Ok here's for the first videos.
- Great Job on the Establishment(Your entrances). It was clear who the heels and who the faces were and already gave me a feel for this match.
- Great chain work! I'm really impressed. I marked for Dragon's chain move where he hooked your legs, rolled foward and hooked your arms in a butterfly lock, and then rolled you over again into a submission. Really enjoyable!
- Not sure which guy is the one that was wearing the long sleeved black shirt, but he needs to work on his bumping skills a bit.
- The head scrissors were a tad bit sloppy, but I've seen a whole lot worse.
- Most of the arm drag variations looked really nice. Especially the double team one.
- The Lung Blower that Dragon took, or "Backcracker" as you might know it, looked really bad. The guy doing it completely screwed up his leg form with it, and Dragon just kinda fell. Make sure the person doing it keeps there legs together, and there shins pressed up against the other persons back, and make sure the person taking it, shoots their feet out as if they were taking a backbump.
- Hurricana landing looked gross because you like neck bumped/head spiked and I don't know if you meant to do that, but it looked disgusting.
- Again, the guy in the long-sleeved black shirt really needs to work on his bumping skills. The rest of you seem to be doing really good.
- Curbstomp looked good!
- Make sure you suplexes are done on the left side. The guy in that did it off the top rope, did it right sided.
- Beautiful Capture Suplex and the guy took it gross!
- The Head Scissors into the Fujiwa Crossface looked really nice. It was very clean looking and very well done!
- Asaii DDT reversed into the Catonic Backbreaker looked really good as well!
- Stiff Superkick to the guy in that long-sleeved black shirt. I marked!
- I was a tad-bit dissapointed with the finish. It was a good idea, but the guy doing it kind of slipped when trying to kick off the other guy. But the actually Asaii that he did to you looked really decent.
As for this video, I overall enjoyed it. It was really good for ground wrestling! The two people that stuck out most were Dragon and the guy who was wearing the Red shirt over a long-sleeved black shirt, and had long hair. I'm not sure of everyone's names, so please do fill me in! Alright, on to the second match!
- Once again, great job on the Establishment. It was very clear to me that Spade was the heel, and J. Miller the face!
- The chain work started out very good until Spade put Miller in a Hammer Lock on his right arm. Always work the left! And he also did a Headlock takeover while have a hold of his head with his right arm. Same rule applies for headlocks, you're supposed to hold a headlock in with your left arm.
- Millers Headlock Takeover was a bit sloppy. When you do them, put your body up under the person taking it, then drop down to your right knee, while also posting with your right hand, and then whip them over.
- 'Ranna was a tad bit sloppy. Well maybe not sloppy but a bit slow looking.
- Spinal Tap was good. Made a nice little pop noise from hitting him!
- Ok, Northern Lights into the ladder in the corner was gross. Not to mention that Miller slid down and neck bumped after hitting. Props to that one.
- Ouch on the big front flip Plancha that Miller did. And really good job on selling his back after it had been worked for a bit!
- The BackBreaker looked Text book and Miller sold it very well!
- Nice Paylay kick from Miller!
- Once again, great job on Millers part for selling his back throughout the match! I mark for that.
- Chop was a little weak, but I can kind understand with it being cold and all.
- Miller's Striking Combo's looked really good. I'm really impressed by this guy!
- The Arm Drag reversal from the short-ranged Lariat looked very clean. Quite impressive to say the least.
- Props to Spade for taking the Styles Clash on the ground. The move
ing hurts either way.
- The Finish was decent. The only thing I wish that would have been done, was that Miller would have sold his back while walking away. Spade did a good job of showing that "I'm a failure/pissed off that I lost look" Props to him on that.
Overall, both of these videos were quite enjoyable and really good for ground work, especially in the cold. I was very impressed by Miller, but all of you did good for the most part. Can't wait to see more stuff and in the ring!
