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Post by Kyzer on Jul 10, 2006 2:37:42 GMT -5
THis has no real bearing on the WFWF. I did it in another fed. It is actually three seperate rps but I combined them into one really long f*cking rp on this page. it took me 15 hours to write these three rps. The main reason I am posting them is I think they are some of my best work in a long, long time. I also want everyone to know that I did lose this match, I was outrped fairly. It happens every once in a while. Make sure you have some time if you intend to read them. They are three rps so they do take a while to read all at once. There is some viewer Discretion advised, as the language is pretty foul and vulgar. If people enjoy I may make a return to rping here. The storylines are different in that fed, though you may notice some similarities. fwrestling.com/host/MichaelKyzer/rp001.htmlSome background, Kyzer's wife is Ashley, his slut misteress is Callista, his daughter is Serenity, and his son is Gavin. He no longer does drugs, and my opponents are Kacy Knight, Steve Mathias, and Jay Rivers. Jay was someone I feuded with off and on for the last six months and he is the one who won the match. This was the first time he had ever beaten me when I rped.
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Revvie®
Main Eventer
Somewhere between Reality, and the Absurd
Joined on: Jun 29, 2005 1:04:26 GMT -5
Posts: 4,327
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Post by Revvie® on Jul 10, 2006 3:03:10 GMT -5
This rp definitely was a Kyzer rp....I really couldnt find any flaws with it...I mean you gave and interesting story while making sure to cover the match very well....It flowed nicely in my opinion and though it twas a bit lengthy it was not boring by any means...over all I think this is one of your best rps i have read and I would like to see you come back to rping here if you feel you would like too...I dont pose much of a challenge now but given a lil time to grow i think i could atleast give you a run...hehe...well ne ways great rp....a few things... Dialogue was Fantastic as usual Story and Description were very nicely done over I would give it a 9 out of 10...got to have room to grow hehe...well thats all..nice job Reverend Shadow
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Post by veronicaaaahhhh on Jul 10, 2006 6:19:57 GMT -5
This RP is a beautifuly crafted monster. It really gives the reader an in-depth look into the character from all sides. Nicely done man!
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