mitch
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Jan 13, 2007 22:55:51 GMT -5
Post by mitch on Jan 13, 2007 22:55:51 GMT -5
Its ing crap. Its only my second btw.
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Jan 14, 2007 6:07:36 GMT -5
Post by rvdboy on Jan 14, 2007 6:07:36 GMT -5
Eh, weird one this. I know what's going on but it looks strange. I don't get Del's slide before he jumps up, surely having his just bend his legs to give the impression of springing up would look better. Apart from that the jump looks good. However there are a lot of frames missing at odd points, namely Dragon moving and the actual DVD. Speaking of which, looks odd, there should be like a flip of opponent, here it just looks like SupD's falling with him, and given the lack of impact, the reaction looks really out of place. However, i know myself how hard it is to animate a DVD, probably my least favourite move to try. It's OK for a second, you've got some basics down, like string, editing it out and keeping the camera still. But maybe this is too hard of a move to try for your second. I suggest for your next ani, something simple like a moonsault, and really concentrate on getting a smooth amount of frames. I really enjoy you're poses, with some practice, i think your ani's could become something great too.
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mitch
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Jan 14, 2007 6:21:37 GMT -5
Post by mitch on Jan 14, 2007 6:21:37 GMT -5
omg <3
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Jan 14, 2007 7:26:45 GMT -5
Post by Ricky Nitro on Jan 14, 2007 7:26:45 GMT -5
Far from crap...
The part I like the most is Delerious' leg and arm getting stuck on the ropes at the end. I'm not sure if it's based on a real moment, and that's what happened or not, but either way, I like it. It gives it more of a real stay where they fall feel. It's also really smooth overall. It's a really good animation.
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Jan 14, 2007 7:30:40 GMT -5
Post by mitch on Jan 14, 2007 7:30:40 GMT -5
Thanks Ricky. However, I do think that if I want to have a decent chance in the tourny, I should make like 5 more anis by then.
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Jan 15, 2007 19:45:02 GMT -5
Post by jdsnow14 on Jan 15, 2007 19:45:02 GMT -5
thats was nice is moved well win he got him on his shoulders good job
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Jan 16, 2007 19:42:14 GMT -5
Post by nobre19 on Jan 16, 2007 19:42:14 GMT -5
Nice transisition especially in the air, good job 7/10
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