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Post by Cass on May 11, 2007 22:13:35 GMT -5
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Post by Mr. McCluer on May 11, 2007 22:32:19 GMT -5
two words BAD @$$ bro, dang thats pretty sweet i give you 9.9/10, just for fun, lol, but nice job, keep it up
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Post by Sound888 on May 11, 2007 23:53:10 GMT -5
first off, it's nice to see that you are posing regularly, instead of the five hundred noobs running around this place. this was a good sequence to begin with, but you ruined every single part of it. this is almost as bad as your 450, but i love the mid air shots. i shall start my review. pic two was not necessary at all. pic one flows with pic 3 perfectly. pic 2 is just stalling the sequence. pic 1 shows off that you have tables set up, and the hardys on top of the ladder ready to take a plunge through the stack. pic 2 shows off your.. lego chair? or whatever that thing is. the best part of this sequence has to be pics 3 and 5. pic 4 is great too, but not as good as the other two. pic 3 is just a marvelous picture. it could be your BEST one-pic. well, it could have been better as a one-pic of matt's legs are bent, but i understand that it needs to flow with the motion. it is still my favorite picture of the whole sequence. the angle is phenomenal, the positioning and angle makes this pic so great. pic 5 is great. it looks exactly like something you see on tv, or as sawf calls it, a "picture perfect" pose. jeff's positioning is absolutly PERFECT. the only bad thing about this pic is that matt is kind of tilted to the side, but that doesnt affect the pic at all. it is still great. ok, and now the the bad part of this sequence. first off, i hate your landings, and this one is no different. in your past post, the lung blower had a horrible landing with the table break.. the table break was good, but the positioning of the figures are horrible. this one is no different. pics 6, 7, 8, 9, and 10 are all horrible. pic 6 could have been a great pic, but your positioning on matt made it look so weak. if you had matt on his knees, instead of making him look like.. well.. on his stomach. speaking of which, i see you are finally using the new fc hardys you received. anyways.. i love coca cola. 150% better than pepsi. damn, i want some cola now. the flow of pics 7 and 8 are just horrible, especially with the table breaks. hardy sliding off the tables and the tables sliding off each other look really bad together. the top two tables ruined the whole flow of the table break. the first table with the wwe logo shouldnt have broken, then put back together when it fell, you should have had one peice on the ground already, or maybe just the legs. the second table with the stripes just sliding off the bottom table like that is really bad, it made the whole table break weak. and again with the broken table being put back together when falling. pic 9 is so horrible it made me laugh.. how did matt hardy hurt his head? he landed on his stomach, and somehow he looks like he was hit with a vicious chairshot. the second horribly misleading detail is jeff's legs. take a look at them.. his body is down, but his legs are facing up. pretty weird huh. pic 10... well, the tables look almost brand new.
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Post by Cass on May 12, 2007 12:36:09 GMT -5
Wow, thanks man for the reply.
Yeah the tables were pissing me off so much i just wanted to get it over with, as you told me on aim i might try and redo the tables breaks.
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Post by brm on May 12, 2007 18:43:36 GMT -5
Pretty good effort. Set up pics are nice, and pic 3 is a good start. I would have had Matt pic Jeff up, then jump, but both jumping to start is probably more accurate. You actually changed up Jeff's legs on the way down, and did not just keep using the same mid air shot over and over as they desceneded. Really nice stuff there. Going out of your way for a pose is where it is at, and speaks highly of you. The first table breaks are very video game like. How the table completely collapses on Jeff's knees is not very good, and very Smackdown series. The table riding is ok, but you could have come up with some better stuff. Pretty good though, and better than over half the stuff these days.
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Post by TeamExtreme718x on May 13, 2007 10:34:36 GMT -5
LMAO thats frikkin sick..
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Post by Legend Killer on May 13, 2007 10:42:03 GMT -5
9.9/10.
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Post by Neverfail Nao on May 13, 2007 14:44:48 GMT -5
Only things I didn't like were the table breaking, and the reactions. Most disturbing thing was the table Matt(?) landed on. IT FIXED ON IT'S OWN!!! OMG!!!ONE111ONE!ONE!!!11!
7/10
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Post by SouthAmerican WF'er on May 13, 2007 16:29:40 GMT -5
Witty title, heh. Wow, those angles used in pics two and three really remind me of myself, especially with the figs you used. I really think you should take off pics 5, 7 and 9, they are useless. Other than that, a pretty nice pose. You remind me of an early sawf. Keep doing it, practice is making you much better.
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