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Good Pose. Randy Needs a reaction and you should do a mid table break. It will make it look betta

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Reece's Monthly Sequence Review

Pic Number 1:

Al Snow is in a good controlling position.
Randy Orton's position is really good, he looks very drowzy.
The only thing that is really wrong with the pic is that Al Snows left arm could do with being a little bit more higher to give that extra realism into it.

Pic Number 2:

Randy Ortans right arm looks very out of place, he needs to have it on the table which you have done but it needs to slacken off a bit - it looks to stiff.
His head could do with being a bit more up-right to show that he is actually being punched, again this is just to add the realism to the sequence.
Al Snows left arm is in an awful position, it needs to be a little more forward and tilt Randys head more to his right for a better reaction.
Al Snow could also do with being a little more leaning forward, he looks to straight up for my liking.

Pic Number 3:

Before i even start, seeing Randy's leg so far up like that just puts me off.
Anway, because this a sequence every thing is meant to run nice and smooth but after picture number 2 Randy has changed his position alot. They seem to have moved down the table.
Al Snow would be pushed Randy's left leg onto the table and then his body would have followed.

Pic Number 4:

Nothing much can be said about this really.
A nice middle point just to break things down.
I would of had Al Snows hand on Randys leg.

Pic Number 5:

Again, nothing much can be said.
I like the positioning of Al Snows legs to make him look as though he is actually walking.
I would of added more reaction to Randy though.
IE. Make him look up at Al Snow or turn him onto his right habd side.

Pic Number 6:

I would of had his left leg on the middle turnbuckle pad as though he was climbing up.
Randy has moved at all, he needs way more reaction.

Pic Number 7:

Once again, Randy hasn't moved a single bit.
He needs to have at least changed his arm positions.
I would of also put Al Snows left leg higher up, on the top turnbuckle to again make it look as though he is in mid-climb.

Pic Number 8:

Randy Orton again hasn't moved and this is for 4 pics now !!
I would of put Al Snows a little bit higher up like more out-streched but thats just me.

Pic Number 9:

Al Snows seems to have just got really high all of a sudden also he has moved a little in mid air which is fantastic because thats exactly what he does in the real thing.
Once again Randy hasn't moved at all, is he dead ?

Pic Number 10:

You need to make sure that all of the figure is in the picture other wise people will be led to belive that you havn't used string.
Also Randy still hasn't moved which is a really really poor reaction for a great shot like this.

Pic Number 11:

Al Snow is way too stiff, he needs his knees bending a bit bit more for the added realism.
Also a mid table break is the best thing for putting a table through and at this point it would have been great.
Randy still hasn't moved in all the pics now. Awful reactions.

Pic Number 12:

Once again the reaction from Randy is poor, really poor. His legs need to be more apart and furthur bent up.
Al Snows needs to be loosend up a bit bend his knees and leg joints alot more. I would also of put Al Snows arms furthur apart and furthur over the body of Randy.

Overall: 6/10.

Simply because of a great lack of reactions.

Well done though, keep trying.

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well does anyone have more suggestion on how to get better

thanks