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Post by Mole on May 28, 2007 19:23:33 GMT -5
 I'm not sure what to think of this. I like it, but I think it needs text somewhere, but I couldn't figure out a place or a way to put it on the graphic and have it look good. So, here's hoping I can get some of the advice that's been dished out so readily today.  So yeah, after looking at the first graphic for a while, I decided I hated its guts (mostly because I like placing text as it's the one thing I generally get commented on) and to completely redo it. This is the result. It may just be me, but I noticed it draws my eye from 1-3 as seen in this pic:  Coincidentally, this actually how I wanted it, because as much as I like the text, I don't think it should ever draw more attention than the focal image. If anyone's wondering, I used the same smoke brush-pack on the majority of this graphic as I used for the tires in the 1st one. |
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Post by waylon on May 28, 2007 19:29:04 GMT -5
I'm not really diggin' this. The main pic and the background are just WAY to dark. Its too hard to make out exactly what is going on. I don't really know what else you could do besides lighten it up. As for text, maybe something in the lover left would work since there isn't really anything going on down there.
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Post by classicfan on May 28, 2007 19:30:23 GMT -5
Well here is what I am thinking of for a text idea. Possibly add either some pixel font or maybe even something similar to it. put it in that empty spot to the right. I did a sig a while ago with text in a certain way. The sig aint great but the text is good placement.  Possibly do that to the right. This is a hard thing for this graphic. Other than that the graphic is nice. It has a good simplicity to it that you don't see much. The idea is good and I am loving the fact that there isn't much brushing just because it would have runied something like this. Hope that helped...  |
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Post by classicfan on May 28, 2007 20:26:40 GMT -5
Good, you kinda got what I said about the text. It looks nice considering you did the smoke brushing well. There is achilies heel with this piece though and that is the fact that I didn't even see the Warthog. Change that up a bit and you're golden.
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Post by Mole on May 28, 2007 20:33:05 GMT -5
What warthog, and in which piece? Techincally, there's not a Warthog in either piece, as there's a Mongoose (a new vehicle in Halo 3) in the first one, and only the Chief in the 2nd one. If you're talking about the object in background near the right in the 2nd one, that's just a piece of background from the Ark in the Announcement trailer.
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Post by classicfan on May 29, 2007 11:23:47 GMT -5
Ah, my bad. I stopped playing Halo after Halo 2 came out for Xbox only. That piece of background really looks like a mongoose but it doesn't take away from this good graphic.
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Post by jonesy12345 on May 29, 2007 19:50:06 GMT -5
The second looks amazing but I'm not sure about the 1st and 3rd.
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Post by classicfan on May 29, 2007 20:07:08 GMT -5
Nah, TNA you can't post here man. Sorry but it's the rules. Follow em'.
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