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Post by (+Bullet For My Valentine+) on Feb 28, 2007 14:16:18 GMT -5
Five StarSpearRVD/Mysterio SequenceKidman SSP
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Post by kencocoffee on Feb 28, 2007 14:20:12 GMT -5
Wow, is this your 1st, ing amazing..for a first..the Spear is the best. Keep it up. 9/10
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Post by Joey Cush on Feb 28, 2007 14:39:51 GMT -5
im not saying its not his 1st cause i dont know, but he never said it was his 1st. and by the looks it doesnt look like 1st's. frog splash, matt needs a reaction, i like rvds positioning. spear is great TBO. the sequence im not really into. rvd a little stiff, and i would have liekd to see what happened to rey.
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Post by fireworks on Feb 28, 2007 18:33:33 GMT -5
The frog splash isn't good for 2 reasons. The first is that Matt needs a reaction. The second is because I don't like the angle. 6/10
The spear is great. I love Dvon's reaction and Goldberg's positioning. 9/10
The third pose is ok. RVD is too stiff and you need another frame between 3 and 4. 6/10
I don't like the fourth one. The guy taking the move ( I can't see who it is) should have a reaction a Kidman's legs look messed up. 5/10
So overall you get a 26/40. The main thing you need to work on is to give guys reactions. If you do that your poses will get better.
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Post by hardc0r3 on Apr 10, 2007 9:17:49 GMT -5
Very nice job ^_^ everything was great all around 9/10
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Post by noname on Apr 10, 2007 9:35:32 GMT -5
I've seen all these before... Edit: Because it was bumped.
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