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Post by JCLS on Feb 1, 2007 19:03:13 GMT -5
Some notes... -This match is like 6-7 minutes long, and pretty bad. -This was Hugh's first filmed match. -He's pretty bad. -He doesn't watch wrestling that much. -Towards the end he forgets what happens next in the match, and well...embarassing. -The match you're seeing is take 3, as I stopped it 2 times before because of botches. -Hopefully he improves, or I make less ****ty friends  -(Try to) Enjoy. www.sendspace.com/file/mjzpo7 |
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Post by ozzymac on Feb 2, 2007 7:57:38 GMT -5
I'm guesssing this video sucks if you did the match 3 times, capped the video, made the MV, uploaded it, and posted it ALL IN ONE DAY! Nevermind, I'm not guessing, I KNOW THIS VIDEO SUCKS without watching...
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Post by Spicoli~! on Feb 2, 2007 14:05:30 GMT -5
Alright I'm typing as I'm watching and helping you out with what needs work. The tie up wasn't too good at all, but don't get down on yourself about it because I used to do tie ups that were even worse just shy of two years ago before I learned things the right way.
Just watch any vids on here mostly and you'll see the right way to lock-up. Your left arm goes on the opponents left shoulder/collar, then your right hand goes on their left arms elbow. Once you start doing and practicing them you will realize that they are cake.
I didn't like a 9 count two minutes into the match after a double shoulderblock too much because it was way too early. I liked the backslide countered into a roll up, that was pretty neat. I felt the spear with the flurry of punches should've happened after the slap instead of a shoulderblock then a pin.
The ending confused me alot cuz dan did the damage but hugh took the pin, was that supposed to be a flatliner counter?
Overall, you guys should definately try to build a ringbase of sorts, the trampoline takes alot away from a match, you guys did make the most of it though using the caging as turnbuckles and whatnot.
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Post by JCLS on Feb 2, 2007 17:53:57 GMT -5
Alright I'm typing as I'm watching and helping you out with what needs work. The tie up wasn't too good at all, but don't get down on yourself about it because I used to do tie ups that were even worse just shy of two years ago before I learned things the right way. Just watch any vids on here mostly and you'll see the right way to lock-up. Your left arm goes on the opponents left shoulder/collar, then your right hand goes on their left arms elbow. Once you start doing and practicing them you will realize that they are cake. I didn't like a 9 count two minutes into the match after a double shoulderblock too much because it was way too early. I liked the backslide countered into a roll up, that was pretty neat. I felt the spear with the flurry of punches should've happened after the slap instead of a shoulderblock then a pin. The ending confused me alot cuz dan did the damage but hugh took the pin, was that supposed to be a flatliner counter? Overall, you guys should definately try to build a ringbase of sorts, the trampoline takes alot away from a match, you guys did make the most of it though using the caging as turnbuckles and whatnot. Thanks a lot man, I really appreciate the in depth response/critique. I've said it before, but I don't really have the time and energy to invest into building a base, especially since I rarely get the chance to BYW anyways. And the ending was supposed to be him reversing my body slam into a DDT, but like a lot of things in this video, it turned out like crap lol I'm guesssing this video sucks if you did the match 3 times, capped the video, made the MV, uploaded it, and posted it ALL IN ONE DAY! Nevermind, I'm not guessing, I KNOW THIS VIDEO SUCKS without watching... It's not a MV, it's a full match. And who really gives a crap? I BYW for fun, and not nearly as many times as most of you guys. Seriously, what the  . I don't do crap to any of the 'higher ups' here on this board, but whenever I post stuff all I get is bunghole comments like this and it's ing unnecessary. If you don't like me then don't even bother to reply (especially just to be an bunghole.) |
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Post by cubedtwc on Feb 2, 2007 17:56:17 GMT -5
There are no higher ups on wfigs.
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Post by JCLS on Feb 3, 2007 15:13:08 GMT -5
If this is the first you've seen of me, then please, watch this first. It's not great, but in my opinion, it's one of my personal better matches... www.sendspace.com/file/2uc63o |
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Post by Focalin on Feb 4, 2007 16:04:05 GMT -5
watching now, notes: - That long entrance way isn't really needed, but if you wanna still do it, go a head.
- Okay, I know it's hard to do because I did the same thing, when you're on it, try to do as little bounce as possible, it's hard but try to do it.
- tie ups need work, with your left arm 'grab the back of the neck' or just have your arm straight across his shoulders, either or, then with your right arm bend your elbow out and grab the top of his elbow. (he's doing the same thing).
- start off with chaining after the tie-up
- head locks are on your left side,
- work on the left side
- O.K. it's not a problem, but try to work on running the 'net' don't actually use the net to shoot you, just run, turn and stop kinda lean then run.
- double down was too early
- you guys aren't really doing 'faces and heels' right now, it looks like your the heel, just because of hiding behind the ref at the beginning, and now slapping the dude.
- shoulder blocks are on the left side
- I totally loved the hanging on the post, that was awesome, I just wish you would have done a head scissors or something.
- when you suplex, grab the top of the dude's pants, as apposed to his thigh, also try to keep your legs straight to look pretty.
- The back handspring thing was cool, just next time, try to come down closer on the hand spring, so you don't jump back far, and it'll look stronger.
- That dude really didn't put your back breaker into the submission over, not your fault, his.
- working on his back after it: nice
- eh, didn't stay for too long, just try to work on the body part you worked the most.
- okay, you're back to his back ha ha.
- missed moonsault, why didn't you sell it?
- Yay for hurricanrana!
- this time is where the double down comes in.
- weakest closeline? ha ha
- have him swing his arm so it looks better
- cut off; good, back to working on his back; awesome.
- so, why did he get the pin?
- OOOHHH Okay, he countered it into a DDT, I get it now. Next time, try to head spike more. And for the finish he should have worked your head.
All in all, fun match, not the best. But who cares? It's trampoline wrestling, I mean I'm sure you want to do good, but who doesn't? This vid brought back memories of my early trampoline days, I think I'm gonna do a trampoline match just because it's fun. Keep it up, I look forward to the next vid. |
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