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Post by binnzer317 on Jun 5, 2007 1:52:55 GMT -5
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Chris182
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Post by Chris182 on Jun 5, 2007 2:56:57 GMT -5
Pretty good ani here man. Like the quality and its pretty smooth, You used a good amount of frames. Lighting is perfect. No camera movements. Heres some things you need to work on. First, stiffness, every frame, try to bend the joints a little, it gives the ani a more realistic feel. an ani needs to look realistic right? not like toys. So every frame, try to move the joints, trust me, it will make your anis better. Next, the lift off. when your making an ani of someone jumping or something, get in the little effort to make them bend don, and back up, it would look way better. Next, reaction. when the fig is coming close to impact, make them have a reaction. in wrestling, when someone does an SSP on someone, do they stay stiff as a log? no. everyone's goal in animating is to get it to look as real as they can, so try to do that. it will help. Next, screen? make sure everything is seen in the screen, i could hardly see boogy in this. i guess thats it, try to work on some of the things that i said. good job.
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Post by pimpd1 on Jun 5, 2007 7:47:49 GMT -5
Good but stiff like chris 182 very good really smooth 8/10 do more you have gotten really better
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No Gimmick Needed™
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little superstar! also known as slater07.
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Post by No Gimmick Needed™ on Jun 5, 2007 10:49:55 GMT -5
well if i'm correct this is the ani that you were going to use in the PBL match. I forfited which he forgot to say.on to the ani
very nice indeed , like the smoothness, not felling the boggiemans position and its a shame you can't see te reaction
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Post by binnzer317 on Jun 5, 2007 11:13:32 GMT -5
Thanks for the nice comments evryone, And thanks for the tips chris  |
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Mushroom Stomp
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Crazy Frog Bros Fa' Life
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Post by Mushroom Stomp on Jun 5, 2007 15:49:37 GMT -5
i know you probably dont need this advice but i think you could have used a few more frames of him turning,and it was alittle shaky.but it was pretty good
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Post by 95sheehan95 on Jun 5, 2007 16:45:16 GMT -5
hey binney i saw your ani this one)a couple of days ago when you showed it to me and it was niiiice.but like i told you it would have been netter if RVD looked like he jumped but i still love this animation you've improved soo much since your first couple 9/10 keep it up ;D
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Post by 9murphy6 on Jun 6, 2007 1:21:27 GMT -5
well he seemed to float for a bit lol the way he did that he would of landed on his neck lol but very smooth 10/10 man you is a great animator
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Post by binnzer317 on Jun 6, 2007 10:12:20 GMT -5
Thanks alot guys =D
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