Dyamez
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Post by Dyamez on Mar 28, 2007 12:13:44 GMT -5
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Post by kencocoffee on Mar 28, 2007 12:40:11 GMT -5
Ok Dyamez, real nice pose here, not the usual that we usually get here, I give you props for posting this, thankyou.  Anyway onto the pose. I comment pic by pic, if thats ok with you lol. Pic 1 is good, old school angle by Dyamez, Orton ready to get that RKO on HBK, HABK Clueless, well done on this pic, pic 2 is nice and clear, Orton having a rolling spazm?  lol...I know what your trying to do, just hardly anyone can get it right, pic 3 is ok, Orton just seems to be rolling on with himself...  yeah lol, micheal still stood there. Pic 4, ahh, here's when we get to the action, Orton ready to pounce for that RKO, pic 5 is just brilliant, the position of orton the way his legs are like that, Shawn's position is good, with him turning around and all. Pic 6 is awesome too, the way orton has a nice grasp on HBK, and HBK with a decent reaction. Ok im not diggin' pic 7 , i know you used string it's just, ortons body is outta the pic,  as is HBK's. pic 8 is good, the way HBK is ready to smack the canvas, and orton still in mid-air  . pic 9 seems decent, Shawns face didn't hit the canvas just his body did, orton seems good. pic 10 is good, the way HBK sells it you potrayed very nicely, and Orton just getting up seems fine. Really nice seq here Dyamez.  |
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Post by Cass on Mar 28, 2007 13:10:37 GMT -5
tbh with you man, i might say this is the worse you have done
i find there to be way too many pics while orton is in the air, and there is almost no impact
but i did like pic 5 though, ortons position was good
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Post by 1wrestlinassociat1 on Mar 28, 2007 13:34:20 GMT -5
tbh with you man, i might say this is the worst you have done i find there to be way too many pics while orton is in the air, and there is almost no impact but i did like pic 5 though, ortons position was good fixed it for you |
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Post by ThrowinUpTheX on Mar 28, 2007 13:40:02 GMT -5
Nice, i think that it couldn't of been a lot better apart from string editing. 9/10 i thought overall it was a great rko, well done.
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Post by Cass on Mar 28, 2007 13:50:10 GMT -5
tbh with you man, i might say this is the worst you have done i find there to be way too many pics while orton is in the air, and there is almost no impact but i did like pic 5 though, ortons position was good fixed it for you you're not cool bud. |
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Dyamez
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Post by Dyamez on Mar 28, 2007 13:57:39 GMT -5
Thanks for the Kind and Honest comments, I don't really care whether they're praise or bash. Always open to criticism. @ GNR Thank you for the detailed comments, if all comments were as detailed as this , posers would surely be encouraged not only to pose more but to improve their work. @cass Hmmm, I think i did far worse than this... LoL.. and thanks for the "encouraging" words.. hehehe @wrestlinassociat Grammar Police? LoL @ this reply |
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Post by 1wrestlinassociat1 on Mar 28, 2007 14:11:33 GMT -5
im sorry for your broken english any way great sequence i attempted an rko and its a lot harder than i thought |
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Post by Cass on Mar 28, 2007 14:15:32 GMT -5
im sorry for your broken english anyway great sequence i attempted an rko and its a lot harder than I thoughtWord.  |
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Post by 1wrestlinassociat1 on Mar 28, 2007 14:16:43 GMT -5
im sorry for your broken english anyway great sequence i attempted an rko and its a lot harder than I thoughtWord. dammit i fixed it just as you posted this  |
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Dyamez
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Post by Dyamez on Mar 28, 2007 14:59:14 GMT -5
back to your regular programming...
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Post by Eyce on Mar 29, 2007 2:21:18 GMT -5
Oh s**t! People using string in a Move for more than one frame! Blasphemy!
Yeah, I'm bored, I'm reduced to replying to poses.
To be honest, I haven't seen a lot of your work, but this is just awesome. Camera angles look beautiful (Although the close-up was totally unnecessary). Although Michaels never left the ground, it does reflect the way several people take it, so I don't give a s**t.
Personally, Pic 5 was Fantabulous, and really well done.
Reflecting on this, I have one question to ask:
How the hell did the X-Division Title teleport to near the turnbuckles?
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Post by Sound888 on Mar 29, 2007 4:17:37 GMT -5
the first few pics are nice, when they are being scrolled down. but when first looked at the pics, i was so confused it wasnt even funny. i hated it, and now that ive seen it scroll, i love it. the flow is just awesome. pic 5 is just a beauty. one of the best, if not, the best pic ive seen on this board for a long long time.. and by long time, i mean over a month.. the problems i have wtih this sequence, like always, is that you over-do the angles. and plus, orton's left arm is the same throughout the sequence. but thats fine, it just looks weird. pic 7 was definatly not needed, it's an extra pic that doesnt fit in with any of the other pics. you just cant go from an overview into a close-up. i will look weird to a lot of people. especially this pose, an rko? there is no reason to have a close-up angle of an rko. maybe a sweet chin music, but not rko. pic 6 is also not needed, it ruins the flow of everything created from the sequence.. just ruins it. if you just had pic 5 connect to pic 8, i bet it would look a lot better.
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Dyamez
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Post by Dyamez on Mar 29, 2007 7:15:47 GMT -5
Wow very detailed replies.. Thank you very much.. EyceThe belt got thrown away because HBK was suprised.. actually i was the one surprised that it was still in the pic.. LoL Thanks for your reply. @hellboy Thanks again, whenever I'm doing poses i'm kinda looking forward on how you'd react... I know you can dish out the nasties but at the same time you really point out what details should be brought out. I've seen your work and you really do pay attention to details, as always i do the pose without watching the move first, i saw raw last weekend and saw how Orton does the RKO, my sequence was decent but nowhere near the actual RKO. The angles are part of my posing, love em or hate em, they're to stay. Thanks again for the replies. Still looking for my next sequence. |
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Post by f1gh7er on Mar 29, 2007 14:23:16 GMT -5
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was amazeing 15/10
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Post by Legend Killer on Jun 20, 2007 15:00:45 GMT -5
love the last pic
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Dyamez
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Post by Dyamez on Jun 20, 2007 16:51:51 GMT -5
Thanks man, but seriously, don't top old threads..
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