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Post by brm on Jul 24, 2007 16:23:35 GMT -5
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KamiKaze15X
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Joined on: Jul 22, 2007 13:42:54 GMT -5
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Post by KamiKaze15X on Jul 24, 2007 16:29:39 GMT -5
OK.First of all,TTL's SUCK to post with.The TTL's dosen't add challenge,it adds flaws.But this is pretty decent.
Setup is OK,Pic 4 is the gem of the pose.Liking the impact of spikes fall.Thats about it.
Like I said,TTL's aren't very good to pose with.
7.5/10.
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Post by classicfan on Jul 24, 2007 16:30:40 GMT -5
I like this alot aside from pic 3 really. It looks like Kurt isn't even grabbing Spike. Possibly a move of Kurt's arms to under Spike's would be something to fix it. Other than that, this pose is pretty usual from you tbh. I gotta say, I love pic 5. For some reason, I think Kurt's positioning is perfect.
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Post by ll ALASKA ll on Jul 24, 2007 16:31:13 GMT -5
The arms killed it for me man. Kurt's arms in pic 3 were horrid :/ Should have maybe tied them together around the other dude. Or atleast bent them so they looked somewhat like he was holding him. Flow was iffy on this one, not your best work. I know you used TTL figs but, I have seen better from you.
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Post by wwe4ever on Jul 24, 2007 17:53:23 GMT -5
This is not really good. The TTL figs killed it. RA's or DA's would of been a lot better to use. Flow is alright but there's something about pic 3 that I just don't like. It looks like they're leaning up against each other in mid air. Pic 4 is alright. The arms could be positioned better. I like the reactions.
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Post by kingb on Jul 24, 2007 18:45:38 GMT -5
this is okay i like the flow and the ending but a few things need to be cleaned up. you should have tied angle hands together during the third pic..but then when spike gets let go of in air it looked great all the ways to the impact.
so is this for our pbl?
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Post by Cass on Jul 24, 2007 19:03:31 GMT -5
Ok so yeah, this must be really challenging which is why people shouldn't be telling you to use other figures. Ok first one thing i notice is, Kurt is up so why is spike just climbing the ladder? He wouldn't planning to jump if Kurt was up. I don't like how Kurt kinda just step up the ladder, I think Kurt woulda have more ran up the Ladder grabbed spike and threw him off. Pic 3 kurt's arms shouldve been down more onto spike, as spike was falling back with angle, even if he wouldnt have grabbed him til pic 4, which he did, it just wouldve looked better. But in pic 4 it looks more like a backdrop or the rotation before an angle slam and not a german, because spike is off to one side. The transition of the chairs from the last two pic is great, they fell where they should have in the last pic when they started. I love how spike was tilted in pic 4 and still tilted in pic 5 then flat on his stomach in pic 6. It shows the rotation without him just flipping over. Hopefully soon you will master these, can't wait for more.
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Post by hellboy1 on Jul 24, 2007 20:21:52 GMT -5
yeah it had good flow and angle psitioning was ok since they were ttls i hate angles arms and his legs in the i air shot but good for what it is
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