XJW MAYHEM II;Scara vs. Potter LHW title Match

Alright, i have a few things to say, not all good but not all bad either....

First off, i dont mind the song much, actually i like it, but i'm not sure if it really fits a wrestling MV... unless of course edited correctly... You all wrestle on a trampoline, build a base, if you wanna know how, just ask.

There are alot of what looks to be older dudes in the fed, they definately shouldn't be wrestling on a tramp, use the ground if nothing else... even though the majority of people in yarding are against yarding on the ground, but that's mainly because it's never done correctly and looks like crap and sloppy as hell when done on the ground.

I'd love to wrestle for this fed just due to the fact that the crowd seems to be into and well, the fact they have a crowd period, haha and i'm a douche that loves to hear people mark out for me...

nothing in here was really terrible but all pretty basic, all pretty much generic and unoriginal.... but that comes with time, developing a movelist and character will all come with time, and i haven't seen enough of youralls stuff yet to really touch on that.

also, when posting on a BYW message board your videos and crap, don't put the whole storyline and all that, it's fine we all know it's fake haha... we dont need a back story or any foreshadowing or reason as to why to guys are fighting wrestling.. we just need to know who it is really, and maybe if there are stipulations in the matches or w/e... uhm, the whole texted promo in your post, i actually read it... wow i'm really that bored. but it's not really needed when posting here... just telling you because you seem new seeing as no1 has posted many replies... so.

What you have:
-An audience willing to watch and go nuts weather it's on the ground a base or trampoline.
-a whole lot of wrestlers on the roster, or so it apears.
-a good atmosphere that makes me even wanna come and wrestle with you guys, even though i'd have to wrestle on the ground instead of the trampoline because that's how i roll.
- decent moves and willingness to actually take them and bump correctly, well kinduh.

what you need:
- a base
- movesets with or w/out gimmicks
- attires other than everyday cloths, set yourself out from everyone else instead of wearing basketball shorts... cuz when i watch this, idk 1 person from another.
-a new camera cuz that line through that crap the whole time was super annoying.
-something better to edit with, program wise.
- a little bit of zayne knowledge and some work, and you'll be good to go.

i'm sure some people are going to come on here and flame you all, but those people i hate, cuz here i am sitting here poring out all this actual information and critisim... and then some douche will come behind me and start flamming the topic leaving my lines unoticed and reducing there value... it's not everyday i make a post on wf, and it's definately not everyday that i give praise to a new fed that is on a tramp... but for some reason... i like you dudes, even though you called wrestling fighting and all that haha... gross..

anywho, the aim is Zayne4president.... any questions, IM me to ask... i'm a whore for attention so dont neglect me. heh.

-zayne- i suck.