SB RPS: The Ties That Bind Us (2 RPs)

Absolutely loved every word. Great job man...wow this is goin to be one hell of a match, I hope I still have a chance lol...It was worth the extension and the wait....Awesome Rp and Good luck in our match.

Reverend Shadow

Wow.....you know I leave and you were awesome...I come back and you are a million times more awesome.....rape me please.....do something I need that awesomness....as always u are too good for words....here's to you and rev...can't wait to read the big ppv results ...i'm so glad I came back yay

These were both awesome. I perfered Love over Hate, but I get a reference in Hate, I'm liking that. Good luck boss

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Fantastic work bro, very well done.

I've found in RPs the most important thing is to create a unique approach to your set-up as well as having the best fundamental skills possible. Now I'll usually get on someone for not actually writing a setting word for word and describing the surrounding area, which true most people aren't description whores like me, but with RPs like this I find that while it may help, it doesn't really need any of that. You do a fantastic job of creating an aura and a mood and feeling, it's kind of strange too. Your writing style is very literal and not dramatic or mystical but yet you can establish such deep themes and emotions. That's probably your greatest asset. Nonetheless, I guarantee anyone reading this RP could probably close their eyes during and actually picture the setting. Your work almost plays out like a movie, we get the shot of the clock, Kyzer sitting, etc... It's all really great stuff.

The subject matter was very good and very patient. There's a fine line between escalation and patience and writing too much. I felt Shadow's major mistake in his RPs was his excessive, pointless writing and then the lack of patience to follow through with the long RP. But, nonetheless, your story escalates here very well. It's very interesting the character points here and it makes for an interesting dynamic with Kyzer selfishly not wanting Shadow to have his glory and Shadow feeling obliged to destroy Kyzer. Once again, great stuff.

Overall I really enjoyed both RPs. My only real complain was I wish you linked them somehow. These play as part one and part two very clearly and I felt the lack of seperating them in time was the only detriment. Shadow's work for this show was mediocre, but he had a very clever setting and seperation of time and such. It's sort of ironic that's the one thing I'd say was a little hazy here.

Great work, glad to see you RPing if it's only for a short time for now.