP.... but this really cannot be called an RP. This would be an amazing intro to an RP....but you just....stopped. And this is up rather fast too. Did you think of trying to expand on your topics? I mean...it is not my match so I really do not care....Just keep those little things in mind next time. *shakes head* For a character introduction this is pretty good. I suppose I agree with everyone else when they say something else would have enhanced it, but at the same time saving the first real glimpse at Barbie for SB might be a good idea, especially when it's a match that means much more than this one.
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Post by x0kimmy on Jan 20, 2008 14:02:00 GMT -5
yeah. I rushed only because I thought it was due last Friday, not the upcoming one and I wasn`t going to be on for the rest of the weekend so I was like "crap" and tried my best. I wish I could edit it but I just don`t want people being upset that I did. I totally regret not finishing it but eh
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Post by Calvin on Jan 20, 2008 14:22:23 GMT -5
this doesnt' even sound rushed. I like it. I actually think you're pretty decent. GIven a few weeks and the right push you could be something.
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