Revvie®
Main Eventer
Somewhere between Reality, and the Absurd
Joined on: Jun 29, 2005 1:04:26 GMT -5
Posts: 4,327
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Post by Revvie® on Dec 20, 2006 22:36:53 GMT -5
Actually to be honest I was extremely happy with this rp. So whether it wins or not or whether any of you really grasp any of it doesnt really matter to me b/c I loved writing it and feel its some of my best work to date. Rping for PPV's always brings out the best in everyone, and it did here in my opinion. Good Luck to Kurt and everyone in the PPV and Preshow. Comments and Critism would be rather great on this rp if possible. Revvie.  Riddle of Truths |
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Post by kcmcgrath on Dec 20, 2006 23:21:00 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this roleplay... I loved the dream sequence at the beginning and the whole theme of the riddles. As always... your description was awesome and the entire roleplay had me hooked. Good luck! |
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Post by tobeornottobe on Dec 21, 2006 12:25:35 GMT -5
Good hook, good body para.....Oh wait...  God damn, Rev. Another great one. I loved the idea of all of the confusing riddles from the hobo. Nothing to complain about here, because I really enjoyed this. Good luck in your match! |
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Yukio Blaze
Main Eventer
WFWF Record: 58-54-03-02
Joined on: Dec 15, 2004 21:50:34 GMT -5
Posts: 4,515
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Post by Yukio Blaze on Dec 21, 2006 12:36:24 GMT -5
The only thing I wished you would have added to this rp, was a cheap pop for the other 7 guys in the tourney.
Other than that, Shadow this was an awesome rp and good luck to you.
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Post by thesouthsidekid on Dec 21, 2006 13:46:05 GMT -5
Well Rev, where sir do I start.
First off the dream sequence was a great way to start it off. The Michael character, maybe it is just where I am newer to the fed, but has me interested in just who he is. But anyway the dialouge was great in this sequence and the descriptions are good as well. The blood from the feathers and the other pores of his body made for a nice ironic twist because Crimson Existence is the name of the PPV. Anyway got off track for a minute. But I thought I'd point out that as an example that kept me intrigued.
The homeless guy interaction, I have to be honest, I wasn't feeling that well. It seemed the speech was forced and the dialogue didn't flow as well as it should've or could've, but it's the nature of beast.
Finally, the monolouge sermon, was again a nice tie in to what had been going on all rp.
So, I'll leave you with this. The rp, was great quality, what we've come to get from you. But there were just a couple of things that I just wasn't feeling that kept this from being my favorite rp from you. But still yet, another well done job.
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Post by veronicaaaahhhh on Dec 22, 2006 0:59:22 GMT -5
This RP was very mythical. The narration was very elegant and straight foward; the whole thing was very esoteric. It was like a selection from an Edith Hamilton book. Very well done. Good luck come Crimson Existence.
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Calvin
Main Eventer
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Joined on: Dec 18, 2001 15:13:21 GMT -5
Posts: 3,791
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Post by Calvin on Dec 22, 2006 7:57:12 GMT -5
Interesting rp. The dream at the start was good.......but I can't seem to see where the theme of riddles is in it. I must have missed it. Anyways...good luck.
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Post by CBT on Dec 22, 2006 19:52:21 GMT -5
Another RP I forgot to Reply to, but read and enjoyed. Good job man, though I hope this riddling homeless aristocrat is not your alternative Yoda?
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Post by hardyz on Dec 23, 2006 10:32:36 GMT -5
Wow...someone lost their mind....lol. I like it. It was very discriptive. And Calvin is right. I cannot seem to find the riddles. Mabye I am just blind at your greatness....lol....but I do not see them.
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