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Post by iov on Apr 15, 2007 20:02:50 GMT -5
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Post by iov on Apr 15, 2007 20:17:06 GMT -5
i don't get it if you look at this why don't you leave your opinion on what you think
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Post by classicfan on Apr 15, 2007 20:25:50 GMT -5
...  It has no flow. |
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Post by instigator on Apr 15, 2007 20:30:47 GMT -5
Maybe because your pose was good, but most of the time when a new comer pose's it is crap and you would get allot comments.
Well for the pose and for being new to this you did a hell of a job, and you did two poses at once now thats a good job dude keep it up, also the gore was good, more pose's and you will do stuff much better and have less blur on some pictures.
9/10
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KamiKaze15X
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Post by KamiKaze15X on Apr 15, 2007 20:38:08 GMT -5
Sure.First things first.Really good that you used string,cause alot of new posers dont.You got step one down.Also,you got a background,I like it.Very clean & such.Step 1.5 complete.
Now,1st:You have alot of unnecessary pics in it.Try taking out pic 2,8,14 & 18,& it'll look decent.
2nd,Get a bigger ring.SAR's are very difficult to pose in.Id try getting a RSR,but whatever works for you.
3rd,Clean your area.Take all the weapons you dont need & put them away when you pose,cause you'll have a better view of whats happening.Remember,"A clean posing arena is a Happy posing arena."
Overall:The pose is good.Got some stuff here & there,but nothing major.Work on these problems & you'll be a great poser in no time.
7/10.
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Danny
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Post by Danny on Apr 15, 2007 21:03:41 GMT -5
I have a feeling that this guy is s.i.
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Post by classicfan on Apr 15, 2007 21:05:08 GMT -5
s.i.?
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Post by bluepudding on Apr 15, 2007 21:24:42 GMT -5
Hmm.. Impressive for your first pose. Now, I'm no great reviewer, but here are some things:
1. The sequence itself, IMO, is very confusing.
2. The angle could be better.
3. The editing is fantastic.
4. The 450 Williams did was horrible, you positioned it as if it was going to be a front flip but somehow.. he turns and goes on his stomach. But, it was a very creative and clever idea. So, props on that.
5. The reactions were good.
6. As, ~The Straight-Shot Alchemist~ said, you probably should get a bigger ring because it looks pretty hard to work with.
7. The Gore and the Brainbuster DDT need some work, but they're pretty cool.
8. The Elbow Drop seriously needs working on Sabu's part, but the reaction on Hardy was awesome.
Pretty cool man, pretty cool. You've got lots of different and unique ideas that you put out there, they just some work. Looking forward to your next pose!  |
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Post by iov on Apr 15, 2007 21:30:22 GMT -5
just to let you know what Williams was doing was a move that i got off of watching a too cold Scorpio video that was one of his move and who is s.i. and if i am compared to that person why
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Post by instigator on Apr 15, 2007 21:38:23 GMT -5
He is saying that the "Innovators Of Violence" is me, and if it was me i would rather have this on my account not a new accouint. |
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Post by 6murphy9 on Apr 16, 2007 1:29:04 GMT -5
on pic 18 he petey looks like he has a chair on his head lol but at the begging hard to understand wot was happening but other than that good 7/10 for all
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Post by pwsphil on Apr 18, 2007 19:13:10 GMT -5
a little con fusing at first,and then...ECW ECW ECW!!!
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Doctor Worm
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They Call me Doctor Worm, Good morning, How're you? I'm Dr.Worm.
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Post by Doctor Worm on Apr 18, 2007 22:16:41 GMT -5
Whats Next ?hell im to figure out whats now
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Post by Sound888 on Apr 19, 2007 0:21:03 GMT -5
wow.. that is just.. really bad.
first off, there is way too much stuff going on, i cant even tell what's going on without shifting my eyes right to left every half a second.
you arent that good at positioning, and is obviously using something else to hold your string while you take pics. sabu's positioning sucked in every single pic.
there is too much shiiit in the ring, even if youre just trying to get the "hardcore" atmosphere
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