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Post by stfuwrestling on Dec 26, 2006 15:59:24 GMT -5
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- oKANEo -
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Post by - oKANEo - on Dec 26, 2006 16:36:39 GMT -5
1. Buy a tripod or keep your cam still by putting it on a stack of books and putting something heavy either side to keep it in place.
2. Use string, it's bad enough when people move the cam further and further down to not get their fingers in, but you moved it down and still managed to get your fingers in there.
3. Add alot more frames and move the joints into a slightly different position from the frame befor it to prevent stiffness.
4. I like the way you made him kick his legs like that because he's in soo much pain, nice touch.
The ani was ok I suppose but it needs string and a tripod, if you can't use string then I pity you as it's one of the easiest parts of animating, it's the movements that are hard. Just test out different ways of putting on the string to keep the figure steady in an array of different angles and positions.
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jdsnow14
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Post by jdsnow14 on Dec 27, 2006 20:29:41 GMT -5
8/10 getting there bud
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Post by Jord on Dec 28, 2006 9:13:43 GMT -5
I like it, but the camera shakes too much. I love Rey's reaction, after it. Good job.
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Post by wrestler619 on Dec 29, 2006 21:44:27 GMT -5
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Post by wrestler619 on Dec 29, 2006 21:48:26 GMT -5
Anyways I am going to review. It's fairly decent but pretty basic, I suggest like oKANEo said buy a tripod or use something to keep your camera on, and please use string it helps make your ani's look so much better. Now I hope to see better animations from you in the New Year.
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Post by crod182 on Dec 30, 2006 1:09:16 GMT -5
Anyways I am going to review. It's fairly decent but pretty basic, I suggest like oKANEo said buy a tripod or use something to keep your camera on, and please use string it helps make your ani's look so much better. Now I hope to see better animations from you in the New Year. Finally someone who understands how to leave a good reply and tell people the same....good job  ;D anyway.....ya get a tripod it will make the camera move less......make sure that all the figures are in each of the frames if it is not people would think u held it up with your fingers
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Post by ThrowinUpTheX on Jan 5, 2007 14:02:07 GMT -5
Give him a break, its a good ani. One thing that could be improved is showing whole view of rey and not cutting out legs at the start. 8/10
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Post by nobre19 on Jan 18, 2007 7:16:58 GMT -5
i love the reaction on rey when he hits the steps, very nice job i like it 8/10
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